FF: Forgive Me chp 24 pg 31 - Page 4

at last Massi is on action.

now the daffer JW knows everything.

he's crying😭 but he deserves all these😡 jerk😡

where is Ganga?? does she know about Bani's illness??

& plz plz plz punish Jigs (as ekta doesnt do that our ff writers should do the job)

gr8 update👏👏

plz update soon

-tropa

the jerk!!!... 😡 😡 😡
he has lots of more cryinto do b4 bani even thinks of forgiving jai...uff...i hate him...see what he has done...i swear...ill kill him... 😡 ...

great udpate yaar...maasis dialog rocked...i cant wait to see the next part
JAZ

Go Ja Go and win her back... u have some major apologising to do.. but win her back with ure true love coz u also know that u have only loved one person and that is Bani. Give her a reason to fight for her life and get her back.

😭 😭 .. omg nooooooooooooooo.. bani has cancer.. and jai finally finds out the whole entire truth.. fnally.. now hes regretting it.. perfect... awwwnnnn.. i hope now bani punshes him by not accepting his apology.. wat girl can tolerate anyone especially her husband calling her a sl*t.. i hope she tortures him the way he tortured her.. grreat part.. plzz contnue soon.. and i agree with massi.. loved her..

Man this ff is amazing yaar. Just read all the parts, great. Cont. soon.

great part
poor jai...lost everything 😭
cont soon

Chapter 7

Guys I havn't seen Kasam Se since August so I'm not really aware of the full story..so if I make any mistakes then pliz bear with me..i might miss small things like where bani lives or how come maasi lives with bani instead of walia mansion etc..so ignore it..

9pm at night..

Jai was still sitting by the lake..Finally he decided to go and see ganga..now that he knows that ganga is his daughter he's desperate to see her.. He came at bani's house and knocked the door. He thought maasi might be home since ganga can't be left alone..for almost five minutes he kept knocking..Then he decided to come tomorrow..As he was turning to go back to his car the door opened. Thinking that it was maasi he was about to say something when he saw that it was daksh. He froze for a second but after thinking of what masi told him earlier today he relaxed..
Daksh in hard voice : what are you doing here Mr.Walia?
Jai quietly: maasi told me everything..i want to see me daughter..
Daksh kept quite..
Jai desperately: please daksh you can blast me some other day..but please just let me see her..
Daksh: she's sleeping..
Jai hurriedly : I wont disturb her I promise..i just want to look at her..
Daksh moved aside to let him enter the house..he took jai to ganga's room..
There slept ganga like a baby clutching her small teddy bear tightly. Jai quietly came near sat on the bed.
His face softened.
Jai thinking: "my daughter..my blood..she looks like an angel"my angel..I've missed holding her when she was born..i've missed her first walk, I've missed her first smile..i've missed so much..and for what..for a small misunderstanding.." "honey how can I remedy all this" how will you react when you'll know that I am your father..that father who abandoned your mother that time when she needed me the most." After knowing all this will you still smile at me like you did before? Will you hug me, talk to me?

All this thought ran into his mind..tears just fell from his eyes..he sat there crying silently..not wanting to wake ganga up..he slowly stroked her face..

Daksh was standing by the door witnessing all this..After half an hour jai stood up and quietly left the room with daksh trailing behind him
For a moment they didn't say anything.. both lost in their own thoughts. Finally
Jai: mei nahi jaanta tumse kis moh se maafi mago..i've made the biggest mistake in my life..i know that saying sorry is not enough. After what I did to both of you especially bani..tum to phir bhi gayer the lekin bani..she was my wife and my life..i shud have trusted her.but I failed her..i don't know how I'll show my face to her..after what I did..after how I treated her..i doubt if she still loves me..but I have to see her and explain..i will do anything in my power to make her forgive me.. fiercely "anything"
Then he turned around and walked out.Daksh didn't stop him..
As jai was about to get in his car one lady came running to him..she was the same lady whom jigyasa promised to give the money to throw bani out of the house.
Lady: aap jai walia hai na?
Jai not in the mood to talk said abruptly: yes
Lady: oh I shud have known..you tha brought the money isn't it?
Jai confused and irritated: what? What money?who the hell are you?
Lady: arre the money which she promised me..she said that she'll give me lots of money and all I have to do is throw that bani, her daughter and that budiya out of this building..
Jai stood there frozen.."who..who promised to give you that money?
Lady confused: "arre tumhari behen jigyasa madam aur koun…

To be continued!!

1st

JG scene is soo touching😭

ah. at last good timing. iss churail ne pehli baar kuch achcha kaam kia. Jigs ka bol khola

plz plz cont soon

cant wait for Jai-Jigs meeting

-tropa

haila!!!!!! aww jai! 😭 😭


but oh man

u left off there?

jaani do u not luv me! 😭 plz continue karo!!!! 😳 😳 😳

with a cherry on top!

next comment i will give you ice cream!!! 😳

oooo jigs u in trouble hes gonna blast her 😆 gr8 part the jg part was so sweet cont soon