The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 28

I'm also waiting eagerly. With KS in the toilet these days - it's the magnificently written FFs that keep me going. You are one of my favourite FF writers.

hey armana!!..wonderful update!! 👏 😃 ...Bani Walia?? 😳 ...now where did dat come from? 😉 ..pleez continue soon!! 😃

Yours is a Wonderful, Wonderful FF, Armana! 👏
I am very very eagerly waiting for your update. 😊

Me too. Waiting eagerly for the update.

Armana, Where are you ? I finally caught up with this ff and read it. What a tricky place to end. I hope that you find time to get back and complete this.

I may not be able to comment on individual parts but I can say the following sequences were my fav. The 1st one being the whole sequence where Jai meets Bani for the 1st time in flashback. That was really nice and I was really able to imagine the scenes in my mind as the description of the setting was just fabulous. The next scene that comes to my mind is of course the party scene where Rosh needles Bani and the Walia clan thinks that Bani needs help and the way Nattu and Ran rallies around Bani. Too good. Once again wonderful description. There are a couple of others as well. For now am restricting myself with this.

Hope that I get to see a updated part from you soon. take care...

Swathi

Dearest T, 🤗
How have you been? I hope that all is well? I have missed you... and i am glad to see that you are still writing!!
Wow, i am at a loss for words...your writing skill and talent is truly first class. The more i try and stop reading, the more i find that i am drawn into the sentences, imagining all as if it were happening before my eyes. The description is amazing. Your talent knows no bounds, and you knowing me know that my words are not empty and hold truth and meaning.
Please continue.
Love
S.
btw kill pia, she is such an evil character, might i suggest getting her run over?😆😆

hi armana
gr8 parts 👏
cont. sooon

Hi armana,

Hope that you update soon.

hey.
where have u been. I hope u're ok and u come on IF and update soon plz and thnx

is this FF over????? 😕
hope u r k armana 😊 😊 😊