Key To My Life-FF epilogue pg 18 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

hey love ur ff..
it is really different
love the last two parts..
it was really sweet..
where jai helps bani it was really cute..

please continue soon..

❤️niralixxx

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i just read parts 1-5 today and it was awesome 👏 👏 ...wow in seven months finally jai and bani stared a convo together and they are becoming friends 😃 ... love will happen in no time 😉 ....jai dropped bani and she twisted her ankle and jai assissting her everywhere, that is so cute.... hope this duffer jai realizes that he loves bani 😉 😉
continue soon 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
gr8 part..... it did work 😃
hw can he drop her like that?? 😆
continue soooon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
wonderful update.....loved it...keep going...enjoying very much
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
great part please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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chapter 6

at 4 am there is a nok on their room door bani wakes up tries to c if she can walk on her own and she can goes n opens it cs her mom inlaw and it strikes her o ma god its karva chauth how cum i didnt put the alarm she mumbled .She went down with her MIL to have her food she cudnt eat jus had alittle bit n had water as well and went back to sleep.

morning jai was rushing to his office bani wasnt up he wondered why but just decided to leave his mom was up and he asked her why is bani not up and she slike she jus slept a few hrs back jai had that quizzical look and his mom said its KC today she had to eat if she had to fast ..

jai is like ok so i have to come on time but i cant cause work has been neglected lately n i have 3 /4 mahjor meetings lined dont no when ill be back ask her not to keep the fast pls shell fall sick mumma
his mum was surprised at his concern for bani but was happy and said to him " fast na rakhe to tumhi keh do why me "

jai was like ok ...

bani got up jai had already left she was cross at herself that she wasnt up on time but jus got ready n went to college she received jai's text askin her not to keep fast she replied back sayin i have already kept it .after uni she left to meet the lady managing pias sangeent and mehendi and wedding ceremony to c if evrything was on track and what time was she gonna cum and all that since the event was starting 2 days frm now... (the whole day without water and food made her feel dizzy at times but she controlled herself and said to herself bani u gotta do it for jai and she found the strength to stay on... she wondered all that was on her mind was jai when had he taken over like that .....after all she didnt even no if he liked her forget love her...)

As she came out frm the organisers office she saw it was pouring outside and the car was parked at a distance she walked thru that dwnpour to the car she was drenched and the heating did no gud to her.

she reached home

MIL: bani bacche go inside and change quickly.....

bani dashed upstairs to change and while changing she realised its raining so wht abt the moon comin out and she was like noway...

she came down and asked jais mom abt it she said another gud 2 hrs before moon was scheduled to cum out well wait it mite clear up as it always does or well do the pooja asuming its out ( i dunno the rule here sum one tell me)

jai was also not there she decided she mite as well rest for a while nd then get ready ...

in abt 40 mins she got up and started to get ready she took out a heavy red saree and matched it with a ruby-diamond set as she was done she looked at herself in the mirror she was looking gud and she wondered i never though like that abt my self ... she took out matching stillettos ones she had never worn bec she felt they were too high n uncomfortable and what if she fell but today she took them out wore them and decided letme walk a bit in these as her steps were a little unsure she muttered to her self "hey bhagwaan when will i learn " she stomped her rite foot and was abt to fall when regained controll of her self she decided " enuf of these i am takin these off" she was abt to take the rite one off when she heard someone say" do keep wearing them they look gud and dont worry abt falling im there ill take care " and it was jai bani was blushing profusely and just managed to get out of the room .but then returned as she thought jai mite need sumthing .....as for jai he cudnt understand what had gotten over him he just wondered i have never been like this before have i? he questioned

bani was lucky as her muminlaw announced the moon had made its way thru the clouds and she performed the pooja and jai gave her the glass of water rite thru this she wondered how she had kept the fast where as a child she always thought how her massi cud keep it but somhow today she had got that strength frm somewhere to go thru....it.

everyone went to bed bani was also carefully takin off her jewellery and keeping it away jai was chori chori cing her and smiling


sorry for the delay ..v sorry for that
sorry for the mistakes and feedback as always welcum...
suggestions as well....

next update later today or monday for sure....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aaaawwwwwwwww 😳 she kept the fast when he told her not to!

hmm.. what about their honeymoon??? 😆 i dont think jai will refuse!

cant wait for the nxt part

Tanu
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
lovely KC update....so glad jai made it on time...yay...cant wait for next update...
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
oh please don't stop there !!!!!!!!!!

Its AMAZING

👏

Please cont soon!
Thanks,
Sunju
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
Great part.
loved it.
KC was 😳
plz cont. soon.

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