FF: Forgive Me chp 24 pg 31 - Page 7

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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
This is what I really want to happen....JW slapping and kicking them out of the house.....The dialogues were great....whatever JW said is 100% right....Please continue....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
amazing part
made me cry 😭 😭
good job jai.....that three witches deserve it
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
oh man i loved this!!

this was awesome!!!

my eyes were glued to the screen!!!!! 😆 😆

u have to cont soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
This ff is very good 👏
Awesome!!
Please do post a looooooonnng update, please!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65

😭

I feel so sad for Walia, but I guess Bani uske naseeb me nahin hai.

Please continue soon. I love your story.

Bye
Ranjana

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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
😭 😭 .. jaya beutiful part yaaar.. hahha hah jai slapped jigz, karuna, and meera.. yeah baby they deserved it.. i hope bani forgives him but thoda tharpake yaar.. thabhi tho maza hai.. anywayz wat wife would go back to a hubby that was such a a** to her.. anywayz great part.. plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
Chapter 10

Everyone are speechless..the just stared at him..
Rano's voice trembled : kya!!yeh kab….kaise…di would have told me..i am going to the hospital right now..ranveer tum car nikalo..(lets say there's no raashi..rano and rano are happily married)

Jai hurriedly : nahi ruk jao..tum bani ko abhi nahi dek sakte..she's under observation..she fainted and fell off the stairs at work..the watchman took her to the hospital..dats how I came to know that she's in hospital..when I went to see her maasi stopped me..she refused to let me see bani..then"..he swallowed.."then she told me everything.."she looked at me as as she hated me..after she told me everything I had to get away..so I drove and then later went to see ganga..she was sleeping" he smiled as he remembered..
"Look I know that you want to see bani but please let me go and see her first..i'll beg her to forgive me..she has to forgive".. he murmured..
After everything was confirmed they decided to settle down..Jigs and karuna were nowhere to be seen..Meera was in her room cursing jigyasa and karuna..
Jai went to room..had his shower and went to bed dreaming that bani has forgiven him and is back in walia mansion..jai is playing with ganga..they are all happy..he woke up in the morning with a smile..
He woke up early. Had his shower , quickly dressed and went downstairs..he looked dashing..
All were sitting at the breakfast table waiting for him..Meera was nowhere to be seen..must be hiding from jai..lol..
Jai: "arre u guys woke up so early.." kya baat hai bhai.."
Dadi: "putar we wanted to wish you all the best for today..
Adi: "ha maa..jai really need it…afterall he's going to see his bride..
Jai blushed…then he frowned: "I asked mr.suresh(jai's divorce lawyer) to come at 8..where is he..
Ranveer: "mamaji woh to aagaya hai..he's waiting for you in your study..
Jai getting up: oh thanks..i'll see him first..he left..
After finalizing everything..
Jai: "Thanks suresh..i'l bring the papers to your office tomorrow..sorry I called you in such a short notice..
Suresh: "Its ok Mr.Walia..i've prepared the papers exactly how you wanted me to..
Suresh took his leave..jai came back and sat on the table when he saw meera coming down the stairs..
Jai shouting: "Tony!!"
Tony came running from the kitchen.
Tony: "Yes sir"
Jai : "Tony mei tumhe 3 din ki chutti deh raha ho"
Everyone was puzzled.
Tony : "But sir ghar ka kaam koun…..?
Jai: "Oh don't wory..i have someone in mind..
Tony:"Sir koun?"
Everybody was more confused now but didn't say anything..so they waited..meera was also confused..as she was about to take her seat..
Jai in hard voice: "Meera"
Meera slipped from her chair and landed on the floor..Everyone tried to keep their face straight..but couldn't..all starting laughing except jai..
Meera:"ji mei?"
Jai : "ha tum..koi problem?
Meera: "n n no problem..
Jai: "From today Meera will do all the house work..aur ha passing the divorce papers..sign them right now..
Meera had no choice but to sign..
Jai:"our divorce will be finalized in three days times so in the meantime you can stay here and do all the house work..understand??
Meera:"ji"
Jai:"gud" then to everybody "I am getting late..i'l see you later"..
As he was about to leave he turned
Jai slightly smiling:" I think you guys woke up early to wish me luck but I haven't heard anyone wishing me.."
Everyone rushed to wish him..As he was driving to the hospital he kept thinking about his dream.. all the way to the hospital he kept smiling 😳 ..

To be continued ….
So what do you think gonna happen??will bani forgive jai and accept him..stay tuned..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
yay! i was 1st!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳

haila what a part that was

he's all happy!😃😃 but i have a gut feeling

she wont forgive him!!😭

meera.. the new bai!!😆😆😆



plz plz plz plz cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!😭😳
Edited by *Guli* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69

2nd😛

😆😆😆 Tony egts chhutti & Meera is naukrani😆😆😆

Jai is sooo happy😊 but is it that easy??

gr8 part.👏

plz cont soon

-tropa

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, sweet dreamm yaar. Jai was so cute. Rano is very carein little sister. Jai Bani n Ganga belong 2gether, but not just like that, he needs 2 suffer, 4 wat he did. Jai went 2 meet his child, awwwwwwwwww. Hehehe, Tony gets off n Meera new worker. Funny. Cont. soon.
Edited by Mitu1228 - 17 years ago

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