FF:Aaj Ke Pyaar Upd8d 20/11 pg6 Part 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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People to tell you that I updated how must I put the date and page number on the title. Plz help as I a new.
This time couldn't do it but will with your help Nir out the date and page number.
Thanks in advance,
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Posted: 17 years ago
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No problem, found the way.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Chevi,

Funny parts, Mr. Nahin toh(Jai) n Mr. Wohi Toh (Pushkar) are like gum yaar, always 2gether 😆 😆 😆, the bathroom scene was good, poor Pushkar got locked up in bathroom, lol.

Do continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey all. Here's the latest. If you'll are wondering Tarun's character will come later. Hope you enjoy this one.
Part 4
Lets look at Aditya and Jigyasa. There life is no less complicated. Bechara Aditya.
Jigyasa: Hey you, kya tumne mere 2 lakh ki sona kangan ko dekha hain.
Aditya: Nahin Maharani-ji. Tum itna paisa karsh kyon karte hoon. I mean you have over 50 different sets of gold banagles and that is just gold.
Jigyasa. Hanh Hansh aur tumhare paas kuch nahin.Yeh sone ki gadhi joh iski time aafe hain tum usse kyon use karte ho.
Aditya: Tumse baatein karna bhi mushkil hain.
Jigyasa: Bhilkool. Tumhe appointment lehni padegi.
Aditya: Appointment! Ha!
Jigyasa; Aditya kya mein ek nahi car kareed loon.
Aditya: Kyon nahin. But why buy one, buy the whole company as you always change your car almost every week.
Jigyasa: Aap bhi na!
(Threw a book at Aditya)
Aditya: Ouch!

Now Rano and Sahil's life.
Sahil: Kal raat tum kaha thi. I was looking for you everywhere.
Rano: Mein...
Sahil: Nahin, tum sunoge. Rano I feel that we don't spend enough time with each other. Aur mujhe lagta hain ke tum mujhe avoid karne ki kaushish mein hoon.
Rano: Lekin tum bhi office mein hoon sare dinh.
Sahil: Woh alag baat hain. Mujhe nahi nokr mil gayi aur bahut sare kaam karni hogi.
Rano: Mujhe kuch poochna hain. Waqt kya hain jab tum office ghar tak paunchte hain.
Sahil: 7:00pm
Rano: Phir aapki dinner aur a cricket ya soccer game phir woh bahut der hain to go anywhere tho sirf ghar mein hi bhethe hain. Kya tumhe nahin lagta ki tum mere saath aur waqt guzaar lo.
Sahil: Okay baba I am sorry. Mujhe apni galathi ko dekhni hain before looking at yours.
Rano: Dekha, Hum bemathlab ki jagad kar rahe hein. Chalo hum soh jatae hein.
Now about Piya. I just decided to have some guys over from Zee Tv and Sony. Which includes
Abhi (Saat Phere)
Shabd (Maayka)
Tusshar (Banoo Mein Teri Dulhann)
Dev (new from Kaajal) Devindar

Piya: Oh God, where is Shabd?
(Nokia Tune on Piya's cell phone)
Piya: Tum Kahaan ho Shabd?
Shabd: I'm sorry Piya actually mein bhool gaya ki aaj meri dadi annewali hain America se so mein nahin aa sakta. Sorry.
(He hang up)

Piya: But Shabd. Mein Abhi ko phone karti hoon shahid woh available.
Abhi: Hello.
Piya: Hi Abhi.
Abhi: Whatever you want to do it is not my day, my day is on Thursday. Bye!
Piya: Lekin Abhi.

Piya: Mein Tusshar ko phone lagata hoon.
Tusshar: Piya whatever you want to say, I am sorry but its over. I love Vidya now. So, Bye.
Piya: Hello... Kaat gaya. Bewakoof. Mujhe chod ke uss Vidya ke paas gayi.

(Dev is carrying coffee and it falls on her)
Piya: Ahhhhh! Idiot, Stupid, Moron.
Dev: I'm really sorry, meri galthi hain.
Piya: Just get lost!
Dev: Naraaz kyon hoti hain. Jaa raha hoon baba.

Tho yeh Piya ki story hain thora complicated but you got the taste. Now we will look at Aparajit and Rashi's life. Come on down. Note: Rashi calls Apararjit, Api, for short. Aparajit calls her Jaan
Scene: Ready for a candlelight Dinner. Rashi looks ravishing.

Aparajit: Jaan tum kahaan ho?
Rashi: Mein yahaan hoon.
Aparajit: WOW! You look so beautiful.
Rashi: Thanks. Chalein.
Aparajit: Chalo.

(After eating)
Aparajit: Dance.
Rashi: Teke.
(They dance to Dil Ka Rishta from Dil Ka Rishta)   ;   ;
Rashi: Chalo ghar chalte hain Api.
Aparajit: Joh aap ka hukum hain.

So there life is very romantic and they love each other dearly.

That's it guys. If I have time I will post another one later. I might not have time for two tomorrow but might post one so stay tuned. Thank you for all your comments, I have read through them.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here's the latest. If you'll are wondering Tarun's character will come later. Hope you enjoy this one.
Part 4
Lets look at Aditya and Jigyasa. There life is no less complicated. Bechara Aditya.
Jigyasa: Hey you, kya tumne mere 2 lakh ki sona kangan ko dekha hain.
Aditya: Nahin Maharani-ji. Tum itna paisa karsh kyon karte hoon. I mean you have over 50 different sets of gold banagles and that is just gold.
Jigyasa. Hanh Hansh aur tumhare paas kuch nahin.Yeh sone ki gadhi joh iski time aafe hain tum usse kyon use karte ho.
Aditya: Tumse baatein karna bhi mushkil hain.
Jigyasa: Bhilkool. Tumhe appointment lehni padegi.
Aditya: Appointment! Ha!
Jigyasa; Aditya kya mein ek nahi car kareed loon.
Aditya: Kyon nahin. But why buy one, buy the whole company as you always change your car almost every week.
Jigyasa: Aap bhi na!
(Threw a book at Aditya)
Aditya: Ouch!

Now Rano and Sahil's life.
Sahil: Kal raat tum kaha thi. I was looking for you everywhere.
Rano: Mein...
Sahil: Nahin, tum sunoge. Rano I feel that we don't spend enough time with each other. Aur mujhe lagta hain ke tum mujhe avoid karne ki kaushish mein hoon.
Rano: Lekin tum bhi office mein hoon sare dinh.
Sahil: Woh alag baat hain. Mujhe nahi nokr mil gayi aur bahut sare kaam karni hogi.
Rano: Mujhe kuch poochna hain. Waqt kya hain jab tum office ghar tak paunchte hain.
Sahil: 7:00pm
Rano: Phir aapki dinner aur a cricket ya soccer game phir woh bahut der hain to go anywhere tho sirf ghar mein hi bhethe hain. Kya tumhe nahin lagta ki tum mere saath aur waqt guzaar lo.
Sahil: Okay baba I am sorry. Mujhe apni galathi ko dekhni hain before looking at yours.
Rano: Dekha, Hum bemathlab ki jagad kar rahe hein. Chalo hum soh jatae hein.
Now about Piya. I just decided to have some guys over from Zee Tv and Sony. Which includes
Abhi (Saat Phere)
Shabd (Maayka)
Tusshar (Banoo Mein Teri Dulhann)
Dev (new from Kaajal) Devindar

Piya: Oh God, where is Shabd?
(Nokia Tune on Piya's cell phone)
Piya: Tum Kahaan ho Shabd?
Shabd: I'm sorry Piya actually mein bhool gaya ki aaj meri dadi annewali hain America se so mein nahin aa sakta. Sorry.
(He hang up)

Piya: But Shabd. Mein Abhi ko phone karti hoon shahid woh available.
Abhi: Hello.
Piya: Hi Abhi.
Abhi: Whatever you want to do it is not my day, my day is on Thursday. Bye!
Piya: Lekin Abhi.

Piya: Mein Tusshar ko phone lagata hoon.
Tusshar: Piya whatever you want to say, I am sorry but its over. I love Vidya now. So, Bye.
Piya: Hello... Kaat gaya. Bewakoof. Mujhe chod ke uss Vidya ke paas gayi.

(Dev is carrying coffee and it falls on her)
Piya: Ahhhhh! Idiot, Stupid, Moron.
Dev: I'm really sorry, meri galthi hain.
Piya: Just get lost!
Dev: Naraaz kyon hoti hain. Jaa raha hoon baba.

Tho yeh Piya ki story hain thora complicated but you got the taste. Now we will look at Aparajit and Rashi's life. Come on down. Note: Rashi calls Apararjit, Api, for short. Aparajit calls her Jaan
Scene: Ready for a candlelight Dinner. Rashi looks ravishing.

Aparajit: Jaan tum kahaan ho?
Rashi: Mein yahaan hoon.
Aparajit: WOW! You look so beautiful.
Rashi: Thanks. Chalein.
Aparajit: Chalo.

(After eating)
Aparajit: Dance.
Rashi: Teke.
(They dance to Dil Ka Rishta from Dil Ka Rishta)   ;   ;
Rashi: Chalo ghar chalte hain Api.
Aparajit: Joh aap ka hukum hain.

So there life is very romantic and they love each other dearly.

That's it guys. If I have time I will post another one later. I might not have time for two tomorrow but might post one so stay tuned. Thank you for all your comments, I have read through them.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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g8t update 👏 👏.
do conitnue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey here is an upd8. Plz post comments. Thanks Siumi and Sunju and every1 who posted comments.
Part 5
(Jai's kaushish to get rid of Pushkar)
Jai: Pushkar why don't you get the car.
Pushkar: Mujhe kyon?
Jai: Just get the car.
Pushkar: Why don't you get the car.
Bani: Tum dhono hamesha jhagadte rehte hein. Mein khud jaah rahi hoon.
Masi: Bani Puttar you go with them mein aur dadi ek doosre ke saath jayengi.
Dadi: Hanh aur phir bhi aggar tum Jai ke saath nahin gaye tho tumhe jaaga nahin milega car mein. Samji.
Bani: Hanh! Teke Teke.
Pushkar: Lets go!

Pushkar: Jai please yahaan rukh na?
Jai: But Why?
Pushkar: Because yeh meri favorite jaga hain. I want a pie.
Jai: Bani I hope you don't mind. Sirf paanch minutes.
Bani: No problem.
Pushkar: Nahin mein gadhi se uthroonga tum dhono nahin.
Jai: Yeh sahi. Hum gadhi mein hi rukhenge.
Bani: Hanh. Vaise hi mein bahut hi thak jukha ho.
Pushkar: Bas dus minute.

Bani: Tum aur Pushkar hamesha se saath hain.
Jai: Nahin Toh.
Bani: Wohi Toh. Ab mein apni kitaab padhti hoon.
Jai: Of course.
(Jai looks at her through the mirror and looks at how beautiful she is. He wants to ask her to marry her)
Jai: Bani mein........
Pushkar: I am back. Kya hua?
Bani: Kuch nahin bas Jai mujhe kuch batha rahein thein. Kya hein Jai.
Jai: Kuch nahin. Do you like BMW's.
Bani: Yah but tu meri raai kyon pooch rahi ho.
Jai: Bas info ke liye.
Pushkar: Bore ho raha. Chalo jaate hein.

(While getting home Pushkar and Bani fell fast asleep as they were very tired. Note: Bani is sitting in the front seat)
Jai: Aa gaya. Bani...
(He looks at her sleeping, she looked so peaceful and calm)
Song: Maula Mere Maula Film: Anwar
(He decides to wake her up)
Jai: Bani, Bani utto. Tumhare ghar aaya.
Bani: Oh sorry Jai.
Jai: No problem. Vaise I was planning to carry you but you made it easy.
Bani: Shut up! Accha kal milte hain.
Jai: Okay. Bye.

(Telephone rings)
Jai: Hello. Kaun bhol raha hain?
Tarun: Dude, it's me.
Jai: Hello me. I'm sorry but I don't recognize you.
Tarun: Shut up yaar. Mein Tarun.
Jai: Oh Sorry Tarun. Howzit?
Tarun: Not too bad. Pushkar hain?
Jai: Hanh. Ek minute.

Jai: Pushkar tumhara phone.
Pushkar: Hello.
Tarun: Hi Pushkar. Listen its Tarun here. Mujhe rehne ki liye ek jaga chahiye. Tho maine socha ki kyon mein aapka aur Jai ka ghar mein rahoon. Bas permission ki zuroorat hein aur mein aaonga.
Pushkar: Of course. Kyun nahin, why not yaar.
Tarun: Tho mein aa raha hoon. Yipee!

Hey guys I know this is very short but wanted to post something as I was bored. Have to go somewhere now. Sorry if it was boring. Plz post comments whether it was boring or you liked it a lot.
Advert: Tarun at Jai and Pushkar's house. Bani and Tarun meet.
Please and Thank you.
Chevi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey..
aww i loved jai..
he wants to marry bani so cute..
omg tarun is coming that is not cool..
continue soon
please
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi

Great updates, just read all the parts.

Please continue soon.

Nikita
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
Great updates.
liked it.
plz cont. soon

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