The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 22

That was a nice long one. You've more than made up for the respite u took.
Loved tony.He already accepted as the mistress of the house. Nice touch of humor there in an otherwise ghambhir vatavaran.
Masi & jigs reactions were justified given the circumstances. But, how could Bani been so gullible. How could she have not seen pia's cunniving nature. Hopefully jw puts pia in her right place. Thnx for a lovely update

Dear Armana,

Thanks for the eagerly awaited update. Loved it as usual. Bani trying to caputre the complex natured JW on the canvas is definitely a task that is almost impossible.

I liked the flower arranging touch, (My favorite is Ike Bana arrangements, the classically simple Japanese art of arranging flowers)

The growing familiarity between Bani and Tony is nice...

Bani waiting for Pia to apologise made me chuckle, good thing that she is not the usual forgiving saint of KS.

The conflict between the very private life of Bani/Saraswati and a public figure of JW/the most eligible bachelor of Mumbai is understandable and evokes sympathy for Bani.

Liked the description of Bani in her beige trousers and silk blouse with the plait!

Nice part Armana. I was going to ask you to include Pia and Bani's interaction in the next part but my wish came true even before I stated that to you. Tony is such a sweetheart and love the way he shrugged off Pia at every given oppotunity. Waiting to see massi's reaction to Bani and the changes she has brought to this house and its permanent and temporary residents. I am sure it will not take long for her to fell in love with Bani. Next part eagerly awaited to witness the shocks and surprises in store for everyone especially Pushky over Dinner

armana...


A very well written part!!! 👏 I decided to restrain from commenting as words fail me to say what my exact thoughts are regarding ur writtings.

Take A Bow Lady!!All The Best.

Armana darling,

Wonderful as always dear👏. Loved the way you protrayed the uneasyness of everyone after the tabloid news and then the subtle way in whcih she is making an impact in his life and home.😛😳😃

And so hate Pia😡 that chipkali😡 sorry could stop myself from saying that to her dear, god why can't Bani just tell her to leave.😡

Hope the next update is soon dear.😃

Love

Krishna

God Pia seems to be omnipresent, not only in the serial but in the fanfics too. Please don't give her too much of prominence. Loved Bani the gracious hostess, she seems to the manor born But I feel Jai and she are sweeping pressing matters under the carpet and Bani seems too dignified and fragile at the same time. The relationship which seems so strong and right also seems vulnerable simultaneously. Is this the calm before the storm. Please give us battered romance lovers some respite. After all that's been happening in KS we need something to shore up our belief in love.
Waited a long time for this update. Magical as ever. Please don't make us wait too long for the next part.
Lots of love
Somali

Hey Ms Dickens!!

I FINALLY caught up with all the parts and at the cost of sounding repititive when I repeat myself, I will just repeat my previous words!! 🤣 (sorry, in a silly mood!! 😆 )

LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!!!

It would perhaps be best to do this by character, starting with my favourites...:

Ranveer and Nachiket: Chooooooo chweet!!!! 😳 😳 😳 I understand this Jai belongs to Sangi, so can I take Ranveer instead pweeeeease?!!! 😃 😆 They have treated Bani so well, especially the whole verandah scene with Roshni!! 👏 👏 👏 She seems to have become a natural replacement for the motherly figure they might miss!!! 😉

Tony Butler: 😆 i think his poor character always suffers, but you have used him so well dear! especially against Pia! 😈 and his feud with the cook!! 🤣

Jai 😳 : He's just so hot, so sexy, i cant go on because i will just keep gushing and gushing and gushing!!! his protectiveness for Bani, his flirting and childish roothna because he wants Bani to manao-fy him... 🤗 he's just soooooooooo adorable!!!!! 😳 😳 😳

Pia: Yaar, yaha bhi she's a money-grabbing chipku!!! 😡 😆 I might have felt for her if she really wanted to re-connect with her Bani-di, but no, she's just looking at her as a step-ladder to fame and fortune - typical!!! 🤢

Jigyaasaa: I'm going to hold judgement on her for now... I can understand her sisterly concern and ehr wariness, I just hope she gives Bani the opportunity to clear her misconceptions! 😕

Bani: 👏 nicely-sketched character!! i really like this Bani, she's so sensible, mature, she has her innate insecurities and all, but never let's them get the better of her good nature... even with Pia she is honest, forgiving and a loving sister... i just hope Pia doesn't try anything like she has in the show!!! 😡 😡 😡


Anyways, bahut rambling ho chuka!!! 😕 😆

Sorry for all the delays my dear, but I am slowly making my way through my favourites and getting up to date!!! 😃 Update soon, and thanks for the pm's!! 🤗


Cordy xxxx

Armana, Fabulous part once again! I love how you clearly portrayed the tension between Bani and Pia, as well as Bani's nonchalant attitude about residing in the WM- much to Pia's dismay of course! 😆 I love this story so far. It is by far one of my favorites and I am looking forward to your next update!

This Bani is not apologetic or self effacing or credulous or abashed when encountering with her sisters prying/lame attempt to reconcile.....I liked that attitude,really I do.

Also all the men in the house (Tony included),how they have sanctified her presence,her gentle sway.... u have brought that out very well.

This Bani sure is extraordinary.

Thanks for the latest one,well written as is the norm.

Hey Armana! That was an awesome part!!! God, i just hate this Pia though!!! 🤢 You'd think that she'd be satisified with Pushy, but no, the girl wants more! God, can't stand her! 🤢 Really looking foward to the dinner!!!! 😃 Loved this part! Please update soon! 😊

Love,
Goddess