FF Illicit love: end part 40 p136 note139 - Page 102

Hey ranjana sweety what can I say at one point when bani left the note for jai I thought she left for good I was in tears put it this way mein gussa hoye geya thi yeh kaise ending hai hum sab ko rolia diya tumne.... 😭

But then when I finished reading the whole chapter I was so happy babez I'm really happy at last JB ke pyar ke jeet hoye 👏

You did a good job dear it was a fantastic FF I hope u do cont to write more FF in the near furture

Replies to part 39!

Originally posted by: siumi

Ranjana,

It was really dard for Bani to accept it at first Jai's decition but it's good to see that are together and going to have the baby of Nikita😊

thanks for the update, take care😊

Thanks for the comments. It must be really painful for Bani to accept the child but it I guess it must be comforting to know you have such a wonderful person in your life who can accept something like this.

Originally posted by: suwas

Nicely written part but I am sorry i didn't like the content & don't agree with Jai's decision.

I now you dont agree with Jai. but thats okay honey. that is the point of the story. everyone will have an other POV about this realtionship and the decisions the characters take. none of the characters are all good or all bad. i tried to portray them as mere human beings and we cant like all the things certain people do. Thanks for your comments😃

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey.....................

lovely part....................

update soon

Thank you. Bye

Originally posted by: popeye

Its lovely... i hope bani hasnt left jai

Hey. Glad you liked it. bye

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

ow what happend to Bani where is she 😕 she will be there hon. dont worry
i hope everything will work out in the end 😉 It will be
plz cont
Thanks for the comments. Bye
Taj

Originally posted by: hipreet

amazing part
aww u gonna end it....but i liked it alot
plzzzzzz cont soon

thank you. I hope you will like the end
Bye

Originally posted by: pptm469

Very nice part.. now just waiting for Jai and Bani to make it official and have a family of their own.....
Looking forward to what is next..

Hey. thanks for the comments. I hope you like this part and will like the next part too.
bye

Originally posted by: davia389

so jb are gogin to have a new baby which will brignt otgether.

io think nikita will die in the birth.... as then it wil be a peacsful end..

pls cotninue soon..

loved the update aksh tum woo scenes likti where jb excited hoti and smile on the kid and dream on thier own kid and goign shy😳

davia

Haila tumhaara dimaag bhi tez hai Davia. Humse bhi das kadam aage chalta hai😆. I wont spill the beans yet. Bye

Originally posted by: ~*Noor*~

Oh wow..i hope everything's alrite...just hope Bani hasn't backed out at the last moment...i just wish Jai had dealth w/ this differetly..like taken Bani's decision before then accepted to adopt the baby but that's my opinion...btw all your previous parts were awesome!

I know I would like that too but I created such a situation that Nikita wasnt the only one who was cornered. Jai was too. Thanks for the compliment

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
liked it. Thankoe😳
plz cont. soon

Originally posted by: divan

Ranjana excellent part...a real test of Jb relationship. Jai understood if he forced Nikita to raise the child or adopt the child the miserable life the child would grow up in. How unselfish of him to want that child so he could give it a good home and how big hearted of Bani to finally to support Jai. It would be easy to use the money you have and wash your hands off the problem but a big scarifice to actually take that problem into your hands and give it a good solution. I am sure once the baby arrives the rest of the family will realize Jai took a good step.

I am looking forward to the next part...I know its and end but I am sure you will give it a beautiful ending. Thanks Ranjana. 👏 🤗

Thanks for the compliments Divan. I hope it showed Jai adn Bani as mere human beings in stead of the larger than life people we made then. Jai was being selfish in his longing for a child. Bani was being selfish for her love and the family will go along with Jai cos they feel they need to in return for his sacrifices.

Thanks for you faith in me.
BYe

Originally posted by: purpletoxic

wow a great part please update soon

Thanks. I already updated the next part.
Bye

Originally posted by: btkr

Very unconventional but altruistic way of handling things. U stopped and made me think...Good job, RR!!

Thanks for the compliments

Originally posted by: Pooja_fren

Hi Hey
I really like Bani here Thanks
She is not as mahan as she is in KS Who wants to be that mahaan
the time she asked, her question, her selfishness and her insecurities are so well defined. I wnat Bani to be a bit selfish otherwise other people will always defy her
Waiting for next one
Thankssssssssssssss Thanks for the post. Bye

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

even in a minute of urgency and hurry, jai made a mature decision on his and bani's behalf... i appreciate it... that shows his character... I liked it 👏 👏 👏 that shows his maturity and future thinking...
At least you like Jai here Abhi😉 I dont think we can say that for the real KS
it seems bani got carried away a little... but its okay to be little selfish... acceptable... 😳 Yippie. Now make Bani a bit selfish in your ff

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 part
plz cont soon

thanks jeenal.
bye

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

Renudi Hi Tropa
wonderful part 👏 Thank you
JB relation is very strong yes it is
but where is Bani at the end? she will be there. just a bit of patience
plz cont soon
and start to write your next ff 😉 😛 Haye. this i cant do i think. Im sorry.bye

Originally posted by: ruma

excellent part... beutifully penned bani's feelings 😃 😃 without offending you ranjana, i just feel bad for bani - in front of the society she will be a stepmother to nikita's child and eventully when she and jai are married they may not be able to have their own children, because bani may feel that she may not able to love nikita's child as her own...

Hi ruma you are not offending me at all yaar. really I mean it😃. Bani will love this child. In her own way. Bani will be the step mother in front of the society but at the end the question remains does it really matter what society thinks. Nobody knows what happens behind closed doors. even real mothers nowadays abuse their childeren but just because they gave birth to that child nobody say one thing. no matter what happens this child will be loved and cared for.
Bye😃

Originally posted by: ffern022

I hope Bani comes soon to see her baby, I think she has something special for her new baby and for Jai. That was really beautiful both JB planning for their baby's arrival. I think Nikita has no heart 😡, how can she blame that child and feel no love for it 😭 . A child is one of Gods greatest gifts, and like Jai had said she had the resources to take care of the child, how can she be so cruel.

She will see her baby soon dont worry. Nikita is just afraid to accept her mistakes in front of everyone. she will have to admit that she has been wrong and not everyone is capable of doing that.
bye

Originally posted by: ree_views

Hey Ranjana,

Liked how Jay felt and wanted to consider Bani's wish too. That Bani became momentarily 'so-called' selfish was quite natural..for anyone in her place but then her realisation that it was not her kind of thoughts to have...that was lovely how she felt bad for behaving like that and even admitted that she will accept everything but will need some time. Jay's excitement and Bani's excitement in Jay's excitement are quite understandable..one wants to have a child at home and the other wants to fulfil his wish in his way...

I liked that part where you mentioned that what a touch could do..force could not! Even that describing that band-aid ripping off feeling!!!!

Now what is this suspense? where is Bani? More good news on the way kya?

Hope you continue soon 😃

I cant say anything besides thank you so much.

Bye

Originally posted by: tam2

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Hi!! ...Hello....!!!....
Sorry!!!!! (this word seems like my new mantra these days) ...😆...Practice makes you perfect...😆😆😆... and i practise a lot na?
Okay this was supposed to be the last part, but it got too long and I know Tam sure does not like looooooonnng updates ...who told you that!!!...😲😲😲😕... I never knew I don't like long updates...😲😆...Sweetie I think u misunderstood me somewhere..😆..I love reading long updates...well every reader does...😉😆...but when it comes to doing longer update yourself I do get a bit lazy....😕😆...So please do do loooooonnngggg updates...😳😛...Thankoooooo....😆😆😆I wont even comment on this. I will just sit back and enjoy your reaction. (i'm mean na!!) so the next part will be the last one.....what does this mean... .... are u ending it...😕.... Yep i am sweety. I hope you will like it.

bye , ....Bye is fine...but kabie Alvida Na Kehna...so if you end this one... do start a new one...😳.... I dont know honey if I can do that.sorry
Ranjana

Now back to FF...😆... comments:
Lovely update....👏... loved the scenes between JB... 😳... they understands each other so well... don't they....😳... wonder whether it will be a boy or a girl.... 🤔...How come Jai is all alone at the hospital? ... anyways do cont soon... 🤗...





Thanks for the comments. you sawaal will have a jawaab soon.
Bye

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

Hey di, Hey jaanu
what is this.. bani is happy with the baby coming and stuff.. She is happy that Jai is happy and shw grew to love the baby over these few months.

but.. where is she.. when jai needs her the most..
why is she not with jai right now?? You will see soon.
Bye

continue soon please

wow!!
me first
i just want to tell u how wonderful i thought u r ff was... everyday i would wait for an update, and i think this has been one of my most favoutire ff's so far
i loved the way you ended it and i will always remember it.
Nikita

Now that this story ends..do we look forward to another one??

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

i deffo like jai here... he is so understanding... never ever leaving bani's side...

and jai nearly dragging bani to mandap reminds me of salman's dialog in KKHH... in which he will say he will drag kajol if she rejects him 😆

nice ending.... and basic nature of Bani - running away... 😆 here too... great 😆

😭comment later

that was a beautiful end..

jb were atlast amrreid but i fetl u hurried towards the end... and forgotted to shwo jb more... ..

so they kept his name as amanv muje laga it wd be a girl baby..

so bani elft first but jai dragged ehr back. sach much bewakoof hain bani... itna bhi nahi smaji wo...

good they atlast ebcame one.. manisha it was soo good..

ek aur honachiaye ta...

pls cotnineu with ur new fff😊

davia

That was a beautiful and sweet ending! Aw i really liked it. Im now actually happy about them adopting Manav at first i was kind of double minded. Finally JB got married. The way you showed banis reactiona and feelings when manav was born and after was wonderful. I loved JB's relationship. I hope you start another FF too.

You are a great writer!

Hey ranju,
Awesome! Awesome! Update. Wonderful ending. Simply loved it.
I hope to read your next FF soon.
God bless!!
dhani

When Bani left a letter..I was little worried. You are a great storyteller.
Bani and her motherly feeling was written well.

Priya

Hey di..


this is like the last surprise.. i was thinking about for sure..
i mean i wasnt.. thinnking that u would end this ff..so soon.. seriously..

but anyways.. i love jai.. he understands bani from his heart.. which is a plus point for sure...
i loved manav.. for not blaming his parents..that is really good...

please do write another ff.. please please pretty please