FF: Better Half chap35, p60, 16/06 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
great start, i think the boy bani slapped was jai 😉

please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
Awesome part.
loved it.
Awwww....loved this Bani very much...she is something...no she is dynamic 😉
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23

What a pataka yaar this BANI KAPOOR 😉
Aweosme start 👏
Loved it n enjoyed it very much 😃
continue soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
Hey
brilliant part 😉


Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
great fanfic!!

i wonder who the boy is???????????/ i dont think that it is jai because he would not take things so nicely!!!! maybe its pushkar!!!


pls cont soon
thanks
sunju


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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
Haha
drunk Bani
is hillarious
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 Bani drunk...Oh god she is a diwali pataka yaar..Intoduction mein hee kisiko maara..woh bhi to give justice to his face, she slapped him on the pther cheek as well 😆 😆 😆 ..
This is sure an interesting FF..To see Bani like this is something I dont wanna miss
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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next part i am going to write about jai walia.
i will try to write it tomorrow during my lecture 😛 and post it same time.
now i have to think hard to make it more intresting so that i dont let down ur hopes 😊

wish me all da luck 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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best of luck dear n have a nice time too 😉 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30

Thanks to everyone for all comments🤗

your comments encourages me to write more. please keep your comments comming and let me know if you guys feel anything wrong or offensive in my story.

**************CHAPTER 2**************

India, Mumbai

2:00am

A party is in full swing, latest western music in on loudly, girls and boys are dancing wildly. Atmosphere is more like a western style, girls are wearing too exposing dresses as they can, and falling all over boys, Which boys are enjoying more. What else they want girls are exposing themselves as much as they can and more on that they are falling over them freely, no sharam no hayya.

Close to dance floor, you see a group of boys standing very close to each other, discussing something, drinks in their hands.

Suddenly one of them puts his class down at the desk and starts to move towards the dance floor.

That boy is wearing pure white lacoset's sports shoes, faded designer's jeans with Versace black t-shirt, on top of that leather's black jacket. While he's heading towards the dance floor, takes his jacket off and throws it towards his friends and you see silver gold's shiny heavy bracelet, written a capital letter J on the top of that in bold.😍😍

Reaching at the dance floor, he grabs a girl pulling her from her arm to face him who was dancing with some other guy and starts dancing with her. (the other boy who was dancing with the girl, stand there dumbfounded, irritated and moves from there to get a drink for himself) The girl gives him a flirty smile and does not protest at all.

The boy winks at girl and gives her evil smile in return.😈

THE GUY IS NONEOTHER THAN OUR DASHING JAI WALIA.

😎

Jai leans over girl, hands moving all over her body, too close to each other that no space to move for air. Swinging, moving, dancing, touching and doing everything what they can do while dancing.

He looks where his friends are standing and wink at them, telling them see how easy it is to do whatever you want to do with a girl not even letting her know that you're playing some nasty game with her.😎😉

After sometime jai excuses himself and goes towards the bar counter where his friends were standing. He looks towards the boy who was giving him angry looks😡 which jai returns with one of his calming smile. He is the same boy whose girl jai grabbed to dance with.

Boy is wearing jeans with white t-shirt, and he is none other than PUSHKAR.😎

Jai takes one of the empty seats and gives HI 5 to his friends, who were giving him well done looks and smiling at him.

Jai takes a sip from his glass and looks at pushkar who was almost ready to burst with anger.

Jai tried his best to control his laughter but could not ressit for any longer and starts to laugh out loudly with his friends and tapped pushkar's shoulder.

Pushkar jerked his hand, came right infront of jai and stared in his eyes. their laugh made him more angry.😡😡

All of his friends stop laughing and stared back, puskar to jai, jai to pushkar, 😲dint have any idea what is going to happen now.😕

Jai: what hap…

He cut off by pushkar

Pushkar: how could you jai? How could you do this to your own friend jai?😡

Meanwhile jai and all other friends are just staring at him, as they never expected this would happen.

Jai: I did not do anything just had a dance with that girl, pointing towards the same girl. What's wrong in that? She is not the first girl I danced with? (raised his eyebrow up, looking towards pushkar calmily in his cool style)

Pushkar: you know what, I was setting her up, it was almost done but then you came and ruined everything.😡 (Threw his arms in air with frustration) (bowed his head down and folded his hands) wah kia dost mila hai mujhe, aik larki phasa raha tha woh bhi nai dekha geya is se. sari game kharab ker di meri. 😡😡😕

kal tum khud 3,4 dates pur jao gey, mein kia kerun ga ab? sunday acha guzar jaye ga yeh soch ker kuch planning ki thi lekin tumhara beech mein ana zaroori tha? 😭

As he finished all the boys laughed again, irritating pushkar more.

Jai who was could not stop laughing, held his stomach with his one hand and the other hand he put on the shoulder of pushakr to get support as he was about to fall from stool he was sitting at.🤣🤣

Jai: ohh pushkar tum uske saath seeting ker rahe thay? Aur who phas bhi gat thi?

(he said all that while laughing and tried to calm himself)

Pushkar: yes, but then the grea Jai Walia had to come 😡and ruin everything. You know girls can't resist you. And when you're around, girls don't even bother to give a look to anyother boy.😒

Jai: (calming himself a bit) well it's a charm my boi😎, and winked.😉

You think woh larki phas gai thi? But actually she was trying to get rid of u.

He said all this while taking his hand off from pushkar's shoulder and taking his drink in hand

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Pushkar gave him a confused look.🤔

Jai: she is a pocket picker my boi, she had her hands in the back pockets of your jeans. What you think, what she was upto? She was going to get your wallet.

Pushkar: (could not believe) his mouth opened automatically, and managed to say, WHAT? She put her hands in my pockets to take wallet out but I thought she was…

Friend 1: lol what you thought pushkar?

Pushkar sat at the stool did not bother to answer.

Friend 2: pushkar might have thought that she is doing some funny tricks with her hands. 😆😆

His statement made every1 laugh.

Pushkar gave him nasty looks and embarrassed for being fooled at the same time😳

Jai: smiled, now thank me, nai tou drink ke paisay bhi hum se mangta tu.

mere jaisa dost tujhe nai milne wala, ager chirag le ker bhi dhoondo tou bhi Jai Walia jaisa dost nai milay ga.

jai smirked and continued,😆

Aur sunday ko tum mere ghar ajana tujhe jigyasa chachi ke saath date pur bhej dun ga, aditya chacha ko zara pune jana hai ( making everyone laugh )😆😆

Pushkar: apni jigyasa chachi ko apnay paas hee, toba toba mein nai jata unke saath and touched his earlobes, shiking his head. Aditya chacha se kehna apni trouble saath le ker jain 😛😃

Fried 1( name him Rohan): date pur hee jana hai kia huwa jo unko company de do gey. she's slim and smart aur pir beautiful bhi hain, tujhe sunday hee acha chaiye naa. lol

Friend 2( name him Raj): haan tou aur kia, tumhara wallet tou nai nikale gi naa (smiled a little)

Pushkar: wallet nai niklay gi pura bank khali ker de gi

everyone laughed.

After pulling pushkar's leg and some little chat all friends left and headed towards their own houses.

Jai dropped pushkar home and drove towards his mension about 4:00 am

Parked car in the drive way, took extra keys from gate keeper, entered in the house praying that no one is awake and tiptoed to his room, entering into his room he jumped at the bed and went to sleep.

THE END.

I know, its not as good as last part. i tried to think hard to make it interesting as bani's introduction but i could not.

but i promise i'll make next part interesting and jai and bani's meeting would be coming in next part😃

Aysha xxx

Edited by patooki - 18 years ago

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