FFThe Foreign Self: Part XXII & Epilogue - Page 6

Hi Armana,

I am waiting for couple of things in next part not neccessary you have to include them. this is just my thaughts.

His Swater from 7 years ago (is he going to find out she still have that)
The Letter Angel has wrote ( is she going to find out he has saved it)

The skatches she has made of his face ( what will be his reaction when he will see them)
Sarswati ( what will be his reaction when he find's out)

Puskar-Pia (what will he do when he find's out this are the people who cheated on his Angel)

and last but not list
what will happen when he finds out that she knew all along that they had met in chappel seven years ago.



Pooja

P.S. as mentioned above it is not neccessory to answer above thaughts.

Right then,
the last part and the epilogue is now posted on the first page of this thread.

Happy Reading.

Lots of Love
Armana

Armana:

A wonderful end to a wonderful story. Every single moment of this story has been captivating! Believe me when I say that its like a novel that I can not put down. This has been by far one of the best, if not the best, ff I have read!

I loved how Jai became protective of her, making sure her every need was fulfilled. His relationship with his brother/nephew was wonderfully portrayed and I was happy to see that it was Bani that helped him come out of his shell, even if it was with his family.

The trust that he gained in her was beautiful, not questioning Raghav's relationship to her, although he would have before.

It was the most touching to see him realizing that Bani was the one that taught him to love all along. The ending you gave us was perfect. Only those two will every know the truth and understand each others pain and happiness. They have their own unique relationship which only they can understand.

And now their lives are filled with people as opposed to the solitude their each lived in. They both let down their guard once they found what they were looking for, and you have depicted that with perfection.

I commend you on this work, Armana. I dont think that there are enough words to describe how much I appreciate your talent.

Thanks,
Hk

This has been a wonderful journey of a FF and i have really enjoyed it.
Well done, i think your writing is brilliant, you managed to capture all the emotion and keep us the readers griping to know what was going to happen next!!!
Weel done again and thankyou.
take care
Ria xxx

Armana,

Wonderful ending.

I am at loss of words to decribe how i feel. I read it over and over to make sure i didn't miss out anything.
Each and very detail was so beautifully done. Loved the description of the painting, I could actually visualize it. Thank you for writing this wonderful FF. I for one will defintely treasure it and am sure that i will read it over and over again.

It is sad that you won't be writing anymore, but truly respect your decision. And will be hoping against hope that you will change your mind.

Once again thank you for giving us this wonderful FF. 👏 =D>] 👏 👏

Kiran

Dear Armana:

Truly a befitting end to the ff and a wonderful tribute to the JB jodi. The beautiful visual pictures you painted of the farmhouse, the gardens the paintings is so enriching.

You can't but help fall in love with Jai, Bani and all the other characters, even Roshni.

I know you will not be writing on the forum again, but hope you will carry on writing. You truly have a beautiful gift. I hope one day to walk into a store here in Canada and be able to pick one of your books to read.

Thank you so much for finish The Foreign Self.

This is one treasure of an ff...Bani is such a positive force that she draws people towards herself and emanates happiness and all-encompassing love. See what reading your ff does? Hum bhi poet ho gaye (or psychologist 😉 ) Anyway, was kind of stunned at the dance of the seven veils 😆 - it looked like she was going to reveal her "angel" identity to him 😆...she made her dear husband a happy man instead...absolutely enjoyed the update and the whole ff.
It is sad that people don't comment - everybody is busy, but if they can spare the time to read, surely a line of comment is not hard to put in....
Thanks for the ff, and hamari shubh kaamnayen tumhare saath hai...
👏 👏 👏

I don't know how to express myself. I am not writer like you. But this ff especially the ending enchanted me.

fabulous work.

Its sad that you won't be writing anymore ff on this forum.

Wish that you do continue writing & hope that I will come across it may be as famous novels.

Thank you for the efforts ou have gone through to give us the foreinself & all other FFS.

Just like KS I have to satisfy myself by rereading your Ffs.

Now I have a big job on weekend read the whole ff from begining😛

Armana

Take a bow!!!!

What a beautifully penned ending. So poignant!! The revelation scene that Bani was "his angel" was ABSOLUTELY PERFECT...dreamlike!!

It brings tears to my eyes taht I will never have the honor or privilege to read another piece of your work again!!!

Maybe one day when you are a famous author ... but alas until then I can re-read your works here on the forum!!

Your JB are the ones we fell in love with and the ones that live in our memories as beloved characters who once touched our hearts! You are right taht they don't exist in Kasam Se anymore and it has long been overdue to let them go but letting go and moving on is the hardest part of life isn't it?

I for one will MISS you WHOLEHEARTEDLY!!

Bless you for giving us the honor of reading your work!

Nina

Armana,

That was a brilliant ending. Iam sad yet relieved to finally read the end of the story. I have loved reading every part and used to eagerly wait for an update. I'm kind of sad that I wont have to wait for an update any more.

The story is truly well written and beautiful. I'm also sad to hear that you wont be writing any FF's. I guess apologies are in order from me, for a vey long time I was a silent reader as well, and didn't comment. But I always appreciated the effort and creatitivity that you put into the story.

Thanks for such a great FF to read, in a way it truly is teh end of Jai and Bani.

Thanks.