FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 102

Abhi...the first part really sad...because family being so insensitive...obviously Bani is having mental trauma...that is why she is behaving so irrationally. Jai is trying his best and Jigyasa really should listen to what Adi says...Jai would never be happy without Bani.

The second part...I am sure Aparajit meant well, but sayings those things to her really has the negative effect on her...Bani needs someone with her...and it needs to be Jai...only he can undo the damage that he really did.

I liked the way Bani's emotions are portrayed. 👏 👏 👏

Hiya,

Just read the alst two parts and they were very well written. Poor Bani, I wonder what's going on in her head.

Aparajit makes me laugh the way that he talks to her. Is there some history between them because it seems as though Aparajit is treating her like his little sister.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

wonderful part pls cont soon....

Abhi wonderful parts....loved how Jai is trying to take care of Bani.....but Bani's behaviour is confusing so are Jai's families....Bani actually needs Jai right now with her who can make her understand how he feels by showing his feelings for her.......Bnai's emotions beautifully portrayed 👏 👏 👏

Hey Abhi,

Great update! AD's words really got into B, she is now trying to be independent again and letting J go to work... though think she is still emotional unstable...plus J hasn't told her about the pregnancy...

Do update soon, thanks.

Have a great weekend!

Nimmie

great part.....liked Jai's concern towards Bani......Aparajit is quite right....but I still don't like him for slapping Jai 😆 😆 please continue....will be waiting for your next update......

greeat part albeit short.. please continue soon

i'm glad that bani is understanding bit by bit and changing also..great update even thoug it was short!
continue soon

nadia 😛

Nice update.. Whatever Aprajit told Bani was quite right and looks Bani understood too but did she really understand or is it just a step to keep Jai away to let him to do what he wants as she thinks he is not happy with her or this marriage..

Jai was sounding so cute and deep in love when he said he has to be with her.

You know sometimes I see myself in Bani.. I too get really irritated for no reason behave so irrationally and impulsive thank God I have people who loves me enough to tolerate my all rash behaviour..

Hope they will resolve their issues soon .. and start dreaming about their future lives together including their kids.

Hey Abhi,

caught up with both of the last update,beautifully written.from Bani's fears of coming back to this house to Jai trying his best to make her feel comfortable.hoping bani slowly starts to understand that Jai loves her and cant live without her. he still has to break the news of her pregency to her.liked Aparajit talk with bani, even though she got irriated of him. 😆 😆 lookin forward to the next part. 👏

preet 😳