FF-Two Paths/ending/pg27(5/5/08) - Page 5

WOW!!! 😲
What an amazing part and one of your longest.
Hope to see more interesting ideas pour into this fanfic.
Loved all the details and character expressions.
Please continue cuz your fanfic is the greatest! 😃

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aur kya kahu???

kash yeh idea ekta ko aata aur woh yahi karti aaj KS mein!!

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What... no updatess

till more response...👎🏼

WTH.. 🤢

awwwwww pleaseeeee 😭

okay by Saturday..

U have a week...😛

NIHAALP2FAN

hey Nikita😳

great parts👏

just read all ur parts n must say its great liked it vry much..........

this Jai make me sick😡

ganga ko Daksh aur Bani ki beti maanta hai😡

plzzzzz update soon

bye n tc

Ejzoo (Nikita)

Hey to all who keep coming back to read.. I have made like anew thing.. in which I will PM all the commenters when I post a new part.. so u dont have to look 4 it..

--Anywayz.. thanks for wonderful comments. everyone.. please continue reading.. well KS is going really well and hope JB always remain together...

--Will post next Sat next..

Part 8-

Hawaldar-Voh Aurath unka naam mujhe nahi patha

Aditiya- Kya.. Shit.. Tum ithna toh bathasak the ho ki voh tumhe paise kyun dethi thi.. mera mathlab hai kit um uska konsa kam karthe the..

Hawaldar- ( in a scared tone)-Voh.. Bani Dixit.. unke liye.. jis case ke liye voh under hain..

Aditiya-Haan…

Hawaldar-Voh.. Mrs.Walia.. ZINDA hain..

Aditiya-What?,…Liken.. Kahan hain..

Hawaldar-Tells Adi the whole entire story.. about Goa, and about the fake ambulance,…

Aditiya immediately goes to the airport, and gets on a plane for Goa.

The next day…

Bani(to masi)-Adi uncle kahan hai..

Masi-Don't worry voh jaldi ajjaengeh..

The Lawyer comes and all go to court. When Masi arrives she sees that Jai and Jigz are already their, and looking pretty over confident.. Masi looks worried thinking where Adi could be.

Meanwhile..

Adi is in Goa.. he goes to Jigz favorite resort, and looks for Meera everywhere.. but to his luck he couldn't find her.. As he was about to leave he spots Meera going to her room..Adi runs after her, upstairs and finally they confront each other.

Adi-(out of breathe)-Meera.. tum.. Zinda..

Meera and Adi go inside the room.

Meera-( afraid)-Haan..

Adi-Liken.. kyat um janthi ho ki Bani jail main hai?

Meera-(looks down)-Haan..

Adi-(says it louder)-Tumhare murder ke ilsam main Bani jail main hai..

Meera-( snaps)-Toh acha hai na.. Main Jai ki pathni hote hue bhi Jai ki pathni kabhie bhi nahi thi.. Jain neh humehsa Bani ko chaha.. Bani ko usske galthi ki saza milni chahi yeh..

Adi-(frustrated)-Konse.. Galthi.. tum toh Zinda ho..

Meera-Liken mere aur Jai ke beech main anne ki saza toh use zaroor milegeh.. Aur wase bhi ussne Jai ke bachoon ko mara tha..

In Court-

Judge-Let the case begin..

Goa-

Adi-Tum yahan Jigyasa ke kaheain par aye ho.. Aur agar Krishna aur Atharva Jai ke bache the toh Bani bhi unki Maa thi.. Ek maa apne bache ko kyun mare ge.. ?

Meera- yeh sab nahi patha mujhe..

Adi-(watching Meera trying to escape her eyes from him)-Kyun nazar nahi milasak thi tum mujhese.. Ganga.. kya hoga usska..

Meera-Mujhe use koi mathlab nahi..

Adi-Fine.. Liken tumhe Jai se toh mathlab hai na.. Jab Jai ko patha chaleag.. ki Bani ko tumne Jail baja.. aur uski mouth ki zimedar tum ho.. toh Jai tumhara kya hal karegah yeh toh tum sooch bhi nahi sak thi…

Meera-Bani ki mouth??

Adi-Aur nahi toh kya? Bani ko ajj pansi( hung) ho gaye gi..

Meera-Liken Jigyasa anuty neh toh kaha tha ki.. voh Bani aur Ganga ko dor beejdegi..

Adi-Jigyasa jaise aurath par tumneh barosa kiya?

Court-

Jigz lawyer-Bani Dixit neh Meera Walia ka koon kiya.. Meera walia neh yeh baath kud kahethi ki.. Bani neh unka koon kiya.. Marne se pehele of course..

Main Jigyasa Walia ko bulanah chahoongah..

Jigz stands in the katgara..

JL(Jigz lawyer)-Meera Walia neh marthe hue kya kaha tha.. /

Jigz-Ki.. ki.. Bani bhabi neh unka koon kiya tha..

JL-That's all me lord.. Jab Meera Walia neh kud kaha tha.. toh phir..

BL-Please continue..

JL-Ji.. Jigyasa ji.. kya Bani aur Meera mein koi problems thi..

Jigz- Well of course.. do sauthanoon ke beech main fighting toh constant thi.. uss din Meera aur Jai ki anniversary party main bhi,Bani bhabi neh bouth shor kiya tha.. voh Jai bhaya ko bhi bahar lekar gaye thi.. Per fource obviously..

Jl-Well me lord, Jigyasa Walia neh appko kud bathaya ki.. Meera aur Bani ka kuch kass acha rishtha nahi tha..

Judge-Adalath 5 hours baad reinstate kare gi..

5 hours later

BL-Well unhone yeh toh nahi kaha tha ki Meera Walia ka koon Bani Dixit neh hi kiya tha..Me lord .. Kya main Rano Walia ko stand par bulasaktha hoon?

Judje-Ijazath hai.. ( you have permission)

BL- Ok Rano ji.. kya app bathasak thi hain.. ki kya Bani kisi ka koon kar sak thi hai..

Rano-Nahi..

Bl-You may leave..

Just like that Bani's Lawyer called every member of the family and besides Karuna everyone favored Bani.. And now BL called Jai to the stand.

Bl-Kya appko lagtha hai.. Mr.Walia ki Bani neh appki wife ko mara hai.?

Jai-Ji haan..

Bani-(looking at him.. suna suna lamha lamha plays, and Bani and Jai both remember the times they spent together)

JL-Mr.Walia.. Kya app bathasak thein hain.. ki aapko assa kyun lagtha hain.. I mena Bani Dixit neh Meeraji ka koon kyun kiya hai..

Jai-(shouting)-Because shes a murderer.. She killed my kids Krishna and Atharva.. and then cheated on me with Daksh.. and now.. she wasn't happy enough ruining my life.. that she has come back.. only to kill my wife..

Bani-(Suna suan stopped playing and Bani fell to the groung crying..)-Bas.. main aur nahi le sak thi.. Haan,. Maine.. Bani Dixit neh hi Meera ka koon kiya hai.. Please Mr.Walia.. mere bachoon ko beech main math layyee…

Jugde-Was that a confession Ms.Dxit.

Bani-(still crying)-Haan..

Jugde-MS.Bani dixit ko Pansi ki saza sunayeh jathi hai..😭

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Dont be tooo upset.. The pain u have reading I have writting.......🤢

Nikita..

Hi just caught up with the whole thing
well not really pleased with what i have read
plz not you can do this....hope Adi and Meera comes their on time can save her.
I want Jai to regret and want him unhappy...jigs to suffer....this is not fair.
plz cont. soon

ohhhh nooooo u cant let Bani be hanged 😡
i was waiting to read a very filmy part where Adi shouts to stop the hearing and has Meera behind him 😕 but nothing like that happend
please dont let Bani die

plz cont soon


Taj

wow so much happened wonderful parts loved it i feel sad for bani yeh jai ko brains kab ayengi pls cont soon........

that is really sad.
not cool at all
continue soon please

niks.. yeh tumne kya kiya.. 😭 😭 😭 .. omg.. adi jaldi wapas ajaoo.. bani needs u.. and bring that dumb head meera with u tooo.. hurrry.. great part hun.. continue soon..