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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
Awesome part.
liked it.
plz jaldi se cont. karo na yaar...eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
that was a touchy part.. 😭
kab sab kuch teek hoga..?

kya jai phir jakar banis e milega jab masdsi nahi hai chori chupe..
pls continue soon.
i got emotional

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
Just caught up with last few parts.....great updates....very emotional...Bani in hospital and at last Jai learns the truth and feeling guilty 😭😭 Will Bani forgive him?
It's time for Jigyasa to get punished 😡!!! Do continue please......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
great part....so emotional
jigs is a dead meat now
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
haila...u know a part of me feels for jai but the other part wants to see him suffer...he cannot be forgive anytime soon...

but now jigs is caught...that is definitely good news...cant wait for next update
JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Chapter 8

"What?" jai said sharply as his focus zoomed in on the woman looking at him expectantly. "When did she promised to give you the money?"
Woman : just a week ago..she came to see bani and later on she told me that she will give me lots of money to throw them out of this building" and when I saw you tonight I thought that she has sent the money.." after a while "oh well tell her to send it tomorrow no problem…
Without waiting for a reply she fled towards her house..
Jai scarcely remembered driving home.. he felt so many things.. betrayal, rage, disappointment, sad, exhaustion , and many more..He knew that as much as he liked to blame jigyasa for all this, he is the main root for all this..He should have known that jigyasa can never change. No matter how much he tries, jigyasa will always hate bani..
He should have trusted bani..

As he was about to enter his room he heard voices..wondering who might be talking at this time of the night he moved towards that room..As he came nearer the voices became louder and famillar.
Jigyasa irritated: "where the hell is jai bhaiya" the manager told me that he left the office at 12pm and now its 11.30pm night..What is taking him so long..
Karuna: "looks like our plan might fail again.
Jigs angrily:"shut up karuna"!! jab bhi moh kholti hut u kuch mahanoos hi bolti ho..this time my plan will not fail.."tum dhekna..
Then he heard another voice
Women : "arre jigyasa jab tak mei tumhare saath ho tumhara plan kabhi fail nahi hu sakta" laughing wickedly.
Then jai saw Meera and he was like "oh my god"yeh bhi in logo ke saath hai…I shud hav known..He recalled all those times when she looked at him so innocently as if the butter won't melt in her mouth..and now look at her..she's nothing but a imposter..he listened
Jigs : "dekho meera this time don't make any mistakes ok.."kitna sumjha bhujha ke bheja that tumhe us din..bani ke kabdre and jewellary bhi diya lekin tumse kuch bhi nahi ho paya."
Meera : "arre mei kiya karti jigs aunty, uspe tu bani ke naam ka bhoot sawaar hai..he got drunk and passed out..i couldn't do anything"
Jigs : thik hai thik hai..bas yaad rahe ki agar is baar galti huyi to jis sadak se tumhe utha kar laayi thi wahi phaocha dogi..samji?
Meera: "don't wory jigs aunty bas ek baar mr walia meri bhaaho meh aajaye to who bani wani sab ko bhool jayega..i just hav to put this pills in his drink..phir dekhna ..
Saying this she turned around and froze..all the color drained out from her face..she gulped..and started to say something but the words didn't come out of her mouth..
Jigs noticed it : "ab kiya huwa..?
Karuna laughing : "u look as if you've see jai bhaiya.."
and they both turned and saw jai standing at the doorway . both look ed shocked and scared..
Jai slowly made his way towards them..All three stood watching him with their mouths open.
He came and stood in front of jigyasa..for a moment he just stood there and looked at her.. thinking all of their childhood days..
Jai thinking "is she really my real sister? How can she hurt me so much.." all those thought ran into his head..
Jigs felt felt like a creature under a microscope..
Jigs stuttered : "j jai bhaiya who ….
before she could finish her sentence jai gave her one tight slap..then another ..he kept on slapping as he dragged her out of the room and took her downstairs..with the other two witches trailing behind him..(guys just imagine jigyasa's face)
By the time he brought her downstairs all the family members had awaken and had also come out to see what happened..All of them were shocked to see jai like this..

When aditiya and nattu saw that jai had no intention of stopping only then they came forward to stop jai..somehow they all knew that jai had came to know the truth about bani..They all knew that jigyasa deserved all this and many more..the way she has played with their lives and their emotions..just few slaps won't suffice that..she has to pay for all the sins..They all were aware of jai rage..When he's angry no body can stop him..he's like a raging bull..like now..but somebody has to stop him before he kills her.
So adi and nattu step forward and tried to drag jai away from jigyasa..
Adi : jai bas karo..are u going to kill her?
Jai angrily : yes I'm going to kill her..steping forward.."adi move out of my way.." move dammit!!"
Adi : "no jai..you hav to control urself..u won't win bani like this..if u kill her u'll be sent to prison.." still holding restless jai.."jai stop"
Jai: I don't give a damn..do you really think I care if I go to jail??mujhe koi farak nahi pardta.."
All this while jigyasa stood at the corner looking scared..she has never seen jai bhaiya like this.."oh god what should I do now?"
Adi quietly: "nahi lekin bani ko to parde ga na?
That stopped jai..


haila that was 3 pages..gotta stop now..dont forget to leave your comments and suggestions.it really inspires me.i was thinking of stopping at chapter 5 but when I read your comments, I couldn't..so please give your suggestion on what jai should do to jigs..and other 2 witches..take care..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
great part 👏 👏

meera 😡 ..that witch...hate her

go jai....jigs deserve that slap so do karuna and meera.......throw all three of them out of the house.....there is where they belong

amazing part...cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
un theen witches koo 😡
🤢

kill thme send to emntal ahylumor amke them ask foor beek.. like kuch dedein.. in the road allt he three..
itna idea diay hoon ek to akrdoo..

us meera koo bejdoo kahiin aise jagag par.. jahan she will eb suffering....
jig shd be sent to jail and karuna too....

kya tiwst di tune .. acchi hai come on jai.. now tkae action of kciking them all out..

pls cotnineu soon

i want jb now.. pls..
dotn amek her die 😭
davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
haila!!

oh man that was good!!!!

that was awesome!!!!!! 👏 !!

i told u get a dessert so here it is!!! 😳 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
yes.....he slapped jigs.....im so happy 😊.....please continue.....

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