FF:Aaj Ke Pyaar Upd8d 20/11 pg6 Part 13 - Page 3

Hey this is the latest. I am off vacation so now I may only be posting short posts but nevertheless will post in to keep you'll informed.
Part 6
(Tarun parks at the front of Jai's house with his Ferrari)
Jai: Hi Tarun.
Tarun: Hi. Get me some tea.
Jai: Of course.
Pushkar: Hey Tarun.
Tarun: I don't believe in hugs, just show me my room.
Pushkar: Ya, right this way.
(Jai decides to telephone Bani)

Jai: Hello Bani.
Bani: Hi Jai. Kya hua? Kyun phone kiya.
Jai: Well, just to let you know Tarun is here. Mein tumhe kuch bathana chatha hoon. (Marriage) Mein...
Bani: Oh my god, Tarun, Mein usse college mein pyaar karte thein aur woh yahaan. Mein abhi aa rahi hoon.
Jai: Tum Tarun se pyaar...
Bani: Hanh. College ke dinho se. Voh bhi mujhe chaati hein. Jai tum teek ho? Kya hua?
Jai: Kuch nahin. Mein phone rakhti hoon.
Bani: Okay. See you there.
(Jai puts the phone down and breaks down crying)

Jai: Baghwan mein har dinh aap ki chaukat par aati hoon. Tum mujhe zaara sa khushi nahin deh sakta. Mein bhi Bani ko chaata hoon par nahin voh bhi Tarun ko pyaar karti hein. Mein rukhavat nahin ban na hain. Mein isse bhoolonge. Mujhe shakti dho. Please.
Phushkar: Jai, Jai what happened.
Jai: Bhaiya..... Bani....
Pushkar: Oh ab samajh mein aaya. Saila! You don't worry everything will be fine.

Bani: Hi Jai. Tarun kaha hain?
Jai: Voh...
(Tarun comes down the stairs)
Bani: Hi Tarun.
Tarun: Hey Bani
Bani: Itne saalon ki baad. Not fair.
Tarun: So lets make up.
(They have a long hug)
(Pushkar sees them. He wants to tell Bani everything. But Jai stops him)
Jai: Nahin Pushkar. Just look at them. Voh itni khush hain, tumhe lagta hain ki voh itna khush hogi mere saath?
Pushkar: Of course. Tumhare paas ek bungalow hain, gadhi hain aur paisa hain toh tum uski saari zuroorathein phuri kar sakte ho.

Jai: Bungalow hain. Tarun ke paas ek palace hain. Gadhi hain leking uske paas tho ek Ferrari hain. Paisa hain mere paas lekin itna zyaada ke mein usse jho bhi chaaho dilha sakte hain. Tarun ke paas voh sab kuch hain. Voh itni khush yeh mere liye kaafi hain jeene ke liye.
Pushkar: Matlab tum shaadi nahin karoge.
Jai: Nahin. Hargis nahin.
Pushkar: Lekin Jai...
(Jai walks away with his head down)

This is very short. I hope it is interesting. Will post a long one tomorrow if I get the chance. Plz post comments whether you liked it.
Plz and thanks in advance.
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First!

Jai is so cute, always something pops up when Jai is trying to tell Bani his feelings
Pushkar is so funny, and Pia is just plain stupid
Im getting bad vibes from Tarun, he better not come in between Jai and Bani

Niks

Hey everyone here is the latest.
Part 7
(Bani comes to Jai's house)
Bani: Hi Jai.
Jai: Hi Bani.
Bani: Tarun aur mein picnic par chal rahe hein tho I was thinking ki tum aur Pushkar kyon nahin aaonga.
Jai: Actually Bani if you don't mind mujhe apni dost ko bhi lenah chati hoon aur uski biwi aur koi aur aa sakte hain.
Bani: Hanh! Of course why not.
Jai: Accha tho hum ek baje milegi.
Bani: Hanh! Roshan Park parr.

(Jai phones Sahil)
Sahil: Hello.
Jai: Hey Sahil.
Sahil: Yes Boss.
Jai: Gallath. Office mein, mein aapka boss lekin bahar tum mujhe Jai bholauge.
Sahil: Yes Jai, kyon yaad kiya.
Jai: Today mein aur mere dost picnic par jaa rahi hain. So I was wondering why don't you come to.
Sahil: Teke, kya mein wife aur sister-in-law ko lah sakti hain.
Jai: Zuroor. Why not! Teek ek baje Roshan Park.

Rano: Kaun tha?
Sahil: Jai Walia sir. Voh humhe picnic par bulah rahi hein.
Rano: Hum Nivi koh saath mein lethi hain.
Sahil: Hanh.

Gayu: Di, mujhe park par jaana hein.
Piya: Kya hain batamiese? Tumhe park jaana hein na jao.
Gayu: Tumhare saath.
Piya: Ziddi ladki. You are just plain spoilt. Lekin mein itni acchi hoon ki let's go.
Gayu: Yes mein apni dost klho bhi bulah rahi hoon.

Jai: Mein Aparajit ko bhi phone karoonga.
Aparajit: Hello.
Jai: Hanh. Aparajit Jai here.
Aparajit: Hanh Jai. Bolo kya baat hain. After all mein Anokha.....
Jai: Arey! Chup. Kya tum aur Rashi ma'am aa sakti picnic par. Ek baje, Roshan Park.
Aparajit: Okay. Vaise I didn't have something to do lekin tumne bhi purah kar liya. Mein wahi hoga.

Jai: Mein Aditya ko bhi phone karti hoon.
Aditya: Hello.
Jai: Hanh. Aditya it's me Jai.
Aditya: Hanh Jai bolo.
Jai: Aditya I was thinking why don't you come with us to the park with us.
Aditya: Yah, actually that is a good idea. Sure why not I will come.
Jai: Cool so ek baje Roshan Park.

(They all clash at the park)
Aditya: Aparajit tu.
Aparajit: Aditya tu.
Aditya: Kitne saalon ki baad.
Jai: Ek minute tum dhono ek dosre se jaante hoon?
Aparajit: Yah. Oh by the way this is my wife Rashi.
Aditya: aur yeh meri biwi hein Jigyasa.

Gayu: Nivi tum.
Nivi: Hey tum yahaan kya kar rahi hoon.
Gayu: Mein yahaan apni family ke saath hoon. Why don't you and Piya join us.
Piya: Hi Jai.
Jai: Oh no! Voh yahaan bhi hein.
Pushkar: Shit!

Tarun: Chalo hum volleyball khelte hain.
Bani: That's a good idea.
Jai: Kaun kis ki side par hoga.
Bani: Jai aur Tarun captain hoge.
Pushkar: Soch samage kar choice ki jiye Piya was number one at volleyball.
Aditya: Let's flip a coin. Phir humhe tho patha chalega who will choose first.
Sahil: Kismat ka panna aaj shuru hota hain Tarun ke saath.
Pushkar: Soch lo kis ke saath jayegi Piya joh ki master hain yah Bani.
Tarun: I choose...

You will know this next time guys. Had to make it a bit interesting. Sorry if it was boring. Plz post comments. Let me know if I must make it more interesting or more funny or any other tips. I know it is kind of short but nevertheless plz read. Thanks for comments.
Thanks,
Chevi

hey you cant stop at such a suspenceful part!!! not fair!!

anyways great part !!!!!!!!!!!!

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Part 8
Tarun: I choose........................................Piya!!!
(Piya hugs Tarun for partnership)
Bani: Kya!
Aditya: Ab tumhari bari hein Jai.
Jai: Mein Bani kho chunti hoon.
Pushkar: Kya!
Piya: Gayu please aao.
Bani: Pushkar.
Jai: Thanks. Ussi ko chunne ke liye.
Bani: Apne mujhe chunna tha tho yeh sab tho karni padhegi.

(Tarun hits the ball and it lands up in the middle of Jai and Bani and both of them go for it. Jai manages to hit it but the two clash and Bani falls on top of Jai)
Bani: I'm sorry...sorry.
(Jai is not worried he is looking in her eyes while the game is carrying on)
Song: Kya Mujhe Pyaar Hai Film: Woh Lamhe.
Tarun: Bani are you okay.
Bani: Jai are you alright?
Jai: Yah. Of course. Ah!
Bani: Arey! Yeh itna gehra hain. Ek minute.
(She takes out a scarf type of thing and ties it around Jai's elbow. Tarun was getting a bit jealous)
Tarun: Mamooli si chot hain. Chalo Bani kahin chalte hain.
Bani: What's wrong with Tarun, Jai ko zakhm hain aur tum drive ke baare mein bata rahein hein.
Jai: Nahin it's alright, koio baat nahin.
Piya: Jai are you okay.
Jai: I'm fine.
Jigyasa: What the hell. He is saying he's fine.
Aditya: Arey! Chup karo tum.
Aparajit: Rashi tumhari paas davaah hein usse dehne ke liye.
Rashi: Hanh! Yeh lo.
Pushkar: Ek minute. Bani tum apply karoge.
Bani: Teke.

(Bani is applying the cream but he is thinking that he cannot dream about her anymore because whatever happens she loves Tarun and even if he has feelings for her, she won't accept it)
Bani: Ho gaya.
Jai: Mujhe lagta hain ki mujhe ab jaana chahiye.
Aditya: Nahin Jai, khana tho kah le.
Bani: Hanh Jai. Mere liye.
Jai: Teke, chalo.

Bani: Jai yeh lehlo maine banaya hain tumhare liye.
Jai: Yeh kya hain.
Bani: Kheer. Yaad hein bachpan mein tumhari ma nein tumhare liye yeh banaya tha.
Jai: Hanh! Yaad hein. Tho dho na.
(Bani feeds Jai and Pushkar is happy as he feels there is love between them and on the other hand Tarun is burning with jealousy and anger)
(Two ladies walk by and sees Bani feeding Jai)
1st lady: Kitn accha jodi hain.
2nd lady: They're made for made for each other.
Tarun: I think Bani humhe chalna chahiye.
Bani: Hanh bahut dher hunhi.
Aditya: I think we all should leave.
Jigyasa: Kya aap ko patta hain I have a manicure scheduled.
Aparajit: Humko bhi chalna chahiye.
Piya: Mujhe Shabd se milna hain. Chalo Gayu
Rashi: Humko bhi ek movie watch karni hain.
Jai: Chalo Pushkar.
Pushkar: Jai araam se.
Jai: Don't worry I'm fine.
Bani: Okay, bye everybody.

(Next morning)
Pushkar: Jai utto.
Jai: I'm sorry I think I overslept.
Pushkar: No problem. Mein kaam se chuti already leh jhuka hoon. Kyon galath kiya?
Jai: Nahin toh.
Pushkar: Wohi toh. Actually Bani aa rahi hein later.
Jai: Teke. Abhi mein nahata hoon. Please Tony se kahiye ki mujhe cereal chahiye breakfast ke liye.
Pushkar: Teke.

(Bani enters while Jai is eating breakfast)
Bani: Hi Jai.
Jai: Hi Bani. I am so sorry about yesterday. Tum aur Tarun jaghadna shuru ho gaya aur sab meri vaja se tumhe itna Tarun par chilana padhaa.)
Bani: Lekin meri hi galathi hain. Maine tumhare uppar girha tha. Pushkar kaha hein.
Pushkar: Mein yahaan hoon. Tumhe kuch chahiye coffee yah chai.
Bani: I'll have Pepsi.
Pushkar: Abhi lathi hoon.
Jai: Aap office nahin gaye?
Bani: Nahin. Aaj chuti hain.
Pushkar: Yeh lo aapki Pepsi.
Bani: Oops! I totally forgot that mujhe Tarun ko pick up karna hain. Kya mein isse gadhi mein pi sakti hoon.
Jai: Of course.
Bani: Bye.
Jai: Chahe tum Tarun ki ho lekin tum meri har dhadkan meri har saansein sirf tumhari, sirf tumhari.
Song: Jeena Sirf Mere Liye (Male) Film: Jeena Sirf Mere Liye.

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Hey guys here's the latest

Part 9
(Tarun tries to get close to Bani)
(She moves away shy)
Tarun's conscience: What's wrong with she's not a child.
Tarun: Bani I was thinking why don't we invite the guys and we all can go to the club.
Bani: Ya, that's a good idea par hum club nahin jate.
Tarun: Tum theeno bachche nahin ho, grow up.
Bani: Jai nahin manega.
Tarun: Mein manaounga. Lagi shart!
Bani: Lagi lekin trust me it ain't that easy

(Bani telephones Jai)

Jai: Hello.
Bani: Hello Jai.
Jai: Hanh, Bani, kya baat hain?
Bani: Tarun ne socha ki mein, tum, Pushkar aur voh club jaye.
Jai: Lekin Bani tum janti ho ki mein club disco vagera vagera nahin jaata hoon.
Bani: Jai mujhe patta magar mere liye please.
Jai: Teke when's kick off?
Bani: Shut Up! Teek char bajje.
Jai: I'll be there. Bye.
Bani: Bye. (She hang up)
Jai: I love you (He puts the phone down)

Jai: Pushkar, Bani invited us to the club.
Pushkar: But you do not go to clubs.
Jai: She said do this for me. So mein kar raha hoon.
Pushkar: Whatever. Kitne bajje.
Jai: Char bajje.

Aditya: Hi Jai. Mujhe kuch zuroori baat karni hain
Jai: Bolo Aditya Uncle kya hua. Tum itne pareshan kyun ho?
Aditya: Dekho Jai, tum aur Pushkar bahut sare kaam ki hain is business lekin we are a loss.
Jai: Lekin how did that happen? Maine koi paisa nahin li.
Aditya: Patta hain Jai, lekin kisi ne paisa zuroor li hain.
Jai: Kaun hai. Do you know something about this?
Aditya: Unfortunately, nahin.
Jai: Phir....(He breaks down) Maine itne saare menaat ki hain iss business mein. Kitne unchai thak paunch gaye aur jaha mein dekh raha hoon mera company accha chal raha hein.
Aditya: Mein aise sochti hoon, but what can I do Jai court ka orders aggar hum kch intezam nahin karte tho humhari business doob jayega. Yes Jai, sab khattam ho jayega.
Jai: Kya, yeh kaisa ho sakta hain.
Aditya: Court ka orders hain ki aggar humhe bank repay nahin karte joh karz hain chuka nahin sakta tho voh humhari business ko hazam karega. Aur usske uppar mall ban jayega.
Pushkar: What is happening. Jai ne itna kaam ki hain iss business mein aur hum kaise.....
Aditya: Tumhe kuch karna hain.
Jai: Humhe aur koi job milna chahiye.
Pushkar: Hum kaise job dhoondle. Humhari image jo society mein hain voh khattam ho jayega.
Jai: I know lekin humhe business ke liye karna hain na?
Pushkar: Nahin hum kaise Jai...
Aditya: Faisla tere haath mein hain.

(At the club)
Bani: Where's Jai?
Tarun: Patta nahin.
Jai: Hi Bani.
Bani: Hi Jai, you look awesome. (She hugs Jai)
Tarun: Kya! Chalo drinks order karre
Jai & Bani: Mein pita nahin.
(They both look at each other)
Tarun's conscience: Mujhe kuch sochna hoga vaarna Jai, Bani ko mujhse duur lega. Idea!

That was the latest hope you like it!
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Hey, here is a quick upd8. Plz post comments. Thanks for all comments. This is my decade in Parts 1-10. Woooh!!!!!

Part 10
Tarun: Hi Jai. Tum pitein nahin ho so I brought you coke.
Jai: Thanks.
Tarun: Tumhare liye Bani aur Pushkar scotch.
Pushkar: Thank you.
Tarun's conscience: Now Jai will be behosh.
(Little did he know the plan will be exercised on someone else.)

Jai: Wow! Nice place.
Tarun's conscience: Yeh Jai behosh kyun nahin ho?
Bani: Yah... Lovely. Ah!
Jai: Bani, Bani
(She faints)
Tarun's conscience: Oh Shit! Drinks swap ho gayi. Ab kya kare.

Jai: Tarun, yeh kya hua?
Tarun: Mujhe lagta hain ki mujhe usse ghar lehna hain.
Jai: Chalo.

(They arrive in the driveway)
Tarun: Ek minute. She can't walk so I'll have to carry her. Ah!
(She was too heavy for him)
Pushkar: Don't worry it happened with me too but Jai can lift her. Don't ask how.
Jai: Shut up! She's not that heavy. Chalo mein utta tha hoon.
Tarun: If you can.
(Jai picks her up and she rests her head on his shoulders)
Song: Bepanah Pyaar Hain Aaja Film: Kasam Se (Male version)

Puskar: Jai kya hua. Chalo.
Jai: Hanh.
(He lays her down on the couch and he checks if she is alright)
Tarun: Bani, Bani, can you hear me?
Bani: Jai, Jai.
(Jai is shocked, he smiles broadly)
Jai: Hanh... Hanh Bani...
(She knocks out again)
Tarun's conscience: She called Jai's name aur she didn't even mention me. Hadh ho gayi. Lekin Jai bhi nahin patta ki maine paisa churaya tha. Poor Jai! Ab vho kya karega.

Jai: I think mein usse bedroom mein shift karti hoon.
Tarun: Arey itna dher ho gaya.
Jai: Lekin, you stay here.
Tarun: Not anymore, I'll stay in a hotel.
Pushkar: Teke. Bye!
Tarun: Bye. I'll come in the afternoon and see her.
Jai: Ya, okay, sounds cool, Bye.

Pushkar: Shucks, I thought he'll never leave.
Jai: Shut up yaar!
Pushkar: Okay, Good night, mottu
Jai: Kya anyways, Good night!

(He picks her up once more)
(He lays her on the bed and the wind is blowing through the window and it blows her hair. He pushes it back and kisses her on her forehead)
(He is feeling sad about not being able to tell his real feelings to her but she loves Tarun and that was the truth, no matter what)
Jai: Bani, tum janti ho. I couldn't tell this to your face lekin ab mein... mujhe kehna hain ki I love you lekin tum abhi.... you're still unconscious.
(He looks away)

(Bani gets up shocked)
Bani: Tumhne mujhe itna badha raaz chupaya.
Jai: Bani.... tum tho.
Bani: Behosh tha. Jai how could you do this. I mean. Tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahin.
Jai: Actually Bani... tum Tarun se pyaar karte ho na?
Bani: Lekin usse zyaada mein tumhe pyaar karta hoon. I love you god damn it.
Jai: Mein bhi tumse pyaar karti hoon, lekin.
(Bani hugs Jai)

Pushkar: Jai, Jai...
Jai: Hmmm!
Pushkar: Jai kya hua. Dreaming na. I mean tum abhi yahaan iss waqt doesn't look right na.
Jai: Sorry lekin voh... kuch soch raha tha.
Pushkar: Jaanta hoon business ke silsilay mein.
Jai: Hanh, I don't know lekin kaun ho voh aadmi jisne paisa loot li.
Pushkar: You don't worry Jai, everything will be alright.
Jai: How can anything be alright. If we don't pay the bank back in three months tho sab khattam ho jayega.
Pushkar: I know Jai, lekin you have to be strong. You are this company's owner and no one can take that identity away from you. Look at you Jai, you are a tycoon and that to at 23 lekin phir bhi tumhe lagta hain ki you are not capable of anything. Dekho tum... you'll handle everything.
Jai: Kya handle karoon? Tumhe patta hain ki yeh ghar mera nahin hain, company nein mujhe ek gift ke liye kharidha aur mein...
(He breaks down)
Jai: Mere zindagi mein dard ke siva aur kuch nahin hein. First, I lose Bani and second my identity, my house and most of all my company and all the hard workers. I don't know...
Pushkar: Bhagwan sab teek karega.
Jai: Bhagwan. Ha! If there is a god then why is he doing this to me. Mere paas ma yah baap bhi nahin. I still carried on in life not worrying. I took away all my pleasures but still came through as a business tycoon.
(Jai hugs Pushkar)
Pushkar: I promise you, I will make everything right for you. Tarun wait and watch.


That was all. Sooo sorry I took long to upd8.
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Chevi

Great updates.
liked it.
just caught up 😊
plz cont. soon

Hey all. This is quite short but hope you enjoy it. Thanks for all comments.

Part 11
(Bani gets up in the morning)
Bani: Jai, Jai.
Jai: Hanh! Bani what's the problem.
Bani: Mein yahaan kya kar raha hoon.
Jai: Actually Bani in the club tum... you fell unconscious.
Bani: I'm sorry Jai, I didn't know.
Jai: No problem I'll get you something to eat.

(He comes back)
Bani: Mujhe nahin khana hain.
Jai: Bani you have to eat.
Bani: Nahin Jai, please.
Jai: Arey! You're just like a child. Listen I'll feed you like a chota bacha.
Bani: Lekin.
Jai: Chup mu kholo.
(He feeds her and she eats quietly)
Jai: See, khattam ho gayi. Yeh lo dhood. Now drink your milk.
Bani: Thanks Jai.
Jai: Dost se thank you ya Sorry nahin kehna chahiye.
Bani: Jai you're so sweet.
(She hugs him)

Bani: What's the time?
Jai: 10:30. Yah I know this is the latest you've ever gotten up but you should rest.
Bani: Yah you're right but mera boss...
Jai: Don't worry I've already taken care of that. I called up and told ki tum nahin aa pauonge.
Bani: Oh Jai, I wish Tarun was like you.
(She kisses him on the cheek and gets up to go to the bathroom.)
Jai: Araam se. Araam se.
Bani: No, I'm fine Jai. I'll do it on my own.
Jai: Nahin Bani, you can't do it.
Bani: Tho phir aur kya karoon?
Jai: Accha, I think I'll have to carry you.
Bani: Teke magar...
Jai: No aggar magar. Chalo.
(He picked her up and put her in the bathroom)
Bani: I'll take it from here.
Jai: Okay, you sure na?
Bani: Yah, okay.
Jai: Teke mein neeche tumhare liye breakfast par intezaar karoonga.
Bani: Accha.

(She finish bathing and comes down with her wet hair and she is drying her hair.)
(Jai cannot take his eyes of her and so she clicks her finger)
Bani: Kya hua?
Jai: Kuch nahin voh... Anyway yeh lo tera breakfast.
Bani: Thanks Jai for taking care of me.
Jai: Anytime.
Pushkar: Morning Jai.
Jai: You woke up so late.
Pushkar: Hanh, kal raat, you know Priyanka Chopra aur mein...
Jai: No I don't want to know.
Pushkar: Lekin... koi baat nahin.
Bani: Hahaha. Tum dhono too much ho.
Pushkar & Jai: Nahin toh.
Bani: (chuckles) Wohi Toh.
Jai: Ha, maine batana bhool gaya Tarun aa raha hein shyam ko.
Bani: Really lekin...
Jai: Don't worry it he promised he'll come before midnight. (Chuckles)
Bani: Okay, then its fine.
(She walks and he duppata gets stuck on the chair)
(Jai goes and helps her to take it out but matters get worse when her hair gets stuck onto his chain. They are both struggling.)

(Tarun pops in and sees this)
Tarun: Yeh kya ho raha hein?
Bani: Tarun dekho na mera baal attak gaya.
Jai: Please help us na?
Pushkar's conscience: Hmmm! Aggar woh dhono kabhi alg na ho tho. Idea!
(While Tarun is walking there Pushkar pushes hhi skate board there and Tarun slipa and falls)
Jai: Oh no! Pushkar.
Pushkar: Natasha hi darling. How are you and you're phoning me now after such a long time.
(Pushkar goes away into his room and locks the door)
Bani: Ab kya karoon?
Jai: Patta nahin.

(Aparajit and Aditya walk in)
Aditya: Jai kya ho raha hein?
Aparajit: Aditya love scene ho raha hein aur kya?
Aditya: Hanh.
Jai: Nahin uska baal attak gaya meri watch par and if I lift my hand her body will be exposed. Bolo ab mein kya karoon?
Aditya: Ek minute mein help karta hoon. Lo ho gaya.
Jai: I'm sorry Bani woh... watch... mein isse abhi... I'll take it off right now.
Bani: It's okay. Tarun tum teek ho?
Tarun: I'm fine. How are you?
Bani: Mein teek hoon?
(They both hug)
(Jai looks away sadly)

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