FF: Better Half chap35, p60, 16/06

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Hello Everyone, i have read so many FF's and got inspired from writers and tried to put my effort to write one aswell... i'm really a very bad writer, many writer said this thing but they wrote so well, i am not saying that i'll write well aswell but this is true that " im a very bad writer" and i never wrote anything in my life before not even a short essay in my school times😛

I just hope that you people like my FF and enjoy, dats all i want and i'll try my level best to make it interesting.

The characters in this FF are little different from real serial, you'll see what i mean and i hope no1 mind me doing mixing some characters😳 JAI AND BANI are tooooo far different from the serial.

The name of this FF is temporary what i hav given "better half" and i want you all to suggest me some better name as i could not come upto any better😕

INTRODUCTION TO THE CHARACTERS:

JAI WALIA:

22 YEARS old, son of India's NO.1 Business Man Uday Walia and Krishna Walia ( he's very much alive in my Fanfic ), spoilt by his mother and to some extent by his father, he was never interested in graduating or going to college or uni to engross himself in books, he always went there because of GRLS (girls are one of his passions), as he never put his interest in studies he still managed to do his MBA as his dad really blackmailed him ( like if he pass his exams every year Jai will get which ever car he wants , holiday where he wants to go WITH HIS ALL FRIENDS, he would never be asked no matter how long he stays out of the house, whoever he hangs around with, how many girlfriends he have and how expensives gifts he gives to his girlfirneds, all dese questions wold never be asked to him BUT to get all this he has to pass his exams every year ). He's a very fun loving person, wants to enjoy life fully and believe on trying everything in the world once in life. Fun and masti are the main things in his life and also he knows to enjoy life the way he wants he needs money for all that and runs away from marraige as he thinks how can someone spend his/her whole life stiking to one person in 21st century.

He does have attitude ( bein JAI WALIA, attitude is important) but also caring same time, loves his own family and friends, always on the covers of magazines, 3 page, everyone wish to live life like his

, HOTTEST HUNK in the town and known out of india aswell as he accompanies his dad in some meetings, HANDSOME, SEX, HOT AND HAPPENING, TALK OF THE TOWN, FASHIONABLE, EVERY GIRL'S MAN, and very short tempered and stubborn, he gets everything he lays his eyes on ( not because he's sone of Uday walia but with his own abilities and charm and brain) and knows his traditions very well. He has not joined his dad in business but sometimes handles some projects ( and handled them perfectly because Jai walia jo kerta hai best hee kerta hai) as he still wants to enjoy his life and thinks he has lot to enjoy and do yet kaam tou puri life pari hai kerne ko.

UDAY WALIA

: Father of 2 sons and one daughter

1. Ranveer Walia ( he is not Uday walia's real son, actually Uday adopted him after the death of ranveer's parents in plane crash, his parents were Uday Wali's best friends but not rich family and ranveer and the other family is bery much aware of this reality)

2. Jai Walia, isko kon nai jaanta

3. Raashi, only daughter and only girl in the Walia family.

India's No.1 business man, worked very hard day and night to establish Walia Group of Industries, chain of Hotels across the world and is in the list of world's top 10 succesful business's men. He's very proud of his family and gives crown of his success and happy family to his loving and beautiful wife of Krishna Walia.

KRISHNA WALIA:

Wife of Uday Walia, beautiful and stylish and also traditional. Just wants happiness of her family.

RANVEER WALIA:

23 years old, Son of Uday Walia and eldest brother of Jai Walia, who loves Jai mor than anything in the world and he has more hand in spoiling JAI than anyone else. Jai loves him just like his own elder brother and respects him alot. Works with his father and handles most of the work of Walia empire as their Father is now getting old and he wants to load his burden. Uday walia and Krishna Walia never treated him as an outsider and always loved him as their own kids.

RAASHI WALIA:

20 years old, only daughter of Uday Walia and Krishna Walia and only sister of her 2 brothers and youngest in the family. That is why everyone loves her and never said NO for anything but after so much love she is traditional, loving, mature and knows the value of family.

JIGYASA WALIA:

wife of Uday Walia's younger brother, Aditya Walia. She is moody, too much proudy and only likes rich people. She's just like in Kasamh Se. The only difference is that she is not divorced lives with aditya and dreams of ruling WM.

Aditya Walia:

married to jigyasa, helps his elder brother in business but does not own business as it was Uday Walia who started it but have some shares in business and never regretted about it, he is happy with those shares, never wished for more than that, loves his brother and his family alot. Very friendly, just like in kasamh se and also very friendly to jai, ranveer and raashi, he is like friend to them not uncle.

Aditya and Jigyasas do not have any kids.

BANI KAPOOR:

21 years old, From UK, Only daughter of Rajveer Kapoor. She's an apple of eye of her parents, Very caresless about her life, very much life living, a chatter box, even if she someone first time she can talk for hours with that stranger, a very good company to have, neva let anyone get bored in her company, she wants to enjoy and live life fully nd happily no matter what. She is the talk of the town, modern,stylish yet simple and elegnat, pretty beautiful, fair complexion, very dark black eyes with a smiling face, slim, smart, sexy, talented, innocent, cute, bold, broad mind, party animal, spoiled brat, stubborn, not a dreamer but gets what ever she lays her eyes own, dream of every boy, and also traditional and knows her values and culture as an indian, very well brought up girl with manners which makes her a perfect bahu material aswell but mind it she is stylish not a girl always in shalwar kameez. She knows very well how to steal a heart of a boy and makes space in hearts of people whom she meets in her first meeting because of her good nature. She can make a place in anyone's heart with her loving nature. She's no as innocent as she looks and not also naive as people think, As it is said "NEVER JUDGE THE BOOK BY ITS COVER"

Long skirts, short skirts, long or short dresses, jeans, trousers, tops, indian traditiona dresses whatever she wears everything according to the situation.

Her theory of life is that "face all situation with the smile on your face not with a looser face and always try ur best to win ur goal, still if u loose never get disheartend just move on with ur life thinking there is something best stored in life for u and what u lost was not best"

She hates to study, dont even wants to see books, not a good student at all, her attendance is never good to qualify for the next year of her school, always bunks her classes and hangs out with her friends, every single boy wants be her boy friend but she neva took much in any of the boy just being friend with them.

First she was in Medical, droped after 3 months because it was toooo boring for her to continue then decided to do Computing nd Software Development, droped after 6 months because she got bored from this course aswell and now finally she is doing MBA

RAJVEER KAPOOR:

Father of Bani Kapoor, and owns Kapoor Empire and partner of Uday walia in some project, Uday and Rajveer are very good friends since long time. He's very known businessman as Uday walia. They are business friends and their families never met. He loves her only daughter and would do anything to fulfill her wish, never said NO to her for anything, anyhting means anything and also bani never rejected her dad.

Rajveer's wife and BANI's mother Kiran Kapoor is no more alive, Bani was 7 years old when her mother died because of sudden heart attack.

Rajveer got married to DURGA after the death of his first wife Kiran .

DURGA KAPOOR:

step mother of Bani but never treated her as a step daughter, loves her just like her own daughter, durga does not have her own kids. She's a loving and caring mother and very protective to bani. Bani also loves her just like her own mother, Durga never let her think that she's her step mother neither did bani felt anything like that.

PIA DIXIT:

23 years old, belongs to not so rich family and somehow connected to jigyasa's family, her dad MR. DIXIT is an accountant in a firm.

Pia has high dreams, wants to be on the top of the world and for that she can do anything, always shows off, her all friends are from high class families and she is one of the female friends of Jai Walia and wants to be his girl so that she can get woteva she wants and for that she always hangs around JAI WALIA and Jai, sometimes gets annoyed from her behaviour but pia is her only oldest gf . Actually she's chipkoo.

RANO DIXIT:

22 years old, lives in mumbai and studying business and working in Walia Group of industries as a part time employer, Uday walia considers her as her own daughter, very good friend of RAASHI. She never showed off like Pia, she is very friendly and good nature person. same as in kasamh se

SAHIL

: 23 years old, pia and rano's only brother and twin of pia, loves his sisters alot. Runs his own small business of Cars. Good and jolly natured person, he is satisfied with his life but wants to go higher on his own.

PUSHKAR SHUKLA:

23 years old, son of the one MR. SHUKLA who is the busniess partner of Uday walia.

Very hard working boy and very good friend of Jai walia and Ranveer. He's like a family member to Wali's.

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Let me know, if you guys want me to continue, i'll update only after getting enough response😊

all comments and suggestions are welcome😊

i have no idea how i would cntinue this story and where it would go so please keep guiding me and suggesting me if you guys ahve any interesting ideas in your😊

Aysha xxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very good starting.Continue............... writing. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Patooki

Sounds very good this ff really, I'd love to read nxt update of urs😛😉...very well described all characters👏👏👏 n I love JB, their cool actitud 😆
Others are somewat like KS but Sahil working on his own, it's surprising lol

Plz continue soon😊😊

Minu
Edited by siumi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is really good and diferent.. looking forward... bani and jai character is too good...
pls continue very sooon.
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Hey patooki,
Very interesting characters..Pls continue..Very diff story line n Jai n bani characters seems to be very interesting..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey
that was an awsome start
the way u described the characters was brilliant very different from the show.

plz update the first part soooooooooon 😛

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start

i like the character sketch


ctn soon

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Great introduction.
loved it.
looks very interesting....looking forward to read this ff.
plz post first part asap 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting looking forward to reading it so pls continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice introduction!....pls continue!... 😃

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