FF:Aaj Ke Pyaar Upd8d 20/11 pg6 Part 13

Here's the start.
Characters:
Jai - 24 years old. A rich and hard working guy. He is not interested in what modern guys think of. He had to take care of the business ever since his father died. He does have feeling for Bani but it is subsided. He also did well in his studies and topped in his class. He used to write notes for Bani if she didn't have time to study but he never expressed his feelings. He was also very religious and always went to the temple with Bani.
Bani - 23 years old. A cute girl, who believes in love, trust, faith so you can say she is very religious and simple. She doesn't like all this make up and short skirts. She is very intelligent and her best friend is Jai as he takes good care of her. Her parents tell her to marry him but she replies we are just friends and there is nothing between them.
Tarun - 23 years. A handsome, spunky and attitude kind of a guy. He is a spoilt brat with lots of money and does positively errr... nothing. Well he likes Bani and he wants to have a live-in relationship but no serious relationship. He doesn't believe in love and he also has an aim to trap her badly (later)
Pushkar - Jai's older, 25 year old, friend/college mate. Pushkar and Jai have known each other since they were roommates in college and now they are business partners. Pushkar and Jai tell each other everything, Pushkar and Jai have no parents but confide within each other.
Aparajit - The schools teacher but is a father like figure to both Jai and Pushkar and of course Bani who also used to study there. Aparajit is married to Rashi and they have a very simple life. Aparajit is Bani's relative like an uncle.
Piya - A very bubbly girl and she loves boys and she has one each day of the week eg. Monday mein Vikram ke saath hoon, Tuesday mein Manoj ke saath, ooh my god he has become so possessive. But she really loves Jai but he is just not interested. Take this incident.
Piya: Hi
Jai: Sorry. (Bumped into each other)
Piya: You're welcome ( deadly smile)
Jai: But I will not come. (Jai at ease)
Piya: ( Thinking Jai is a normal guy ) But I'm open.
Jai: But I'm closed. ( Jai being smart and an idiot )
So I do not think she was the least bit surprised as to what he is.
Rano - She is married to Sahil. She is a 25 year old and is a very close friend of Bani. Rano is a very simple person and to Sahil well she is just the world to him.
Aditya - He is India's richest businessman and is signing a deal with the Walia Group of Industries which is Jai's business. He is married to Jigyasa which he thinks his marriage is the biggest mistake of his life. He is carefree and is 33 years old.
Sahil - Is married to Rano and he loves her the most in the world. Just that he creates misunderstanding or finds misunderstandings. He is 26 years old and he really like his work and he is happy in life.
Rashi - Is married to Aparajit, she is the daughter of a rich industrialist and had got married by force but is still living her life as a housewife. She is Bani's aunty.
Jigyasa - A very modern aunty-ji. She wears only designer sarees and keeps on spending her husband, Aditya's money on wasteful things eg. Every month a new car, shoes, shopping, clothes, manicures and pedicures everyday. She is Evil.
Dadi - She is Bani's grandmother. She has modernized thinking but never left her sarees.
Masi - She is Pushkar distant aunty and is an aunt to Jai as well. She comes down once in three months. She is also very fond of Bani.
Cast I use but not in many important instances.
Nachiket - Jai's childhood friend.
Laxmi - Likes Nachiket and is like Jai's younger sister but studies in America so is only down on her vacations.
Karuna - Laxmi's mother.
Tony - Is the Ramu in Jai and Pushkar's house.
Cast that come later
Atharva - ( will introduce later )
Krishna - ( will introduce later )
Veer - ( will introduce later )
Varun - ( will introduce later )
Side Cast
Tanu - Laxmi's sister and Karuna's elder daughter.
Nivi - Rano's sister. Sahil's sister-in-law.
Gayu - Piya's younger sister. She just is fed up of her elder sister and so she hangs out with Bani.

I will add on some cast but that is it for now. Have worked on the story but still have to type it out. Will have it to you on Saturday. Please ignore all the spelling mistakes as I was quite rushed.
Bye!
From: Chevi😊

CONTENTS:

Page 1: Part 1 & 2

Page 2: Part 3

Page 3: Part 4 & 5

Page 4: Part 6, 7, 8

Page 5: 9, 10, 11, 12

Page 6: Part 13

hehe wow I liked the incident part of Pia n Jai 😆 😆 😆 very funny JAI 😉
Hey I hope you start soon this ff soon 😃 😃

Part 1
Hey everyone. Here is the latest. Just couldn't wait. Typed as fast as I could.

It was a beautiful summers morning. Jai and Pushkar were sleeping. Their usual drama- Jai gets up. Looks at his watch.

Jai: Haila! ( knocks at Pushkar's door)
(Pushkar doesn't answer)
(Jai barges in)

Jai: Hey utto. Hume office jaana hein.

Pushkar (lost in his dreams): Aishwarya mein aapse bahut pyaar karta hoon.

Jai: Pushkar!!!

Pushkar: Abhishek tum mere Aishwarya koh nahin leh sakti! Oh sorry Jai.

Jai: Lagta tumhari shaadi karni padhegi.

Pushkar: Hanh! Wohi toh.

Jai: Now come on thayar ho jao vaarna yeh humari pehla aur akhri dinh hoga office mein.

Pushkar: Mein Bani ko phone karoon.

Jai: Koi faida nahin.Woh kab ki uski office gayi.

Pushkar: Hanh, point toh hain.

At the office
(everyone at the office says good morning)
Both: Good Morning.

Jai: Chalo cabin mein chalte hain.

Pushkar: Tum hamesha bade rahenge chahe tum mujhse chota hain ya nahin

Jai: Hanh! Wohi toh. Aur tum mujhse bade magar phir bhi chote.

Song: Bade Miyaan toh Bade miyaan Chote Miyaan subhan allah. Film: Bade Miyaan Chote Miyaan.

Later on in the day
Jai: Arey! Aparajit tu.

Aparajit: Hain Jai. Adbudh.

Pushkar: Anokha Anjana Aparajit Deb

Jai and Pushkar: Patta Hain.

Rashi: Hi Jai.

Jai: Hi Rashi.

Pushkar: Kya khana laya ho.

Jai: Motta Saila.

Pushkar: Aap ka kya problem hain.

Jai: Tum workout karte ho?

Pushkar: Nahin toh.

Jai: Exactly. Kal Saturday hain, mein aur tum saath mein workout karoge.

Pushkar: Lekin kal mera date hain Julie ke saath.

Jai: Tho cancel kar le.

Pushkar: Parr. Teke.
(Pushkar leaves.)

Jai: Woh nahin annewalla.

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That's it. I just got spare time so I quickly typed this out. The rest maybe tomorrow or later on as I have the whole day free but maybe this is it. Thanks Siumi for your comment. Hope you like this. Watch out for part 2.

That was nice update but small koi baat nahi,lol.
Both Jai n Pushkar are funny guys. 😆 😆 pushar needs to workout 😆 😆 and Jai is always fit nah??!! 😳 😳 lol.
continue soon 😛

Thanks for appreciating it Siumi. Here's more.
Part 2
(Jai after working out)
(Pushkar enters)
Jai: Tum abhi aa raha hein.

Pushkar: Tumne apni size dekhi. Bhilkool motta ho gaya tum aur tum mujhse keh rahi ho workout kar.

Jai: Hey mein itna motta nahin hoon.

Pushkar. Hanh! Wohi toh.

Sahil: Hey. Mera naam hain Sahil aur tum kaun?

Jai: Mein Jai aur yeh namoona hein Pushkar.

Sahil: Tho tum dono jaghad kyon rahe hein.

Pushkar: Mujhe workout nahin karna hain. I mean look at his size.
Sahil: What's wrong with his size.
Jai: Wohi Toh!

Sahil: I gotta go but nice meeting you.
Pushkar: Chalo ghar chalte hain.

(At Home)
Pushkar: Oof! You need to have a bath.

Jai: Jah raha hoon magar kya tumne naha hein ki nahin.
Pushkar: Nahin toh!

Jai: (slap on the head) Wohi toh. Chalo ab.
After bathing.........
(Knocking)
Jai: Kaun hoge iss waqt.
(He opens the door)

Jai: Bani tum.

Bani: Hi Jai.
(To make Bani impresses Jai leans against a huge pile of books and flexes but he falls)
Bani: Tum teek ho.

Jai: Ha bhilkool first class.Ow!
(Pushkar in the bathroom upstairs)

Pushkar: Jai help me yaar mein bathroom mein atak gaya.
Narrator: But he never heard.

Bani: Office kaise thein.
Jai: Ache thein. Aaj maine ek ladke se mille thein gym mein. Uska naam Sahil hein bahut acha hein.

Pushkar: Chote Help yaar.
Narrator: But he never heard

Jai: Tum kya loge chai, coffee.
Bani: I'll have coffee.

Jai: Tony.
Tony: Ha saab-ji (Nepalese ascent)

Jai: Do Coffee lana.
In the meantime while they were talking Pushkar broke down the door.

Pushkar: Jai!
Jai: Veeru! I mean Pushkar!
Bani: Gabbar. I mean kya hua?

Pushkar: Tumne mere cheekne ki avase nahi suni.
Jai: Nahin Toh.
Pushkar: Wahi toh.

Bani: Kya hua.
Pushkar: I was locked inside the bloody bathroom.

Jai: Oh. Sorry yaar. Maaf karna nahin suni.
Bani: Anyways mujhe tho abhi chalna chahiye. Bye.

Jai: Bye.
(Staring at her and still waving though she had already gone)
Pushkar: Woh chali gayi.

Jai: Tum apne kaam karo aur agle baar darwase ko sirf bandh karo aur please do not lock it.
Pushkar mimicking Jai...: Aur please do not lock it.

That's all I could write will do more tomorrow here its late, need to sleep. It's vacation so you will expect an update tomorrow in the morning.

great part

please cont soon
thanks
sunju

great part.........finally an FF were jais in love ith bani ......continue soon
😆

Great ff.
liked it.
plz cont. soon

hey that was a great.
intro and first two updates.
btw.. when u update..
can u please put..
like the date and the pg number on the title..
so we know when u updated
thanks.
cheers
nir

Hey all. Here's more. Plz add more comments if appreciated otherwise I will know whether to write or not.
Part 3
Jai: Chalo hum Krishna Cottage dekhte hain.
Pushkar: Hanh!
Jai: Dekha Hain tumne.
Pushkar: Nahin Toh.
Jai: Wohi Toh.

(At night after the movie)
Jai: For God sakes it was just a movie.
Pushkar: Lekin Rati Agnihotri ke aankhein.
Jai: Hanh uski aaankhein. Tttum please mujhe dara mat.
Pushkar: OK. Mein khud dar raha hoon tho tumhe kyun dar ke maare kaap rahe hein.
Jai: I am not shaking, I just got Goosebumps.
Pushkar: Pata nahin hum raat kaise guzaar lenge. Hum Bani ko phone kare.
Jai: Hanh.

Bani: Hmmm! Arey kaun hain yaar. Hmm! Zuroor Pushkar aur Jai honge
Bani: Hi Jai, Hi Pushkar
Pushkar: Hello Bani.
Bani: Kya Hua?
Jai: Pushkar aur mein Krishna Cottage dekh li.
Bani: Maine tumhe bataya tha ki raat mein mat dekh uss picture ka.
Pushkar: Saila! Jai tumne DVD li hein. Tum yaad karo kya isne tumse yeh kaha
(flashback below)
Bani: Listen, tum yeh picture dinh mein dekhoonge raat mein nahin.
Jai: Okay.
(Flashback Over)
Jai: Sorry, kehdi magar shahid mein bhool gaya.
Pushkar: Bani too much violence to even hear I'll hang up the phone.
Bani: No problem vaise mein bhi katne wali hoon. Vaarna like last time you will make me talk to you the whole. Kya uss tumne sirf meri hi neend harap na tha.
Jai: Nahin toh.
Bani: Wohi toh. Now bye.
(Pushkar grabs Jai's neck)
Pushkar: Saila. You couldn't tell me that.
Jai: Tumhe tho patta hain jab mein Bani ko baat kar rahe hain tho mein sirf unhi ko dekhti hoon, yaar.
Pushkar: Sorry bhool gaya.

Next Morning
Jai: Gadhe ki aulad chale ya kuch bhaki hain.Come on office ke liye dher ho rahi hain.
Pushkar: Ya of course.

Sahil: Sir mein...
Jai: Sahil tu. Tu yahaan kya kar rahi hoon.
Sahil: Mein yahaan nokri ke liye aaya hoon.
Pushkar: Well welcome toWalia industries.
Sahil: You mean you are Jai Walia - India's most handsome business tycoon.
Jai: That's me.
Pushkar: And me?
Jai: Tum tho duffer hain.

Later on...
Jai: I was thinking ke why don't we ask Sahil and Bani to watch Haunted House with us.
Pushkar: Kya (scared)
Jai: Don't worry dinh mein hoga.
Pushkar: Phir teke.
(Jai phones Bani)
Bani: Hello
Jai: Hi Bani. I was thinking why don't we go to the movies today at 4.
Bani: Teke magar thori si mushkil hain.
Jai: Kya hua. Are you feeling alright?
Bani: I'm fine magar meri dadi aaye hein Panchgani se.
Jai: Tho unhiko saath mein le aao. Aur phir Pushkar ke Aunty bhi aa rahi hein tho unn dhono apni company par jah sakte while we watch a movie. What say?
Bani: Okay, that sounds like good. So we are meeting at 4.
Jai: Yah, okay bye.
Bani: Acha sunno Pushkar ko mera hi kehna. Bye.

(At the movies)
Bani: Jai aur Pushkar kaha hain.
Pushkar: Sorry we're late.
Jai: Ya, sorry but there was a lot of traffic.
Bani: No problem.
Dadi: Bani puttar. Yeh kaun si jaga hein?
Bani: Mall Joint dadi.
Dadi: Hanh Hanh, Beedi milege.
Bani: Nahin not here. Yeh movie theater hein.
Masi: Pushi tum kahaan ho.
Pushkar: Mein yahaan hoon Masi.
Masi: Yeh itna bara. Kya yeh Taj Mahal hein?
Jai: Nahin yeh Mall Joint hain magar its no less then a palace.
Masi: Hanh bahut bara hein.
(Pulled Jai's cheek and Pushkar's)
Bani: Chalo picture kuch dher mein shuru hoge.

(In the movies)
Bani sits in the middle.
(scary scene)
Bani grabs Jai by the arm and leaves fingernail marks. Jai sees her hand and is feeling in love.
Song: I love you my Angel Film: Pyare Mohan.
Up later: Other lives Aditya, Jigyasa, Rano, Sahil and Piya.
Took me long to type this. Spent the night on this sorry if it was boring as I was trying to have a comedy and romantic story. Sorry if it was boring but tell me so I can make it interesting. This story is dedicated to all the people at India Forums.
I will update later.
Bye!!!