The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 21

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awesome! awesome! awesome!
Bani is so gracious 😳 and Pia so cheap and conniving 😡 ..
Jai showing his preference to Bani in all matters 😳 ...
Tony, Nachiket and Ranveer's accepting Bani as an important part of Jai's life.. 😳
Despite all this, Bani is so unassuming and unpretentious. 😳 She is more of a giver than a taker.. 👏
Bani's arranging of the flowers and Tony complying with requests for vases... 😊
I love it, I love it, I love it
I love the magic carpet ride!

Hi Armana,

Great part as ever 👏 ...I hope we don't have to wait sooooooooooo long for the next part...

Garf

Excellent update Armana.

Loved how Bani tried satisfy her creative urge. Liked the way Tony handled PIA.

Pia will always be Pia, not satisfied with what she has and always wanting more.

I am surprised massi didn't take the first flight home after reading the tabloid.

Just finished reading ur ff....Beautiful...u really h've magic in your hands...great work man...eagerly waiting for the next part...

Hi armana,

i loved this update...it was awesome and worth the wait...👏

The reactions of every person involved to the news was very well captured and was very apt...

I loved Bani and Pia's interaction, their personalities easily displayed by their choice of words...

Thank you so much for the update..Rivs

Very nice part Armana... 👏 👏

I hate Pia sooo much.... I glad I don't have a sister..

Oooh, another part!😛

As usual Armana, wonderful is not a big enough word!

I loved the indirect humour you weaved in amongst all the more serious issues!👏....

Pia was her usual irritating self, and I'm more than a little miffed at Jai inviting her for dinner....Hope he soon realises what they did with Bani!

Cobra is annoying to say the least!.....the lady needs a hobby to keep her mind of JW and stop the problems!😳.....Jigs and Mausi don't seem all that happy but I'm waiting for Bani to win them over!😳

Does that package hold any importance?🤔

gr8 part asusual...
worth 2 wait..
i really hate Piya 😡 ..piya is shameless
do cont soon

another brillian part Armana!! 👏 👏 👏

Pia really need to learn how to take a hint and leave! Dinner in the next part will surely be entertaining!

Loved the 'rivalry' betwwen tony and the cook! 😆

Massi not to pleased by bani?? hopefully bani will soon change that and win massi over and maybe 😕 jgyasa aswell 😊

wow that was a great part
I love bani's interest in drawing and the urges she has to put them on paper so she can later paint them, but i wish pia would leave her alone!!!
please continue soon
Ria XxX