FF-Two Paths/ending/pg27(5/5/08)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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HEY TO eVERYone.. I refusee to update.. untill I see a mrore better respnose.. SOOO comment if u want continuation😛

---NIkita Khandelwal

Two paths?Part 2 is alreadyy up on the bottom....

Please comment because only on public demand wil I continue.. it will turn out pretty interesting.. This will show the diff faces of bani Meera wiill be murdered.. just as a heads up.. soo want more all u have to do is leave a thank u or something.. just takes 2 secs.. I see hundreds of view but 2 responds.. so please people like writing and hwen they get positive encouragement they fell nice.. ENJOY...

The wind was crisp tonight as the moonlight lit the halls of the famous business tycoon Jai walia and his wife Meera Walias anniversary. It was there first and as many hoped last. Bani as usually was the waitress at this grand event. Today before coming to work all she knew was that it was a grand event in Walia mansion. Bani although very sweet by nature, she did tend to get a bit testy when required. Jai as usual was acting lovey dovy toward Meera when ever bani was looking. Today when it was announced that it was their 1st anniversary Bani had a huge shock and dropped the tray with the drinks. Jai immediately approached her and shrieked what the hell iska bill kyon de ga, tumarah boyfriend, and at that moment.. Bani did what no one in that party hall expected her to do.. She grabbed Jai and took him out into the parking lot. He immediately asked what the hell is this tumhari kya ocuada( status). Bani shouted and said mere koi ocuad nahi hai apke samneh, kyun ki kahan mein asman se bhi upper, aur kahan tum, mere joothi ke necheh bhi tumhari koi jagga nahi. .Jai shouted back, what tumhari yeh himat.. Raised his hand and couldn? follow threw.. Bani asks kya hua kyun nahi mara maro.. Tumne dosri shaddi ki aur maine mosi aur ganga ke ilaya kahin aur dekha tak nahi? It immideatly started rainig.. Jai replied Kya ganga tumhari beti hai. Tumhari aur tumhare boyfriend ki.. Bani in his face shouted and said.. Kya appko itne waqt se asia hi lagtha tha ki Ganga Daksh ki beti hai.. App ka Problem kya hai..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey,

great start👏

pls continue soon cant wait to see wat happens next

bye n tc

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay so this is part 2 of Two paths.. Which is being written because I got postive and some suggestions.. So hope you enjoy… and if any questions please feel free to pm me or here and I will clear any questions u may have.....

Jai- Mera problem, tumhara problem kya hai..

Bani-mere problem yeh hai ki maine app se pyar kiya(breaksdown on the ground)

As of now Banis clothes are socking wet and now partly muddy.

Jai-(sees meera coming) oh honey… (walks toward meera)

Meera-app yahan barish mein kya kar rahein hai??

Jai- voh yeh stupid waitress.. Mujhe yahan le ayye.. Anyway ..chaloo party mein chale..

Meera-(looks in Banis direction) hmm.. Chaloo.

Bani- yelling at the empty sky.. Kyun mujhe pyar mein dhoka milla.. Kyun Mr.Wallia neh dobarra shadi ki.. Ajj mein Bani yeh wada karthi hoon. Ki Meera ko mein nahi choorongi.. Use mera sindoor cheen ne ki saza toh millegi…

Back at Walia Mansion…

Lights go off

Jai-what the hell is this

A yell in the atmosphere Jai… and the voice faded away.

Jai- Meera! Meera!

Lights go back on..

Jai- where is meera

Butler- Maine unhe uper jathehua dehka..

Everyone goes to the roof…they see meera.. With blood stains all over.. Mein mein .. Bani. And she collapsed into jai's arms..

Jigyasa comes and shocked…

Jigz- What meera bhabi ki death..oh my god… my ambulance ko phone kar thi hoon. (calling) umm hello ambulance hain voh meera walia ki death hogai hai..

Police comes into the house..

Police-to jai- abhi abhi post mortum ki report agayee hai aur aske hisab se Meera Walia ko 4 bar knife se maara gaya tha… Toh humhe patha lagana hoga k iMeeraji ka koni kyon hai… kya app mein se mujhe kuch information de sak tha hai…?

Jigz-haan voh..

Dadi- Jigyasa tum kya kehneh wali ho..

Police- please don't interupt..

Jigz- hain toh were was I meera bhabhi ke marneh se phele unho neh kisika naam liya tha..

Police- kya whose name did she take.

Jigz-umm hain Bani bhabi ka..

Police- Bhabi..

Jigz- Haan voh jai bhaya ki 1st wife thi..

Police- do u think that bani killed Meera

Jigz- well yah.. I mean…voh meera bhabi se jealous thi…

Jai- what rubbish

Police- dekiyeh humhe ek gawahi mill gaye aur ab hum Bani walia ko arrest karengeh…

Jigz- oh really..

Dadi- tu sach mein dayan hai..

Outside walia mansion

Police- well jigyasa ji app ka kam toh hogaya..

Jigz- aur humari pyari meera bhabi kasie hain..

Police- voh Goa mein haan.. Aur bani key pansi(hanging) ke baad wapass agayegi..

Jigz- yeh lo apke 2lak rupees.

Police- thank u mamm

Jigz - no problem itnah assan that meera bhabi ko kehna ki bani ke pansi ke baad jai bayhya unke ho jayengeh. Aur phir yeh bani naam ka kanta mere zindagi se chala gayega… evil laughter….

Edited by nikitaic - 17 years ago
Niroo thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i hate this meera and jigs
wth.. i hope.. jai saves bani..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey
jigs and meera are so 😡 😡 hate them


plz do cont


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing storyy
please do continue sooon😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing story pls cont soon.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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o man.. tell me jai was listening to everything.. o god.. anywayz great part.. continue soon yaar..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3
Meera- calling Jai-(Jigz sees the phone and pics up) Hello..
Jigz- Hello kyon hai…
Meera- Main Meera
Jigz- What.. (looks around to make sure no one is watching..)rooko mein terrace per jathi hoon. (Jigz walks up the stairs and goes on the terrace and locks the door.)
Hain bolo..
Meera- voh mujhe Jai se baath karne thi…
Jigz-(mimics her) Mujhe Jai se baath karne hai..Tumhara demak karab hogaya hai kya… Tum marchukiho.. Marahua insaan phone per baath kaise kar sak tha hai.
Meera- liken apne jai ko nahi bathaya ki hum ne yeh sab plan kiya tha.
Jigz- oh Meera tumhara demak bilkul karab hai.. Dehko tum jai ke kareeb hona chathi ho na..
Meera-( in a soft voice) haan…
Jigz- Dehko tumneh marne se phele kaha "Bani" aur yeh hi humara plan tha.. Ab voh Bani ko arrest karengeh aur per..
Meera(scared) aur phir kya..? Usse kuch hoga tho nahi na..
Jigz- Nahi Nhai mere pyari meera bhabi dehko Jai ke dil mein us ke liye aur nafrat bhar jayeji aur hum bani ko India se dur bejdege.. Aur phir tum Jai bhayeya aur Ganga sab saath saath rehenge…
Meera- Ok phir badmein baath karengeh
Jigz- Hain Bhabi bye..
Talking to her self- Hain bhabi baad mein baath karengi taki mera plan karab hogai.. (drops phone off the terace) opps sorry.. Ab Meera bhabi kaise phone karengi.. (laughs to herself…)
The door to being turned.. And is now opended.
Jigz starts crying outloud
Jigz- Mere Meera bhabi ko humse kyun chenliya.. Ab mere Jai bhaya akele ho jaengeh….
Aditiya- (Grabs Jigz hand and says) Jai shayad tumhare jaal mein pas gaya hai.. Liken yeh maat bolo Jigyasa ki mein tumhara pati tha.. Mein tumhari rug rug se vakiv honn. Tum Bani ko pasaneki koshish kar rayheho…??
Jigz- chaloo yumne mujhe pakarlia.. Wow I'm soo scared.. Bolo kya kar lo ge tum….Meera bhabi tu mar chuki ha… tu tum kaise sabith karogeh ki Bani neh Meera Bhabi ko nahi mara..??
Aditiya- Mein to sachaye ka patha lagakar rahoon ga liken jab tumhari poll kul gayegi tu tum kya karo gi Jigyasa.. Bagwaan se daro….
Jigz leaves and goes to her room.. Aditiya thinks to himself..
Adi- Agar Bani neh Meera ko nahi mara toh phir Meera ko kis neh mara… Meera ka koi dushman to nahi tha…???shayad mujhe Jai se baath kar ne Chaheyeh…

What will happen to Bani.. Will she die.. For a crime she didn't do.. Will jai find out ganga is his daughter..will Jigz succeed or will Aditiya find out the truth.. Keep reading.. And leave ur comment for me to continue..
Edited by nikitaic - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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if bad happen then samjo 😡
davia

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