FF Illicit love: end part 40 p136 note139 - Page 105

The last couple of chapters were wonderfully written. I liked the fact that you did not paint Bani as goody two shoes in the case of accepting the child. For anyone taking the responsibility immediately might be a bit difficult and that was portrayed very well. Also Bani's last attempt to sacrifice was a but of a surprise. But then all's well that ends well. This was a bit of a difficult story to attempt and am glad that you did good justice to it and I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your wonderful efforts.

Swathi

That was great ending ,,bani had to do her mahatma act ,, but at least jai had more sense

Just realized I hadn't commented - thanks for a sensitive ff, RR. Do write another when u have the time.
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wow a great ff and even greater ending defenitlly one of the best one thank u so much for a wonderfull ff

sorry for not commenting sooner very emotional part the ending was beautiful made me cry and smile at the same time will wait until you write another ff hope you do that soon.........

I am late in commenting yet again...get habituated with that 😉 😆

That was a good and happy ending..Liked how you defined the reasons of the names given to the kids, the relationship that Manav shared with Bani...the couple finding eternal happiness after being finally bound to each other for lifetime as they had wished. Initially I was shocked to read the letter...at times people do take the stupid decisions..being a third person may be we can judge that her thoughts of leaving Jay for Nikita was wrong..but being in her position one has to think seriously about one goes through..when everything seems to be wrong where it concerns one. Liked Jay's reactions..he was calm and composed..just gave the time and space to Bani. Liked when he made it evident how much Bani loved the baby boy. During Manav's birth..that scene was too good...Jay feeling incompleteness without Bani. Moreover Pia realising her mistake was a good thought too. Nice story😃. Thanks for writing it😃

Ranjana, I am literally with tears in my eyes because one of the FFs I always look forward to has wrapped up.
It was the best episode yet and I really loved it.
I am glad that Jai and Bani finally got married and that Nikita finally went away.

I love the bringing of the family together and how you described the emotions here. Beautifully done Rani, beautifully done.

I really hate to say goodbye to this FF but some good things must come to an end na? 😭

Thank you so much for an exciting read.It waas truly beatutiful through the periods where the real KS was a drag. 😊
Again, thank you!

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I came here to catch up and Whoa! You've ended it? Why I never noticed? How dumb of me...but nothing to worry, I wouldn't be able to read it even if I noticed, I've been so busy and I stil am 😔


Coming back to the point....the end, OmG! I so loved this FF 😭



But that was an amazing end....too good for words, marvelous job Ranju sweety....it was really too good 😃


I loved the ending part.....So Soothing...🤗



Great work, from the starting to the ending....a wonderful FF, certainly a rare treat to the minds 😆


Will try to catch up with your new FF soon.....😃



Carry on Hun......😳