FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 98

It was wonderful update Abhi... 👏
Poor Bani... looks like she is not well... Hope JW help her to get better... 👏

lovely and long update... thanks... 👏 👏 👏 ... do cont soon ...

that was a wonderful part but why is jai hiding about her pregnancy from bani i think she need to know but then again she does not look like she is in stable mind right now pls cont soon.....

Wow lots of drama happened in this update, sorry to say but Bani needs to comeout of this bubble/shell she has created around her, I understand the way Bani has lived her childhood with her parents and sisters, whom she thought they didn't care for her and later comes Walia family in the picture who love her and care for her and Bani becomes so attached to Krishna and Jai. Whom later become the only people she "thought/imagined" about and comunicated through her mind... I mean Bani needs to live for herself too, not only think that she has done anything wrong to Jai and his family, by living in there. I mean she'd have self confidence and self esteem I don't know if you understand what I'm trying to say about the character of Bani, I don't like her character nor Jai's. They're so distant and not so comunicative even living around one roof....
I love the story but please I didn't mean to offend you by any way or another . You have written it so beautifully the perspective of two people who love eahother yet are apart, I like it very much. g8t update👏 👏 👏
PS. please don't mind my words, please please please 😛

Awesome update.
Can't wait for the next part.

Please continue soon.

pooja

nice part Abhilasha.......there are some changes in Bani.....can't wait for your next update.......

great part, Are u settled in the new house. You must be exausted, My husband has a moving job and i know how tiring it is to move.

cant wait for the next part.

Bani has built this wall around herself that needs to be broken slowly but steadily and Jai needs to be the one to make the start. Am glad that Jai has realized that he is at fault here for Bani's condition and am glad that Bani got a good tongue lashing from Pushkar..she should also relaize that the solution to every problem in life is not by running away now I sincerely hope that the family tries to take extra care of Bani and I hope that Jigs does not try to be a cow of the highest order 😡

hey Abhi,hope you are all moved into your new house. 😃

another amazing update,the way you etched Bani's confusion to Jai's feeling loved it, loved it. Bani surely needs to come out this self made shell and I Hope Jai really helps her with it.loved Aparajit and Rano, there characters are soo well etched out.hope its Jai to tell her abt their child.lookin forward to readin the nxt part. 👏

preet 😳

Hi Abhi,

How are you? Hope you have settled in your new place.

Again, what a great writing! You brouhgt so much drama into the hospital scene, starting from Jai to Pushkar. I loved Puskhar's tougue lashing Bani, he seems the right person to do so, especially with Bani.

Bani is leaving in world of illusion where her only good memory is being her childhood with Jai's family. Jai has realise this and bring out, which can't do without professional help. He hasn't told Bani about her preganancy, which show that he is definitely needs help. Hope Jigs, talk it out with Jai before doing something silly which might hurt Bani further.

I loved the way to wave in the AD and Rano's characters perfectly into the story.

Looking forward for ur updated soon and thanks.

Have a great Wednesday!

Nimmie