The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 25

OMG I abosolutely loved it Armana! I feel the ending was absolutly perfect to this part! I cant wait to see bani's reaction, and especially Pia's reaction when she reads it!

Do continue soon! Missed your updates!

Aashnaa:"Although, this was short, it was, by far the most intense part. Absolutely love the way u dress up bani ..very chic. It's amazing how pink (apart from black and white) goes with almost any color."
Thank you so much for not holding the lack of length against me!
I hate the indian t.v.serial mentality- the 'good girl/ central protagonist' must always be dressed drably as compared to the vamp. Who says she can't be well dressed and look good? yeah, personally i like pink too!
As for JW, and the nano-second pause, that's called being attuned!
As fro Bani, she's a big girl, she made her choices consciously, except the choice of who to choose to fall in love with! Ah, well, i don't think anyone can control that choice!
"It took me more than half hour to write these lines. I can only imagine the tremendous amount of effort on ur part to give us this ff."
Excellent, now you can understand why my updates take a while. And now that i'm working against deadlines.......
BTW, Robert Browning is the person who coined 'less is more' in a wonderful poem 'Andrea del Sarto.'

Fsam: I have so much fun writing of their dufferness when it comes to their relationship! yeah, they both unconsciously portray a role which they do not consciously acknowledge.
As for the next update.....hun, if you saw my work for the next two weeks you'd faint.....so i have no idea when, where and how i am going to find the time to write the next update.😕

Nibbles: I am seriously thinking of killing her in the concluding section of XVI! seriously, watching her in KS ANNOYS me! And while i want Bani inplace of Durga, I do want Durga to make Pia's life living hell on earth before becoming Bani for Jai.

Thanks guys.
As i said in my earlier post, reading your comments is becoming addictive, now that so many of you are taking the time to actually analyse tfs!
Thanks a lot for that, makes my day.
Armana

Armana!
i absolutely love it!!!
i can't believe that the ending was just perfect! i mean it fits there all the well...
now i can't wait for Bani's reaction...
please continue soon
rooj

Did I read Bani Walia with a capital W?
Thanks dear for making this dream come true.
I so love this JW and Bani. And you already know it.

But one thing I noted is the insecurities that resides in both about the other and their acceptance by the other. Though its a weakness, I find it very endearing and thats what makes Jai and Bani so human.

Thanks a lot dear 👏 👏 👏

hope you update soon.

Thanks Armana for such a lovely update 😆
Wait was worth 😃 😆
Loved the ending of the part 😉 😃
"Bani Walia" eagerly waiting to feel how Bani is going to react? 😃 😆
Please continue soon when you can 😊
Thanks a lot 👏

Fab part Armana.....Lovely update...especially the ending part....reporters's got what they deserved....worth reading it...eagerly waiting for the next one..... 👏 👏 👏

Hey,

Another amazing update.. you really have a way with words! So Jai doesnot want to marry?? Will bani be able to change his mind?

Can't wait till Bni and pia meet.

eagerly awaiting the next part 😛

Megha

Wonderful part Armana... 👏 👏 👏
how Bani will react to Bani W.. 😆 😆

I hope she shares all her secretes with Jai... Why she is hesitant to tell him that she is saraswati ? is there any twist there ?

Hey Armana

As the saying goes,good things come in small packages,indead that was just great.beautifully written.loved it.looking forward to this interesting dinner.simply superb.excited abt the next part. 😊

wonderful part armana. so now bani is going to be known as Mrs. Bani Jai Walia.

please continue soon.

swati