FF Illicit love: end part 40 p136 note139 - Page 100

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Posted: 17 years ago
Very nice part.. now just waiting for Jai and Bani to make it official and have a family of their own.....
Looking forward to what is next..
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Posted: 17 years ago

so jb are gogin to have a new baby which will brignt otgether.

io think nikita will die in the birth.... as then it wil be a peacsful end..

pls cotninue soon..

loved the update aksh tum woo scenes likti where jb excited hoti and smile on the kid and dream on thier own kid and goign shy😳

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh wow..i hope everything's alrite...just hope Bani hasn't backed out at the last moment...i just wish Jai had dealth w/ this differetly..like taken Bani's decision before then accepted to adopt the baby but that's my opinion...btw all your previous parts were awesome!
Edited by ~*Noor*~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ranjana excellent part...a real test of Jb relationship. Jai understood if he forced Nikita to raise the child or adopt the child the miserable life the child would grow up in. How unselfish of him to want that child so he could give it a good home and how big hearted of Bani to finally to support Jai. It would be easy to use the money you have and wash your hands off the problem but a big scarifice to actually take that problem into your hands and give it a good solution. I am sure once the baby arrives the rest of the family will realize Jai took a good step.

I am looking forward to the next part...I know its and end but I am sure you will give it a beautiful ending. Thanks Ranjana. 👏 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow a great part please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Very unconventional but altruistic way of handling things. U stopped and made me think...Good job, RR!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi
I really like Bani here
She is not as mahan as she is in KS
the time she asked, her question, her selfishness and her insecurities are so well defined.
Waiting for next one
Thankssssssssssssss
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Posted: 17 years ago
even in a minute of urgency and hurry, jai made a mature decision on his and bani's behalf... i appreciate it... that shows his character... I liked it 👏 👏 👏 that shows his maturity and future thinking...

it seems bani got carried away a little... but its okay to be little selfish... acceptable... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Renudi
wonderful part 👏
JB relation is very strong
but where is Bani at the end?
plz cont soon
and start to write your next ff 😉 😛

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