FFThe Foreign Self: Part XXII & Epilogue - Page 8

the word that comes to me after reading this is ''magical' 😳 ...

Thanks you for finsihing this... i love hoe you use humour in your writin..


Jai finally found his angel.... 😛

🤣 Natchiket and Ranveer wanted to live with them... poor jai... i hope he was successful in buying an island.... 😆

A beautiful touching story...and what makes it even better is that you are one hell of a writer...

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Waoh… Beautiful culmination of a marvelous story….

The two strangers who have come together during their time of grief eight years ago have finally become one in the true sense with a living proof of their union in tow…

I've found Jai's decision to let go the memory of his angel for his wife Bani quite enthralling… It's akin to him realizing and cherishing his love for Bani even before he knew that his angel and Bani are one and the same… Both of them were in love with the other since their first meeting but in their present reunion Bani always knew that the stranger of her past is none other than Jai where as Jai has been all along being unaware of who she is….

You have a great style of writing … Very skillful in describing emotions and feelings with good command of language and this is my heart felt sentiment…

Thanks for finishing this wonderful story in spite of your reservations… All the best for your future endeavors…

A,

I am speechless....I really am!

And it will take some time for the feeling to sink in...to actually see this story come a full circle...to have the joy of reading and re-reading this over and over again from start to finish!

The ending was more beautiful than I had imagined...so exquisite and so perfect, that all words fail to describe it!

But I will come back with my comments...this FF is very close to my heart and I want to give it a fitting description, the way you gave it an epic end!

About your decision to not write again... Will come on that later...as of now, am just a bit staggered after reading the last part and epilogue...

Love,

R

Armana,

fantabulous part. Firstly a treat to read two parts together and to top that it really exceeded my expectation. In all honesty you had managed to surprised me with the twist and turns in the story , with each update still I was expecting a fimiliar ending to this story but you managed to outpass my preconceived ending to this story. I am completely speechless the way the secret unfolded. I was expecting a lot of as they say "shoo sha" around the secret and that it will be followed by some happy diwali crackers but the way Bani simply laid it on the table had me shocked and surprised( happy one) for a minute. For a second I was like we waited with holded breath for the angel to come out of hiding and put Jai out of his misery but .......I am out of words.You completed this FF in ages but as Jai said-It was worth the while


I cannot end my comment without putting in words of praises for Jai. No matter what he does and how worse he behaves. This man never fails to intrigue me, helds on my interest and I just love him for all his faults because it makes him more realistic , selfish pig who one cannot do without under any circumstance. I just fell in love with him like nth time when he made a fool out of Nachiket and Ranveer. For me this is the man who can walk with away with his head held high even after making the most absurd , non sensical statements in public and making an utter fool out of himself but will still have people eating out of his hands.

As usual Massi was true to her character-useless utterly useless. Loved Roshini and Rumaan.
Great part.

hey armana
lovely ending 👏

The Epilogue and the update were so wonderful,
I loved the way you ended the story with all the misunderstandings cleared, truth unfold and all.

Really appriciate your effort on this and am totally speechless by tghe way you wrote.
I respect your decision about not writing another, but frankly, would have loved to read another fresh FF.
Congratulations for finishing this FF,
With Love,
Shiya

Armana,
I have to words to describe my feelings... 👏
It was absolutely wonderful...... 👏 👏 👏
I read it atlest 10 times 👏
Your writting skills are in-camparable....I salute you... 👏

Armana, you summed up and ended this story in a beautiful manner. Jai's realization of how badly he behaved with Bani whilst all thsi time she only loved him, him finding out that she is "Saraswati" and then realizing that it was alwasy there right in front of him and he could not realize it. And I guess the best scene of the day was when he found out that she was his Angel all this while....and it was some what present there in his sub-counciousness but then too he couldn't realize it.

Armana, I congratulate you in penning the thoughts of all characters, the events that took place in their respective lives and the ultimate truth which came out in the open and made them come together was mind-blowing. Thank you for sharing one of your nest writings with with us. 👏

a beautiful end to a beautiful story....
i bow down to u madam 👏 👏 👏
dishita

Hi Armana,

I will only use one word to describe the Foreign Self......Perfect.

The story was beautiful and so real. I really wish you would start another fan fiction but I respect your decision....I'll miss reading your updates.

Nikita