The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 23

Great part Armana 👏 👏 👏 and ebautifully written.

Am liking the way Jai and Bani's relationship is progressing. Thanks for presenting a natural progression.

So Pia is again on her sister's throat to suck her blood and to gain something of the acquaintance. 😡

Hope you update soon.

Cheers 😊

Armana...

Wonderful update,... 👏 👏 👏

I hate Pia...

Please don't let evil won over goood 😊 😊

Hey Armana 😊

Its simply tooo gooood!!!! 👏

xcept that Bhikmangii & that Roshni.... 😡

now wht does she want??? she's sooo cheap thinkin of gettin close wid JW by using Bani as an xcuse.... 😡

I just want some1 to teach her a good lesson... & now thinking who can do that better than Jai himself... 👏

& that Roshni creating more & more probz... i just hope the media, people & JW's family dont insult or hurt Bani.... as their views (xcept Nattu & Ranveer) is not very good abt her.... 😭

1 funny thing.... Pushy & that Bhikmangii work 4 Jai Walia since sooo long but he doesnt know that they r married.... Really funny.... wht kind of people will hide that they r married... neway i betta stop there... zipped my mouth.... 😆

plzzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzzz cont soon buddy... 😃

Its really A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!! 👏

Had suspected that JB would end up in the papers, but didn't guess Roshni would be the one to make it happen! 😡 Jai trying to be gracious to Bani's family - ugh!! but hopefully, that will lead to his recognizing his Angel.... Fascianting to see how Bani feels restless until she starts drawing when she is in one of her creative moods. Great update, as usual...
👏
bt

Hi Armana,

Great part.......Bani and Jai are so right for each other.

So they are all going out for dinner, I wonder if Pia will let out information about Bani's past?????

Please update soon, waiting in anticipation.

Nikita

Hey Armana

fabalous update.love the way you protrayed bani's inner dilemma abt the gossip and her relationship with Jai.beautifully written.simply superb.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

Hi,

What in a world PIA is doing their, can't she take hint go back lady. i don't like you

don't tell me your Bani will invite her and puskar for dinner.
if it was me i would have told her to go and may be 10 years later we will meet again for a day. today we meat is equal to meeting you for 10 years.

please continue soon
pooja

Great Part Armana!
I really love it!!!
that was awesome!
But Pia the chiphkali!
I hate her! 😡 😡 😡
sorry my comments are in monologues coz im in a hurry!
I hope they don't find anything about Bani's identity then it would be a shame...i hope Jai proposes to her soon...i'm waiting on that...
i love the part!
anyways please continue soon
rooj

My apologies:
This is not only a much shorter part, but it is also technically incomplete. But i am really pressed for time, and so have not been able to complete it as yet. Nonetheless i decided to post it. Hopefully, soon i will have time to complete the rest of TFS. Thank you for your patience.

So, happy reading

Armana

Yaayyy!! Finally an update, and what an update. Kudos to you Armana for keeping us glued to your story. And I love the way JW shut up the reporter. But I guess Bani will get angry now.
Somali