FF-Two Paths/ending/pg27(5/5/08) - Page 3

That was awesome!
You understand the characters so well and express their emotions perfectly.
I am sooo looking forward to what happens next. 😃

Ananna.. love ur signature.... 😉 .. thanks 4 comments...

hi di!!
those were wonderful parts!!!
meera aur jigz ki to.......... 😡
well,
last part ke dialouges were amazin "har kam ke pichche wajaah" then all the adi's dialouges!!

good goin!!!

jaldi jaldi contd karna! 😃

Part 5-

Jai-ok ok please ab jao..

Adi-walks out

Jai- Pathnahi mere ghar mein kitne mathlabi log rethein hain.. mere he thali mein kathe hain aur Bani ka jhandha le kar goom the hain…

(Jai stops thinking and falls asleep on his famous chair)

In Chawl…

Mousi-(sitting by window) Kitna badal gaya hai Muna.

Bani- Kisse bath kar rahe ho Mousi?

Mousi- Apne roti hui kismet se bath kar ra he hoon.

Bani-(keeps hand on Mousi's shoulder, both share an embrace)

Ganga-(running) Mummy, Mummy..

Bani- Kya hua Ganga?

Ganga- Mummy vo, police aye hai.

Mousi- Kya? Police !!!

Bani- main dehk thi hoon

All go out to see the police, in their living room.

Police- Madam mere pass Bani Dixit ke nam ka arrest warrant hai.

Mousi-Kya, kis buna per.. kiya kya hai Bani neh…

Police- Murder…

Bani- Kya.. maine Murder?

Mousi- kis ka?

Police- Meera Walia ka murder?

Mousi- Kya/

Police- Eh… sab chup.. har koi Kya, Kya, Kya bolraha hai.. Maine kaha ki Bani Dixit ko arrest karna hai, toh karna bus…

(A havaldar arrest bani and back in Walia house Atharva and Krishna's picture falls and breaks)

Mousi- Bani ..(she runs after Bani…then runs back to ganga and hugs her)

Mousi- Ganga tu chinta math kar.. Voh jo Police uncle hai na unhe tere mummy se kuch kam tha…

Ganga-(wipes her tears) voh Police uncle mummy ko Bani kyun ke rah he the? Meri mummy ka nam to Mathilli hai na??]

Mousi-(quickly wipes her tears) hain beta who yeh Mumbai mein Mathilli ko Bani kethe hain..

Ganga- Kyun?

Mousi- Beta voh unka work name hai..

Ganga- Per work mein dusra naam kyun de the hain?

Mousi-Beta abhi app so jao bad mein bath karenge…

Mousi puts Ganga to sleep and calls Daksh…

Will Daksh be able to save Bani… Or will Jigz succeed in her mission to get Bani hanged?? Comment for continuation….And thanks too alll of those who comment....😊

****** My FF is offically Dedicated to Preeti di, user name-Ananna... and Nygirlbal........******************************

Hey nice part
i hope Daksh will be able to save bani
and jai 😡 to find out the truth

plz cont

Taj

Great job.. Lets see what Daksh can doo.... 😆

Yup lets see what Daksh can do.. Cant wait please update soonn.... 😛

bani work name??? 😆 well achcha dialouge tha

well thanx for dedicatin that part to me!! 🤗
loved the part and it was awesum as usual!! 👏 👏

jaldi jaldi aage badho!!
im waitin

Thank you for the dedication!
You are awesome! You make my life so meaningful.
LOL! Just kidding. 😆
It was a great part. I'm looking forward to seeing
what happens next. 😊

Will Bani get out of jail?
Will Jai find out the truth?
Will Ganga stop asking questions?

We won't know until nikitaic continues this FF. 😛