FF: Better Half chap35, p60, 16/06 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
Arey Jai, tu tho abhi kallas.........patake phootney walein hain..taiyar hoja, abi Bani Rani garajnet wali hai πŸ˜†
Jai tho pehley hee meeting mein mar gaya..love at first sight...this pair is going to be interesting..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
haila their meeting!
and oh man !
hehe man bani looks soo mad
i wonder what jai will do now
please continue soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
im so overexcited after all these lovely comments πŸ€—

i just i hope i dont disappoint u guys with my upcoming updates in future.
i would try my level best to make updates as best as i can 😊 , who wants to such lovely readers and who wants to loose such wonderful comments? offcourse not me πŸ˜ƒ

you guys must have seen i am not updating daily.
i've to think about ideas to make it interesting because of which i am afraid that i wont be able to make 2 updates in a week.
please forgive for any delay and im sure u all would understand 😳
i would update my next part by tomorrow evening.

have nice weekend 😊

Aysha xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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***********CHAPTER 4*************

Bani gave one look to her phone which was on the floor and one look to Jai who was standing infron of her totally dumb.

Bani picked her phone up and resumed her conversation with the person on the other side of phone but at the same time she kept studying jai as she was thinking what do i need to do with him.

Bani: sorry dad, phone gir geya tha.

Rajveer: becareful beta and dont take cab, wait till the driver comes.

Bani: sure dad don't worry i wont move out of the airport without driver, happy?

Rajveer: kind of relaxed, yes im feeling better now.

at the same time, jai dint know what he did and what he should now? he was confused.

jai thought i neva walked up to any girl in my life before always girls came up to me, they can't keep their eyes off me, always give me flirteous smiles and all. but now it's totally different i walked upto this girl i don't even know who she is and more on that she is giving me strange looks forget the smile she dint even noticed Jai Walia is standing here. bhaag jai kisi ko pata laga ke mujhe larki ne lift nai kerwai tou meri reputation kharab ho jaye gi. nikal le jai woh phone pur hai usko pata bhi nai lagay ga nai tou sorry kehna par jaye ga aur pata nai kia kia.

As jai turned to leave Bani tapped his shoulder (she has not finished her call yet) and pointed her index finger to just stay right there giving a look of "don't you dare to move"

jai dint have any other option.

Bani: (gave a smile) oh thank GOD dad, now stop paniking and give phone to mum, i want to talk to her,

Rajveer: ok beta, take care of urself and keep phoning us.

Bani: sure dad, don't worry at all, i'll be fine. u take care of urself.

jai thought she's gona finish her call, soch jai jaldi se kuch soch kia kerna hai tujhe, is se pehle ke yeh tujh pur attack keray jaldi soch. jai moved his head to have a look around if anyone seeing them. he noticed his friends standing few feets back with confused looks. OH NO yeh log abhi yahin hain inko bhi batana pare ga ke mein aisay kiun chala. uffff kahan phas geya mein.

Durga: hey doll, did u reach safe and sound?

Bani: yes mum, single piece mein pohanch gai lol

durga: lol great, now u look after urself and dont forget ur promise "u wont drink"

Bani: scratching her head, yes mum i remember.

Durga: good, u take care honey, i'll hang up

Bani: ok mum, love loads and same to dad, byee, clik call ended.

after finishing call bani look at jai.

Bani: (to herself) is he staring at me since that time? he got his sunnies on so i cant really say if he's staring at me, hmmm what should i do to him? he dint even say sorry but he dint even said a word and standing here since that time. should i let him go??? jai intrupted bani's thinkings...

Jai: i see you're done with ur call and now if you're done with ur thinkings, may i have the permision to leave? u see i have loads of better things to do than just stand here and wait for u to talk.

Bani: (to herself) no way im gona leave him, look at his guts. dont let him go just like that bani, make him pay for his words, yesss im gona do that.

Bani folded her arms, tapped her on foot and checked jai's profile head to toe.

Jai was frustrated now, u know he is not a calm man. but when he noticed that bani's cheking him out jai thought, now no problem after all im da hottest hunk and a mishchiveous smile flashed on his lips.

Jai: well miss...( he got cut off by bani)

Bani: held her hand up telling him to not to utter a single word,

Enough, u have already said and done enough. u came and bumped into, because of u my phone fell down and my conversation got interupted, my dad panicked because of u, after all that u dint even behaved like a gentleman. i had to pick my phone up on ma own. then u tried to escape widout sorry. can you not behave like a gentleman? or is it against ur man ego to accept ur mistake?(jai was shocked, he could not believe a girl saying all this to THE JAI WALIA, i think this girl have realy bad choice)

ur such a coward MR.

Jai: Jai... Jai Walia, takes his sunnies off and puts it in the pocket

Bani: huh????

Jai: yes my name Jai Walia (gave one cute smile, which he thought is enough to melt a girl's anger)

Bani: whatever, i did not ask your name. tell me can't u look where ur going? or is it some kind of you're trick to start a conversation with a girl?

jai was totaly dumb at this point, he could not believe his charm is not working, or this girl has realy bad choice.

Jai: excuse me, stop blaming me young girl, it could be you who bumped into me, so tell me is it some kind of you're trick to start a conversation with a handsome and rich boy?

this statement of jai made bani loose all her temper and now she was fuing with anger,

Bani: how could anyone be so cheap?

Jai: WHAT? YOu..

Jai cut off by bani

they were now almost shouting, people at the airport were staring at them.

jai's friends were equally confused and surprised by jai's action. they could not believe what they saw few minutes ago, jai walked upto girl that was sure for them as they could not see any other reason of jai's walking towards that direction.

Bani: im not finshed yet, and yes you are cheap, if you have some kind of memory problem then let me remind you, i was standing here and u was the one who walked upto me and bumped into me. now dont say that u were just standing here and i came walked upto u.

Jai scratched his head and thought this girl is smart.

Bani: kia huwa? trying to find another excuse to blame me?

and i dont have such cheap habbits like u. you must be using this way to tap a girl for ONS or OWS. you know what, you're disgusting MR JAI WALIA, yes you're disgusting and cheap and ur a coward.

jai's was boiling with anger now.

Jai: watch it young girl, im not saying anything to u it does not mean u keep saying bad about me. you have no right to use such words about me.

Bani: i dont have right to give u these names but u have right to blame me?

Jai: im being nice with you, im not a calm man. im warning you, dont mess with me. no one dares to mess up with jai walia. i am sure you dont want to see my anger.

Bani: cut the crap jai walia, i have already messed up with u, what would u do?

bani put her index finger at jai's chest (jai's wearing a white cotton shirt, top 2 buttons are undone) digging her nail in his skin.

Bani: you're disgusting, cheap and you're coward jai walia. tell me what would u do now?

bani's nail was diging deep in jai's skin.

Jai: you're going to repent.

jai took bani's finger in his hand and pulled bani closser, held her waist with his other hand.

jai: you want me to show u what i can do?

bani looked at jai with disgust.

Bani: leave me jai walia

jai did not pay attention to her words, a naughtiness in his eyes was obvious, flahed a winning smile which made bani scare a little.

jai moved his face closer to bani, scraing bani more.

Bani:(closed her eyes) oh no, what the H*ll is he upto. (said to herself)

jai's face was just few inches away from bani's face.

Jai: ready baby? with this he moved closser to kiss her.

but bani stopped him by putting her hand on his face and pushed him back with full force.but jai did not leave her hand, held it tightly.

bani tried to free herself from jai's grip but it was hard for her. jai was just an arm's length away from her.

jai: (was disappointed because he could not kiss her and more on that he was disappointed because a girl resisting him but now he was enjoying this situation) not so easy sweatheart.

bani sighed, walked upto him, clearing half of the distance.

Bani: sweatheart my foot, with this she hit jai's leg with her knee. which made jai leave her hand and touch that spot where she hit him.

Jai: ouchh, ur a wild cat, it hurts u know.

Bani: gave a winning smile, shruged her shoulder, stood straigh with proud.

oh poor Jai Walia is on his knees now. if you would have said sorry all dis wont have happened. it's all your fault.

(bani said all this keepong a sweet smile on her face)

bani took her trolly and started to move as she passed across jai she turned to see jai was still there staring at her.

Bani: and i know that hurts. and i wish it hurts forever.

Have a nice day Mr. Walia.

with this bani left from there.

bani walked out of the airport, noticed a driver with board of her name in his hand. bani walked to the driver, told him he is bani, driver recognised her, greet bani, opened back door of honda accord for bani to enter, bani sat in the car, driver took the bags, put them in the boot. took his driver seat and drove off.

jai's friends who were watching all this and enjoying the scene, came to shocking and surprised jai to enquire why did all this happened.

Pushkar: jai what happened? trying to surpress his laughter.

Jai: stood up and gave him dead look.

Tarun: yaar jai dont give us that look. but tell us what exactly happened?

Rohan: yes jai, we thought you were coming with us to the car but when we looked back you were walking to opposit side. we still dont know where were you going?

all jai's friends were trying to be serious as they did not want to pay off for bani's actions.

theyvery well knew if they laughed openely at jai's situation, they would be black and blue in a minute.

Jai: gave all of them a look and asked them to leave.

nothing happened let's just leave i'll tell you later. she was just a crazy girl.

pushkar: but jai aik baat...

beforehe could finish jai gave him a look which made pushkar shut his mouth.

Pushkar: ok boss, im not saying anything.putting his finger on his lips.

Tarun: ab koi kuch nai kaha i wanna go home safe please.

everyone laughed almost apart from jai. they could not laugh openly because jai is sometimes too dangerous.

they all moved to the car park, put tarun's bags in car and drove to his apartment.

Rohan was in jai's car, tarun and raj were in pushkar's car, they drove to tarun's apartment.

Rohan was quiet in the car so as jai. jai did not want to discuss anything on that airport incident, he did not know himself what made him walk to that girl at first place, Jai Walia never had to walk upto girl, girls always drool around jai, jai never had to argue with any girl forget sorry. He is known as every girl's man but today something was wrong, jai walked upto that gril this was not something jai was understanding and more on that jai's charm did not work on that girl. i just wish there was no news reporter, i dont want my reputation go down just because of that crazy girl.

Rohan was constantly looking at jai and he could cleary see the change in his expresion. something is not right. Rohan decided to know what is bothering jai and who was that girl at the airport.

Rohan: ermm jai (he knew jai's mood is not good so he was little hesitant and scared to ask him about that incident)

Jai: gave rohan a look ( which made jai scare out of his wits )

kia baat hai rohan tujhe kuch kehna hai? (jai asked him concentrating on road)

Rohan: kuch nai jai, tere mood ko kia huwa? (he finally asked him)

Jai: hmm kuch nai mere mood ko kia hona hai, its perfectly fine, glanced rohan with a weak smile.

Rohan: nai jai, you're mood is not ok, i know you very well, is it because of that girl? who was that girl by the way jai? (hey bhagwan meine pooch tou lia ab raksha kerni meri, i dont want to be kicked out of the car in the middle of no where)

Jai: rohannn, you want me to drop you off here?

Rohan: getting his point, no bhai i want to go to tarun's aprtment, we'll go there quietly. he put the radio on and started to look outside of the window.

jai was kind of relaxed but he knew they would not leave this matter like this untill he tells them.

Jai: look rohan you already have seen everything whatever happened at the airport, if you want to know who that girl was and what i was doing there i will tell u but not know, i dont want to discuss that crazy girl at the moment.

rohan knew something was not normal. he decided to let it go at the moment and ask him latter but not gonna leave it as a mystery.

Rohan: (patted jai's shoulder)its ok jai, i understand

rest of the drive was silent to the tarun's apartment.

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In pushkar's car, jai's incident was under discussion.

Pushkar: tarun, raj, don't you guys think something is wrong with jai?

Tarun and Raj both looked at pushakr and asked at the same time

"wrong, what do u mean?"

Pushkar: mein woh airport walay incident ki baat ker raha hun.

Tarun and Raj: ohhh acha, and started to laugh.

Tarun: seriously i dont know what came into jai. he walked up to the girl.(he said with surprised look on his face, shaking his head in disbelieve)

Raj: jai ke paas larki ati hai yeh suna aur dekha tha lekin jai larki ke paas jaye, no no no

Pushkar: lol now what exactly happened jai hee bata sakta hai. i am sure it's gonna be interesting story to hear.

Raj: lets get him at tarun's apartment. aj nai chorna isko.

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let's say that it's not the first time bani came to mumbai, bani came mumbai mumbai 6 months ago to attend one of her friend's wedding. her friend ANJALI, used to live in london, but got married in mumbai and now settled in mumbai after her marraige. Bani is a friendly girl its not a big deal for her to make friends in totally unfimiliar town, she has few friends in the mumbai but ANJALI is one of her close and best friends.

In my intro. i said bani is in 2nd last year of MBA, i'll make it that jai and bani both are in the final year of their MBA.

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Bani enters her house, it's quite a big house with beutifully decorated big garden. Bani was welcomed by the servents, they all are nice people. after the little formal talk bani went upstairs to her mother's room. this room beautifully decorated. All furntiture in that room was old designed but in good condition.

There was a huge picture hanging on the fron wall, the only picture hanging on that wall, bani went towards that picture, a tear dropped from here eye, the picture was of her mother's picture.

Bani: look maan, i look exactly like you.Dad says whenever he sees he feels as if he's looking at kiran.

Bani was duplicate copy of her mother's. she got everything of her mother.

Before her mother's death, bani's family used to live in this house. bani's childhood sweet memories are attached to this house, he little talks with her mother, how her mother used to run after her to make her feed, how she used to tease her mother, how she used to spend her time with her mother, all memories were attached to this. this house was decorated modernly but her mother's room was not touched at all, that room was still in the same condition. she can feel her mother's appearance in that room.

the house was in good condition as her dad had hired full time servants to look after the house.

she loved this house because it belonged to her mother.

bani spent about an hour in her mother's room, talking to her mother's picture, telling her stories, doing some cleaning in the room.

about after an hour she left the room, went to her room, her bag was already in her room.

she unpacked her luggage, put all the clothes in the wardrobe, went to take shower.

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EnjoyπŸ˜ƒ, if there are any mistake please ignore themπŸ˜› if you guys have any ideas please let me know i will add them in my FF😊

Aysha xxx

Edited by patooki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
Hey Patoo,
I so thought about the diwali dhamaka.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ek dum gharajney lagi Jai pe..bechara Jai dint even know what hit him πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Jai's friends are going to have a treat now to hear about the airport incident..Jai ka tho pachka ho gaya πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
So u have made both bani n Jai to be in the same year of their MBA..so both are going to meet again in their uni..interesting..
the mighty JW has been robbed off his heart..
Rama
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Fab part.
liked it.
wow what a meeting poor Jai dude....haila Bani didn't did that did she...god can't wait for their second encounter. πŸ˜†
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry i somehow missed to reply urs.... but bani was soo nice.. ur ff something different.. jai got hitted by baniπŸ˜†

pls continue soon... bani iss soo naughty...


davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Aysha!!!

Haila yaar I didn't especte this, I mean this a damaka yaar, awesome, hot jodi huh!??!! JB πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 agar ek war kare toh dosra bhi nahi piche hatta πŸ˜† wonderful n Jai kya dost hai tumhare πŸ˜†

Ow...Bani, Jai ki ego hurt ki hai tumne ab dekhte hai kya masala lagahegi Aysha inki non-started loved story meh??

Wow I like ur writing, it's hot n spicy but I waiting for the really masala n DAMAKA πŸ˜†

Continue it ASAP
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey is just started to read ur FF today.....and what πŸ‘ can i say its jus GREAT !!!!!!!!! πŸ‘ ........love the new bani and jai 😊 ...well hes ok πŸ˜• ........hehehhee aorport scene was sooo funny πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ...poooooor jai πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .......continue soon

angelrockz 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fab part
i lked the part where Jai and Bani where arguing very funny πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

plz cont soon

Taj

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