The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#251

Haila! Armana, did he just say what I think he said?! Bani Walia?!!! 😳 And declaring it infront of all the reporters! So proud of him! 😉 😆 😳 That's definitely going on page one in the newspapers! 😆 Wonder how Bani's going to react! 😕 😆 Hopefully she wont get angry! Honestly, I would have been estatic with joy! 😉 😆 😳 Loved this part! 😳 Even thought it was a tad bit short. 😆 Please update soon! Looking very forward to the dinner! 😃

Lots of Love,
Goddess

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static_chaos23

@static_chaos23

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Posted: 18 years ago

#252

truely a cool ff. 👏

jus read it all

fab

pls continue soon

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swati

@swatinarang

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Posted: 18 years ago

#253

great part armana, please continue soon

swati

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 18 years ago

#254

Loveeeeed the way Jai couldn't bear the reporters bugging his little lady!!! Yup, he was very clear that she was his! So Roshni's nasty move backfired?? 😃 Will wait to see what u come up with.

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#255

pls cont soon its been so long since you updated

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suwas

@suwas

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Posted: 18 years ago

#256

Great part.can't wait to see what happens next. PLease update.

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#257

awesome armana! 👏 👏

really love this!!! The coldness of bani towards pia is great! 👏 👏 pia is soo jealous!

and ranveer and nattu are such cute characters! 😃

and jai wanting to se bani's drwings! 😕 im not sure if i want him to see it or not!!

and the 'mrs walia' bit!! you've left it at such a good point!! cant wait to see everyone's reaction!

conitnue soon

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago

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s_geetu

@s_geetu

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Posted: 18 years ago

#258

really great part!!
please continue soon!!!!

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Chaitali

@Cordelia

Inactive

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Posted: 18 years ago

#259

excellent part Ms. Dickens!! yes it was short 😛 but even a line from you is always welcomed!! 😉

wonderful description of how the two read so much in so slight a physical reaction from the other - although this time, they appear to have mis-read

wonderful use of the usually useless media!! 😆 "Bani Walia with a capital W" 😳

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Jojo

@Jojo_han

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#260

Wonderful Arman dear!

It seems I have missed alot, but couldn't comment until I read and there is where it took me long. It was amazing and I pretty much enjoyed reading honestly it was worth both the time and the mind. And I furthermore have no complaints what so ever.

Mrs Walia with capital W, was the best line.

Continue soon dear, I hope your not off because of the current storyline of KS.

Bless you

Jojo

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