FF: Forgive Me chp 24 pg 31

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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys please ignore my grammitical errors..hope u like my fanfiction:

Ok this is how I want the story to flow..

Jai is still punishing bani. He's still treating her like a dog. Always telling her to stay back and work. She always goes home after everyone leaves. Jai used to make her suffer a lot..
And slowly bani started to get scared of jai.. there were many incidents where jai used to physically abuse her..She started to feel sick and loose a lot of weight and everyone started to notice this including jai but he didn't say anything..seeing bani like this made him happy..

Everybody(maasi, rano, daksh and adi uncle) was really angry on jai and wanted to tell him the truth but bani stopped them..By now she knows that even if jai will know the truth, and beg her to forgive him, she won't go back to him again..Whatever love she felt for jai was starting to fade. She knows that they don't have a future..Jai has changed so much..he was not the same man she fell in love with..She was tired of justifying herself..and now she is scared to him becuz of his physical abuses,,so its better if jai dsnt know anything..

Lately she has been having chest pains and heavy coughs..many times she had to cancel her doc's appointed becuz of jai..
Then one night while she was just leaving when suddenly she fainted..The watchman saw her and immediately took her to the hospital..

She was admitted straight away..After 15 mins maasi and daksh came..Bani was still unconscious..After waiting for half and hour the doctor came out. He was old man in his sixties:
Doc: I need to speak to both of you..its very important..
He took them to his cabin..
Maasi(worried): wat happen doctor??is bani ok?
the doctor was silent for few mins then:
Doc: I am afraid I have some bad news

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*Guli* thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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arre

u cant stop there

wats the bad news? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Jaya,
That's very depressing one, poor Bani that has to go through this, Jai 😡
Please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Woow great start
What happened to Bani ???
Whats the bad news ???
Continue soon !!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the lovely comments guys..

Chapter 2
Maasi: b..b..bad news?
Doc: yes..bani has cancer..
Maasi and daksh sat there in shock..both of them were not ready to believe it..
Doc: For many weeks now bani has been having chest pain and heavy cough.and I've been tellin her to come and see me..though she agreed and has made many appointment to see me but she always cancels it in the last minute..whenever I ask her the reason she always says that something came up at work..did you know, from last 2 weeks she's been coughing blood..
All this while maasi set there like a statue recalling all the moments where bani used to lock herself in the bathroom..now she knows why…she was cursing jai for all this..because she knows that wenever bani has truied to take the day off jai was the one who stopped her and forced her to work..she'll never forgive jai for this..for all the pain that he has caused bani..never..
Maasi: does bani know that she has cancer?
Doc: yes she knows..I told her last week..
Both daksh and maasi: oh my god!!
Daksh: is it curable?
Doc: we don't know for sure..there are some tests to be done..nothing can be confirmed now..after we get the result then I'll be able to tell you..but I don't want to give you any high hope..cancer is not a small thing..its s very serious sickness.there are hardly any cases where a patient survives..and in bani's case its getting serious day by day.. now I hav no choice but to admit her..bani doesn't want to be admitted..says that she has to go to work tomorrow..please talk to her and tell her that her health is more important now.otherwise we'll hav no option but to forcefully admit her here.
Maasi: don't worry doctor, I'll talk to her..she'l listen to me.
Doc: ok. Here's sum medicine you hav to bring.
daksh took the paper.: ok I'll get it.
Maasi: Can we see her?
Doc: of course..but I'v given her a injection so she'll sleeping at the moment..Dekhiye I don't like to say this but now you have to be strong for bani..becuz she'll be getting worse day by day..she'll need sumone to help and support her both physically and mentally.aap samaj rahi mei kya kah rahaa hu?
Maasi: ji haa..don't wory doc..i'll never leave my bani's side.i'll smile at her even if it kills me.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great part.
liked it.
yeh kya Bani ko cancer...hope she survives 😭 😭
want to see how Jai will react to this and to truth...which I think he will soon come to know...what he will do then.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg i was right
😭
Jaiiii 😡 😡 😡
i will realy love to know how he reacts
Massi should give her Munna a good bashing

waiting for next update
plz con soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😭 😭 ... omg noooooo.. our bani cant have cancer.. i think massi should go and give one tight slap to jai and tell him wat happened from A-Z.. i wanna see his expression..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg!

she is has cancer!

plz cont soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great FF 👏 Bani ko cancer 😭 😭 hope she recovers soon 😳 Mr. JW 😡 or should i say Mr. KP (khadoos pathar 😆 ) 😡 cant wait to seee his reaction when he finds out 😃

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