The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 26

Haila! Armana, did he just say what I think he said?! Bani Walia?!!! 😳 And declaring it infront of all the reporters! So proud of him! 😉 😆 😳 That's definitely going on page one in the newspapers! 😆 Wonder how Bani's going to react! 😕 😆 Hopefully she wont get angry! Honestly, I would have been estatic with joy! 😉 😆 😳 Loved this part! 😳 Even thought it was a tad bit short. 😆 Please update soon! Looking very forward to the dinner! 😃

Lots of Love,
Goddess

truely a cool ff. 👏

jus read it all

fab

pls continue soon

great part armana, please continue soon

swati

Loveeeeed the way Jai couldn't bear the reporters bugging his little lady!!! Yup, he was very clear that she was his! So Roshni's nasty move backfired?? 😃 Will wait to see what u come up with.

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pls cont soon its been so long since you updated

Great part.can't wait to see what happens next. PLease update.

awesome armana! 👏 👏

really love this!!! The coldness of bani towards pia is great! 👏 👏 pia is soo jealous!

and ranveer and nattu are such cute characters! 😃

and jai wanting to se bani's drwings! 😕 im not sure if i want him to see it or not!!

and the 'mrs walia' bit!! you've left it at such a good point!! cant wait to see everyone's reaction!

conitnue soon

really great part!!
please continue soon!!!!

excellent part Ms. Dickens!! yes it was short 😛 but even a line from you is always welcomed!! 😉

wonderful description of how the two read so much in so slight a physical reaction from the other - although this time, they appear to have mis-read

wonderful use of the usually useless media!! 😆 "Bani Walia with a capital W" 😳

Wonderful Arman dear!

It seems I have missed alot, but couldn't comment until I read and there is where it took me long. It was amazing and I pretty much enjoyed reading honestly it was worth both the time and the mind. And I furthermore have no complaints what so ever.

Mrs Walia with capital W, was the best line.

Continue soon dear, I hope your not off because of the current storyline of KS.

Bless you

Jojo