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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
gr8...torture Jigs,Meera & Karuna as much as possible..
am all ears to know what u hv planned 4 them
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Wish that Jai kicks all three out n makes sure that they dont get any job n suffer 4 money. Hate them all in this ff, their mean. Cont. soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Awesome part.
three witches 🤢....par it was good way of getting rid of Meera...par yaar why there are all three witches in JW's life before it was Jigs, Karuna and Pia and now it is Jigs, Karuna and Meera 😆
Haila ragging bull...Jigs and company gayi kam se...love to see what Jai will do next to her.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Chapter 9

Jai looked at jigyasa and gritted : "get out"..
Jigyasa shocked: "What!" lekin jai bhaiya __"
Jai: "don't call me bhaiya..u have no right..after what you did to me,you still have the gall to call me bhaiya..do you even know the meaning of bhaiya..? aaj ke baad tumhara aur mera koi rista nahi hai so don't u dare call me bhaiya..u understand? towering over her..
Jigyasa taking a step back: "yeh aap kiya kah rahe hai jai bhaiya?mei aap ki behen ho aur…
Jai starting laughing: "behen?" u call urself a behen?tum ek behen nahi ek naagin ho..and a very poisonous one..
Jigyasa flinched..
Jai's voice broke: "why jigyasa?" Why?..why did you do it? U have destroyed me..u've destroyed my life, bani's life, my daughter's life…
Everyone looked at him in shock.."daughter" what daughter??All were confused but jai was beyond caring..he continued –he kept shouting
"I always knew that you hated bani..u always insulted her..u never accepted her as ur bhabhi but couldn't you see that she made me happy..couldn't you see that I loved her so much..couldn't you see how much she changed me..for the better..when the whole world left my side bani was the only one who stood beside me..and now because of you I am so alone..mera koi nahi hai..i've lost everything..
you could have seen it..but again you never really loved me isn't it jigyasa..all you wanted from for "bhaiya" was money..and when you saw that bani was getting all my attention and love, you got jealous isnt't it.."Because you cant see anyone happy..i knew u were always spoilt but I thought after marriage u might see the world from different light..but no..saap ko kitna bhi dood pilao lekin who jehar hi ugalta hai..well I've got news for you jigyasa..yeh sab bani ka hai..tumhara nahi..bani meri patni hai to uska hak meri property par sab se phehele hai ...yeh ghar mera aur bani ka hai tumhara nahi..arre tumhe to uska shukriya karna chahiye ki usne tumhe is ghar meh rahene diya..uska hak hai is ghar pe,meri property pe, he shouted ..meri zindagi pe..
Then he turned around looked at meera and karuna..In a split second, jai was standing over both of them..He gave two tight slaps to meera..Meera looked at jai as if someone has strucked lightening over her..
"aur tum" Jai hissed venomously..tumhari himmat kaise hui..tum hoti koun ho mujhe aur bani ko alag karne..jab mei ne tumse kaha ki mujhse door raho to tumne jigyasa ke game me shaamil ho gayi..bahut maza aata hai na doosro ke zindagi ke saath kelna..ab tum dekna mei tumhari kiya haalat karta ho..meera just stood there shivering..
Then he turned to karuna and gave her one tight slap..
Jai: "tumse to maine aesi umid nahi ki thi..tum maasi ki beti ho hi nahi sakti..woh to ek devi hai aur tum ek daayan ho..abhi isi waqt yeh chod kar chali jao warna mei dhakke maar kart um yaha se nikaaloga.." he shouted "Get Out". "I want to see both of you(pointing at jigyasa and karuna) out of this house in 10 mins..jobhi das minutes meh pack kar sakto ho karo and then get out from here.."whereas you my "darling wife" looking at meera with menace, you'll stay with me till we divorce which will be done first thing tomorrow morning..and don't even try to do something stupid..otherwise you'll see the real jai walia..that is the only reason I am letting you stay here so that you won't play any dirty tricks." Now all three of you get out from here..i don't want to see your disgusting faces..
Jigyasa begging: "jai bhaiya mujhe maaf kardo..hum itni raat mei kaha jayege..
Jai: "I don't know and I don't care" Go anywhere but I don't want you to stay here.."
At last they went to pack their bags and meera went to her room..
Jai walked slowly infront of the mandir (they have a small mandir inside walia mansion) and dropped infront of Krishna idol stayed there for a long time..
Suddenly he got up and started to act like a maniac ..he started to throw the things and breaking the glass..and kept on shouting bani's name over and over again. Everybody just looked at him..they didn't try to stop him..they let him take out his frasturation on tables and chairs.
Finally he stopped and droppedon the floor..Slowly dadi came to him and jai hugged her..
Jai crying: mei ne bani ke saath kiya kuch nahi kiya dadi..how can I do it ? kitna gir gaya ho mei..how can I face her? Kis mooh se jao uske paas..Kiya kahu..mei apni beti se kiya kahu?..
Dadi: "jai putar yeh tum kiya kah rahe ho? Beti?
Jai smiling through tears: "maasi I hav a daughter..meri beti..meri and bani ki beti..
Dadi: "tumhari beti?" kaun?
Jai: "you all know her..its ganga..woh mer beti hai..mera khoon..
Everyone gasped..They were shocked as well as happy.
Adi: "kya?" ganga tumhari beti hai..then excitedly come on jai lets go to bani"
Jai's face turned white
Dadi: "kya huwa putar..bani ke paas nahi jana hai?.."
Jai dimly : "bani hospital meh hai"
Rano: kya?" di ko kiya huwa?
Jai didn't say anything..he couldn't ..how can he tell them that because of him bani is lying in that hospital..but he have to tell them..
Jai's voice cracked: "bani has cancer"


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ridizzz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Great part.
liked it.
Jigs and company out of WM for good....Meera will be out soon..goody.
awww..Jai 😭 😭 😭...now I feel sad for him
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
oh ho man...that was awesome...jai kicked the lot of the out...woo hoo...
and haila...the family now knows that ganga is jb's daughter and that bani has cancer...haila...aab kya hoga...cant wait to see what happens next
JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

hey just caught up with the last two parts😛

thank u sooooooooo much for the action

🤗

loved the way JW slapped & punished the 3 witches. i had a 😃 while reading that part

but feeling sad for JW 😭😭 btw he deserves it

plz con soon

-tropa

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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
OH im sooo pleased what Jai did 👏 just hope Bani will be ok


plz cont soon


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
👏 👏 👏
kash ye sab asli ks mein hota....

wowo jb going to be back pls dotn kill bani 😭

pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Now is that Raging Bull mode or what!! Tight slaps to go around and good dialogs too - very nice!!
👏 👏 👏

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