FF: Better Half chap35, p60, 16/06 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

that was funny. jai is a goos frined...par bani was funny.. she is the perfect one for jai to handle him..

pls continue soon.


davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
Aysha great part dear chalo the guy slapped was not jai but tell me whether girl with whom pushkar was dancing and was pick pocketer was pia 😉
loved JW's introduction and his style. please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

great part
aww jai helped pooch
the gurl was gonna rob him

ctn soon
dammy


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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
tht was wonderful
just read ur 2 parts now
well they r written beautifully
waiting for our couples meet
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
Fab part.
loved it.
it was just awesome.
JW ka intro fantastic...liked it. 😍
Bechara Pooch...can't believe he was about to robbed if Jai had not come to save him. 😆
oh can't wait till JB meets.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
great part
thats what u call a friend 😆 always there giving a helping hand
jai intro was fab 😉
plz update soon

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

Thanks for all the comments.

***************CHAPTER 3****************

Bani is at the airport, passport and ticket in the hand all ready to fly to mumbai.

Rajveer Kapoor: Bani you still have time, i don't think you need to go to mumbai for MBA. people come to london for better study nd future but you're going to mumbai for your MBA.

Bani: Dadddd, i told you its my final decision and i am not going to change it you know it very well. so please stop making useless efforts.

Durga: (goes to bani and puts her arm on her shoulder) Raj now stop bothering my doll, she's a grown up girl and she knows how to handle herself. right darling? (looks towards bani to say yes)

Bani nods in yes and makes an innocent face to his dad.

Rajveer: ohh yeah, where she'll go in drunkun state? there won't be suzain to take her to her room (glares daughter)

Bani: Dad i dont drink very often and i promised mum that i wont overdose.

now give me a tight hug ,

bani gives final bye hug and kiss to her parents and moves from there, before disappearing she looks back and gives one final assuring smile to his dad and leaves from there.

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jai wakes up with the vibrating tone of his phone, he disconects the phone without even looking who was calling,

he overhears that his mother is asking their butler tony about jai. he quickly gets out of the bed and rushes to the bed but not before checking the time 12:00.

A beautiful woman comes out of the kitchen, wearing a simple but nice sari. shouting for her butler and kind of worried.

this woman is noneother than KRISHNA WALIA, Jai Walia's mother.

Krishna Walia: tony... tony... dekho zara jai abhi tak utha ke nai.

tony heads towards the room of jai with the glass of lemon water, he knows that jai needs lemon water now badly.

Krishna Walia: iss larkay ne tou tung ker ke rakha hai. subah se 10 baar uday mujh se pooch chuka hai, aj iske saath mujhe bhi unki baatain suni parain gi. Hey bhagwan yeh kab sudhray ga?

Tony enters jai's room after knocking once, after hearing the shower's voice from bathroom he comes to know that his boss is awake, puts the lemon water at the table and leaves.

Tony: madam, jai sir is already awake, he'll be downstair in a while.

Krishna noded in acknowledgement and dismisses the tony after realising that his husband is coming downstairs.

Uday Walia ready to go to office, coming downstair, brief case in one hand and phone in the other.

as he finishes his call, looks at his wife, ready to ask the same question which he had already asked hundreds on time since morning

Uday: Krishna tumhara...

before he could finish krishna talks,

Krishna: ji uth geya apka beta, he'll be downstair in a while.

and by the way, where are you ready to go on the saturday?

Uday: i have an important meeting to attend.

Krishna: but uday you know that you can't afford doing so much work, ur health is not keeping well and doctor also adviced you to rest.

Uday comes to his wife, holds her from her shoulders making her turn to face him

Uday: i know but this meeting is very important and it's very important for me to go but i promise i'll come back soon aur phir aa ker tumhare betay jai ki class bhi laini hai and hugs his wife.

Krishna: ahhh you better don't say anything to my son, and dnt stay in office till late.

Uday: don't you favour him, we'll think how to deal with him when i'll come back home. now where is ranveer we're getting late for meeting

someone from back, clears his throat maing uday walia turn to see who is it... a tall, young man wearing cream office suite, giving his dad and mom a mischiveous smile

Ranveer: (with a grin on his face) dad, we're getting late because of you, if you're done hugging you're wife, can we leave now?

Uday gives his wife a look before leaving and a punches his son ranveer on his shoulder.

Ranveer gives his mother a kiss on cheek and leaves smiling.

Jai comes out of the bathroom, combs his hair, notices the lemon water placed at table, smilingly picks the glass and drinks it as he needed badly and thanks tony. takes his mobile and notices that more dan 30 miss calls from rohan.

he wonders whats wrong with this man, tries to call him back but his phone is busy, singhs while putting his phone in his jeans pocket and gets out of his bedroom praying that his dad has already left.

slowly tiptoes to the sitting room. tony sees his boss coming down like thief but he knows the reason of all this and gives his boss assuring smile that his dad has left. thanking tony he straighten up, broads his chest and gets downstair in his usual JW style whisteling.

he notices his mother in the sitting room on the phone.

jai goes to his mother and hugs her from back, giving her kisses on her each cheeks while his mother gives him an angry look. he knows this is just a fake anger. giving her a tight hug he walks off to the dinning room, does his light breakfast which tony had already had lay down on the table.

his mum comes there and stands infrom of him with her arms on her hips, showing full anger.

Krishna: jaiiii...

Jai looked up to his mum(finished his breakfast) and gives her an apologizing smile and walks to his mum

Krishna: it's not gonna work jai, do you have any idea how late you came last night.

Jai: (raise his eybrow) but mum when i came back last night there was no1 who would have seen me. then how do u know i was tooo late

Krishna: you're dad was up till 3:00 am

Jai: WHAT?? oh no... jai teri kher nai aaj.

Krishna: pulls his son's ear, jai sudhar jao

Jai: maan it hurts, (krishna leaves his ear) aur jab tak aap ho mujhe chinta kis baat kia and hugs her mum

at the same time his phone rings,

Jai: ohhh Sh*t yaar, i totally forgot.

what tim his flight landing?

ok i'll be there soon.

sorry bol dia ab phone rakh mein pohanchta hun.

Jai: maan i need to go, rohan ka phone tha... aaj tarun wapis araha hai london se usko airport se pick kerna tha mein bhool geya. chalta hun aur aap dad ko samjha daina please, gives his mother a kiss nd hug and leaves before his mother could say anything.

krishna shakes her head smiling and walks off from there.

jai sits in his black lexus and drives off, picks rohan from his house and drives towards airport

Rohan: jai tujhe meine subah se 100 calls ker li, whare were you?

Jai: (concentrates on his drive) i was sleeping

Rohan: oh yeah you're a lazy head, by the way did your dad not say anything about last night? (looks towards jai)

Jai: smiles a little, when i got downstairs he had left for office but i am sure he got something in stock for me later in the evening.

by the way where is pushakr and everyone? are they not coming to meet tarun at the airport?

Rohan: no1 is sleepy head like you (sarcasm) jai gives him a look

they will meet us at airport.

they reach at the airport, they see pushkar, raj, mani, abhi, they start walking towards them.

while they were saying hello to everyone they noticed tarun coming out.

everyone welcomed tarun warmly and were excited to see him back as they will have more fun and more party and more masti.

As they turned to leave, omething white got jai's attention at the corner of the airport, oh wait thats not something that someone. he saw a girl in white dress, slightly above her knees,

as the girl turned talking on the phone, smiling ear to earj, ai was amazed to see the beauty.

jai to himself: she's sexy...

angelic face, beautiful eyes anyone can drown in those eyes, nice figure, anyone would love to hold her in his arms,

nice silky black hair, would love smell them, pink lips yummy

finally he noticed what he was thinking, oh GOD i never thought like that about anyother girl but she's also not like anyother girl.

he dint realise when his step started to raise towards her.

the girl was our bani.

bani was walking towards the exit, her dad told her that driver would come to pick her up and she would stay in her mother's house in mubai.

she was too busy talking on the phone dat dint realise someone coming straight towards her.

jai walked towards her praising her beauty, jai was wearing white cotton shirt with jeans and his sunnies.

he walked straight into bani, bumping into her, making bani's phone but bani managed not to fall.

jai put his hand on her waist to stop her from falling but bani jerked his hands off.

looked at his phone which was laying on the floor then gave him an anger look....

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Edited by patooki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38

i think jai is going to get one nice in cheecks... jai scne in the home was soo realistic..

pls continue soon


davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Hi Aysha!!!Lovely name 😛

Sorry I didn't in the 2nd update, I didn't aspect it so early 😳, It was rocking n very naughty for jai 😉 😉 wow this man knows how to handle things 😉 😆 😆 poor Pushy Jai robbed his gal but thx him yaar, geb kali honese toh bach gaya 😆

Well I really liked that it least Uday he 1 person who Jai is afraid of 😆 good good very realistic, late n8t parties, returning home only for sleep n being with fr8ds day n8t....

This update was awesome as well, well written.. n I'm dying to read nxt update, I wanna read what will HAPPEN TO JAI, slap or ... something else 😆 God bless him 😆 really yaar I'm dying to read it plz plz update ASAP 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
wow great part 😛
is it love at first sight for Jai, i hope Bani dosnt mistake Jai as the Driver 😆 😆
plz cont

Taj

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