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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 6-

Mousi- Hello Daksh

Daksh-(please leave a message after the beep)-In answering machine-Hello apne sahi jage phone laagaya hai per galath samepar … main iss waqt Bombay se bhar hoon.. Please message chooreyeh aur main vapass akar apko phone karoonga.

Mousi-(hangs up) Hay Bagwan yeh sab kya ho raha hai… ab main kya karoon.. iss shahar main main sirf ek hi insann ko zanthi thi.. liken ab voh bhi yahan nahi hai, Main Kya karoon…kiski madath lo..?? (is talking to the idol of god)

Aditiya-Main appki madath karoon ga mousi…

Mousi-(turns around to see aditiya) Aditiya beta tum…?

Adi- Hain mousi main, Main Bani ki madath karoonga

(both sit.. while Mousi is still in shock, Aditiya explain him how Jigz is behind all this)

Adi- Mousi.. humhe soch samajkar action lenah hoga, Maine iss shahar ka sab se acha vakeel(lawyer) rakha hai..Aur mujhe pura yakeen hai ki hum he jeethengeh..

Mousi- Hum nahi beta Sachayeeh jethegi… ( has a relieved look on her face)

Adi- Hain Mousi… app ajj aram se soona.. aur kal subhe main yahaan aonga.. aur phir hum Bani se milne gayeengeh…

Mousi- Nahi beta mujhe Bani se abhi milne jana padega.. voh kitne parechann hogi…

Adi- Liken Mousi.. Abhi itni raat ko???

Mousi- Haan mujhe abhi jaana hoga…Tum yahan raho ganga ke sath aur main ga kar athi hoon…

Adi- Hum ganga ko gadi main he le gathe hain.. aur phir main app donno ko vapiss bhi liaonga..

Mousi- teek hai.. hain ganga ko le kar athi hoon.

(mousi brings ganga out in her arms.. and then Adi insists on holding her.. and they go to the jail in the car)

Adi- Legiye Jail agaya..

Mousi- main athi hoon..

(goes inside.. and asks the inspector if she could meet bani.. Inspector is hesitant at first then allows seeing Mousi's crying face)

Bani- (talking to herself) Meera ka murder ho chukahai? Mathlab Meera mar chuki hai ? Liken mujhe patha hai ki maine meera ko nahi mara hai toh phir.? Meera ka kyon dushman hoga..?

Mousi- Bani..(slides both her hands threw the jail slots.. to touch Banis face)

Bani- Mosui(crying) App yahan.. toh ganga ke pass kyon hai..

Mousi- voh Aditiya ke pass hai.. bhar gadi main..

Bani- Aditiya Uncle ke pass??(confused)

Mousi- Aditya kud mere pass aya aur tere madath karna chatha hai.. voh mujhe batharaha tha ki iss sab ke peche uss.. uss Jigyasa ka hath hai..( with disgust)

Bani- Kya Jigyasa aunty neh yeh sab kuch kiya.. Liken kyun..

Mousi- Patha nahi uss ladki ke dimak main kya chatha hai.. voh asi hi hai.. Chiii.. mujhe soch kar bhi gin athi hai.. ki apni hi bhabi ke koon ka ilsam tuj par lagayah…

Jigz- Hi.. Arre Mousi app.. yahan.. app mujhe pehle bathadethi main havaldar se appke liye kursi mangwadoon.

Mosui in Disgust… not looking at Jigz- Kal ka case hum hi jeethen geh

Jigz- Kal ka case hum hi jeetengeh(Mocing her) App kal case larenge..

Mousi- Hain aur Aditiya mere sath hai

Jigz- Oh hoo.. iss he liye ithni awazz nikal rahi hai mousi..Aditiya appke sath hai..Chaloo.. mujhe path hai ki appki Bani ko tho pansi ho kar rahi gi. Ok toh main appko ek clue de de thi hoon.

karuna- Kya tumhara dimak karab hai... actually voh to hai,..

Jigz-Ok toh Maousi yeh suniyeh(gices cell phone..)

Mosui- Hello..

Prerson--Heloo Jigyasa aunty..kya app hain.. mujhe yahan kab tak raheana hoga..

Mousi- Drops the phone..

Jigz- Kya hua shock laga...

Mousi- Yeh.. Yeh.. toh

Bani-kya hua mousi.. kyon tha..

Mousi---Yeh toh.. Yeh toh Mmmeera ki awaz thi...

Bani- Kya..

Jigz-Lets go Karuna..and Good Luck Bani.. urff Mathili..

Karuna-- (as going voh Meera thi.. Kaise hai.. aur Go.( almost gaying Goa)

Jigz- Chup .. kyun tumhare moo se bakwass he nikaltha hai..

Karuna- Sorry.. adath hai...

******Will Mousi.. fing Meera.. or will Bani be doomed .. and get hung**********Keep reading to find out...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
It just keeps getting better and better. 😊
You're turning me into a FF addict. 😆
Some of the dialogs are really deep and funny.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
Yup.. realyy good.. loved it.. Want to see.. if they are able to find Meera...
**I cant believe I just said that... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
hey!! it was a veryyyyy gud part!!!
ab najaane kaun case jeetega>??


but it was a very gud part! we can imagine eveythin just by readin it!!
awesum 1! 👏

contd soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Part-7

Bani- Yeh karuna anuty kya kaherahe thi?

Mosui- Pathanahi.. tu kyun usski baathoon mein dilchaspi lethi hai?..Abhi humhe yeh soch na hai ki .. Meera ki awaaz maine kaise sune jab ki voh mar chuki hai..?

Bani- Patha nahi.. Shayad Jigyasa anuty humhe confuse karnachathi hain???

Inspector- Maam sunhiyeh visiting ka time hogaya.. chaloo..

Mousi- kya main thora aur time bithasak thi hoon.. please..

Inspector- Kamal hai aaj kal achahi ka zamana nahi raha.. maina kaha visiting ka time katham.. app chale..

Mosui- (hopelessly) ji.. Chal Bani mein chalthi hoon .. ( pats her face in sympathy) Kal tera case hai.. soja..

Bani- Hmmm.. App apna aur ganga ka kahyal rakna…

Mousi-hmmmm.. bye.. beta..

Inspector-Haan Haan booth hogaya hai chalo..

Mousi walks to the car opens the door and sits in the front seat next to adi

Aditiya- Kya hua Mousi app parechan lagrahe hain..

Mousi – hmm adi .. kya karoon kuch samajmain he nahi atha.. Jigyasa aye thi aur usne kaha ki Bani ko pansi hogi.. aur phir kisika number milaya apne phone main, aur mujhe diya, voh awazz. .Mmera ki thi.

Adi- ( in shock) Meera ki..??Kaise.. voh toh.. Oh my god.??Mousi exactly kya hua tha?

Mousi- Voh aye thi aur phir usne kaha ki voh toh jeetegi.. phir usn kuch clue ki baath ki thi

Adi- Clue? Kaise clue.. Mousi sochiyeh..

Mousi- (straining her mind) Usne kaha ki main appko ek clue dethi hoon.. aur phir usne meera ka phone milayah..

Adi-( feeling very achieved.. and like he is getting to the end) aur Meera neh kya kaha??

Mousi- Meera neh kaha ki .. ki

Adi- Kya..

Mousi- voh Hello Hello kahe rahi thi aur phir usne kaha ki mujhe yahan kitni daar aur rahena pade ga?

Adi- Kahan raheane ki baath kar rahi thi ? Kahan hogi Meera?

Mousi- Adi kya tumhe sach main lagtha hai ki Meera zinda hai?Yeh shayad yeh Jigyasa ki koi nahi Chaal hogi?

Adi- Main patha lagatha hoon..

Finally start driving.. And when they are more than half way home Ganga wakes up/..

Ganga- Main kahan hoon?

Mousi- Beta voh hum drive per gaye the…

Ganga- par inthni raath drive…kyun..

Mousi- beta voh hum asie hi.. tu soja

Ganga- Mummy kaise hain..

Mousi- Voh teek hai.. appko miss karthi hain..

Ganga- Mummy ne kya ki .. jis ki wagje se Police uncle unhe pakad ke legaye..

Adi- Apki mummy neh kuch bhi nahi kiya hai.. uncle galthi se unhe le kar gaye hain.. aur kal apki mummy apke pass hogi..

Ganga-( with a happy tone) Sachi uncle…

Car stops and Mousi and Ganga get out…

Mousi- Ganga beta tu under jaa.. mujhe Adi se kuch bath karne hai..

Ganga- Ji Dadi…Main under jathi hoon

Mosui folds her hands and looks to the ground

Mosui- Beta tune Ganga ko toh kahediya ki uski maa kal uske pass hogi.. Liken hum yeh kaise karengeh..

Adi –Dekheyeh Mousi humhe patha hai ki Meera zinda hai toh humhe sirf ushe dundna hai aur phir court ke samne lanah hai.. Phir Bani chootgaye gi…

Mousi looks up

Mousi- Beta kahane kithna assan hai yeh kaheana liken karna booth mushkill hai, (Helplessly) Kahan Se layengey hum Meera ko.. Aur humhe kya patha.. voh shayad Zinda bhi na ho.. Shayad Jigyasa neh humhe kisi jal main pasadiya..

Adi- Dekeheyeh Mousi jaise app batharahehain ki Meera ek responsive conversation derahethi.. Mujhe to aisa lagtha hai ki Meera Zinda hai.. aur Jigyasa se mujhe shayad kuch patha chal sach tha hai.

Mousi- Per jigyasa kya tumhe bathaegi??

Adi- Ek bath hai jigyasa main, voh booth over confident hai.. aur ishe over confidence main akar usne apko voh phone sunde diya.

Mousi- Mere pass kuch bolneke liye nahi hai.

Ganga- Dadi! Dadi! Mere razaye kahan hai..

Mousi- Ayye.. Aditiya main chalthi hoon..

Adi- Hain teek hai mousi…

Adi gets in car and thinks hard

Adi- to himself- Mujhe Bani se baath karne chahe, kya patha shayad voh mujhe kuch aur bathasakthi hai jo Mousi neh nahi bathaya…

At Police station…

Aditiya sits at the table

Adi- Excuse me mujhe Bani Dixit se milnah hai..

Hawaldar- Kya? Sab apka demak toh tikanhe hai? Apne time dehka hai? Raath se ek bagraheinhain,…aur visiting hours katham ho chukein hain…

Adi- App kam ki baath kijiye.. kitna?

Hawaldar-(leans to the other side of the table) 500 rupee per ganta..

Adi- (takes out his wallet) Hands him a load of cash…

Hawaldar- (He grabs the cash and his eyes get wide open) 5000 rupee Hay la..Kya baath hai sab.. App toh 5 guna zyada dethe ho.. aur un karoos madam se jitna mangggo uthna dene main unki nani marthi hain..

Adi- is about to get up-then he realizes that, that women might be- Kya .. konsi aurath???

Hawaldar-upon realizing his mistake- Kya konsi aurath kaise aurath.. maine kuch nahi kaha.. App ko Bani Dixit se milna hai na.. Voh. Voh cell number 23 main hai…

Adi- Kya naam hai uss Aurath ka.. Kya usne Bani Dixit ke case main tumhari madath ki hai…

Adi is upset and yet happy feeling that he is close to the truth…

Hawaldar- Voh Voh… aurath..

****Kya Hawaldar Aditya ko sachayi bathadega.. ki usne Jigyasa se paise liyehain .. aur Meera Zinda hai..

Yah kya Jigyasa ki jeet hogi..?

Case kyon jeetegah…Jigz yah Bani….*****

Keep reading to find out…

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
hey nice part
oh bani is in prison 😡
Adi is nearly close to the truth 😃
hope he will be able to get bani out soon


plz cont

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Hey Nikita.. Thanks for updating.. great part.. Make all the problems go away.. and make JB togther.. pleazzee... soon.. right..
Manpreet..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey for all the people who read .. I refuse toupdate till I see more response.. The views are sooo many .. any response.. very few.. I know more people read.. SO doo oComent..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nikita.. mein agayi.. 😉 😆 .. awwwnnn mujhe pura yakeen hai ke bani ki jeet hogi.. iss jigz ka kuch karna padega.. bani next time instead of trying to kill meera.. KILL jigz.. that will be a favour for all of us Ksians.. hadh hoti hai.. anywayz great FF and great part.. just read it.. yes i noe bani did not kill meera but meera is alive and trying to get rid of our bani.. but our bani will be proven not guilty.. bani u have to prove to them that ganga is jais child and that meera 😡 is alive..this is all jigz and meeras plan.. anywayz great part.. continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Hey great Part..👏 I really hope that the Police guard tells Adi that Jigz was the one who gave him the moeny and then Adi finds out that Meera's in Goa.😛. and then JB meet and the end.. YEAH..😆 😃I hope soo.. or they could have a sad ending and they die.😭

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