FF: Better Half chap35, p60, 16/06

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skn700

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

👏 👏 nice intro, do continue soon.

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jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

nice character intro
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nikita28

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Hi, Great intro.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

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Aysha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

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THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR LIKING IT AND ENCOURAGING ME 😊 i will post part 1 by tomorrow evening after finishing my uni.
thank you very much 😊

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Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

that was a very good.. intro..
just loved it.. hehe
continue soon

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Neelofar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

that wuz awesome.its diffrent but i really like bani and jai's personality;etc.plz continue soon.

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Aysha

@patooki

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

*********CHAPTER 1*********

FRIDAY NIGHT, 02:30AM
CUBA (nightclub) London

You see everyone enjoying in the club. Dancing, drinking and shouting coz of excitemnet. Everyone is having full fun, no idea of their surroundings. 🥳 🥳
DJ is playing songs since last 4 hours, one song after other but not tired after seeing that people are enjoying his collection of songs and dancing on the tracks like no tomorrow. [:D/] [:D/]
While everyone was enjoying, everyone hears A SOUND, which makes everyone turn their head to see where this sound came from. 😲
After spotting the place where exactly the sound came from, they were more confused than before, could not figure what there was going on exactly; everyone in the club had a questioning look ❓ apart from two people.

You see a girl, body in perfect shape, in black short dress, length slightly above her knees, with silver light embroidery, sleeveless, light make up on, beautifully shaped black eyes, an innocent face but too red may be because of anger everyone thought, looked hardly 20, black hair slightly curled. 😍 The girl looked drunk.

Everyone was amazed with her beauty and innocent on her face 😍 but wait what she is upto ❓ And what was that sound??? Everyone got that same questioning look back.

That girl was holding the collar of a boy who was standing just few inches away from her. 😡
They boy in jeans and black shirt, which was already torn from his chest. The boy's left cheek was red more than normal, holding his left cheek with his left hand, staring at the girl who was holding his collar with both her hands and full force. 😳
The girl was giving him murderous look. 😡 After sometime, the boy got courage to utter some words from his mouth.

Boy: (tried to free himself from her grip and almost shouted at the same time) 🤔 WHAT… (but poor guy could not complete his sentence and cut off by the girl) 😕

Girl: (hit her foot on boy's foot as he tried to remove her hands to free his collar from her and shouted back) don't you f****g dare to touch me again. 😡 😡 Who the h*ll do you think you are? 😡 😡 You think you're handsome?

By saying this she moved back (but not leaving his collar) and started to check him out, with one eyebrow up. after checking him out from head to toe;

Girl: 🤣 🤣 hahahahahahaha forget handsome you are not even near to this category. 🤣

The boy was totally dumb 😳 , dint know what to do, how to run away from this embarrassment. 😕

Girl went close to the boy, left his collar and looked at his face blinking her eyes and wondered why is he holding his left cheek, (she was not even able to stand properly and could not see clearly as she was too much drunk).

Girl: abay khajoor mun pur se haath hata (moving her one arm in air she said)

The boy kept starring at her with confused look as he did not understand what she just said.

Boy: Listen young girl, you've already said so many things to me and I have heard you enough but now don't swear at me in your language. (the boy was too scared, said all this in low voice)

Girl: (started to laugh madly) 😆 😆 you know, you're a super duffer, I said move you're hand off your face idiot.

(boy was so afraid of her and followed hesitantly as he was told)

Seeing his burning cheek, the girl gave an evil smile 😈 and said

Girl: ohh it's not fair at all, this is totally unfair; you don't deserve this at all and slapped him hard on his right cheek as well.

Everyone was shocked to hear same sound, another slap. 😲

Girl: (with a huge smile appearing on her face) now it's fair, now both cheeks are equally red.

As she was going to grab that boy again from his collar, her friends came and almost dragged her out of the club.
While going out she kicked that boy 😡 and said;

Girl: you male pig 😡 , don't you even dare to mess with BANI KAPOOR ever again or you won't be able to see your this ugly face again in mirror. 😡 😡 and disappered from the club did not stop swearing that boy.

The boy was still standing, trying to figure out what was that and so as the others in the club 😳 😕 .

After sometime DJ put the music on again and everyone got back to their normal positions but that poor left the club but not before vowing no to return in this club ad if accidentally he see that girl again somewhere, I'll change my way.

She was a hell.

yes guys That was our crazy drunk Bani. 😛 😃

After dragging her out of the club,They put her in car and thought of giving her a piece of ming but it was too late. Bani was too much drunk she dint even know what's happening to her and fell asleep in the car and been Dropped at suzain's flat because they thought in this state she can't go to her own house and suzain lives alone so it does not matter if she stays for an night at her place and also it wont be a new thing. It happens almost every Friday, Saturday nights.

Dont forget to comment please. you're comments are writers encouragement😊

Edited by patooki - 18 years ago

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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

🤣that wwas funny.... slapping for becoming equalll ... that boy must be jai..... 😆not able to stop it my laugh fcourse... she is too funny.. pls continue soooonnnn ..... waithing for more updates like this...
davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago

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Dammy

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

aww i luv this gurl

she is funny slapping him on the other cheek

the guy is jai innit???

great part ctn soon

dammy

Edited by damilola - 18 years ago

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Aysha

@patooki

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Posted: 18 years ago

#20

i tried my best to write good.
i knw it would be kind of boring as i have introduced only one character so far. but would post jai's character tomorrow.

for now bear with bani 😃

i had to think alot to make a proper start.
i had lecture this morning and i was thinking about how to start my FF 😆 😆

i hope you all enjoy it and please do give comments.
ideas and advices and critics all welcome 😊

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