Key To My Life-FF epilogue pg 18 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue.. hope the marriage bring thmm close..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Holdin her in his arms he kept lukin at her completely zapped , bani slowly opened her eyes to find herself in his arms for 2 mins she kept lukin at him and the fone ring snapped them out of their eye lock with she sayin " pls mujhe chodiye put me down leave me"

Jai : really ok .
He drops her gently on the floor and it does hurt her and bani for once looses her calm and says "ouch that hurts why did u do that", jai: u said put me down so I did thank me zyaada upar se nahin chodda and he smiled mischieviously and walked away
bani tried to get up and walk but she cudnt she had twisted her ankle holy christ who does she call only jai was there call him she cudnt just then jai reentered the kitchen and saw her on the floor he was puzzled asked her" kya hua yahin rehna hai" bani for a change gave him a mean look it was hard for her but she did manage it

bani: i twisted my ankle i think chala nahin jaa rahaa
jai : i am so sorry meri wajah se i didnt mean to for once it was jai who was at loss of words.... he piked up bani in his arms she felt like she hit a double jackpot and jai was carrying her up the stairs when jais parents arrived jai was stumped words fumbling he said " woh she twisted her ankle "
jais dad: " its ok we didnt ask she is yr wife

both jai n bani beetroot red

inside the room

jai put bani on the bed and got the sprain ointment and applied it on banis ankle his touch did sumthin to her which she never experienced before and she averted his gaze and lowered her eyes

jai for a change enjoyed this little moment with her but was sorry for her

bani ankle was better the next day but not ok so she woke up jai in the morning sayin "jai uthiye i want go to the loo, jai , jai" and then bani stopped in the seven months of marriage jai's name had come on her lips for the first time but she continued " jai" jai woke up and said "sorry" but he had heard his name on bani's lips for the first time in 7 months and it felt good that he felt she shud keep calling his name out ,so it was decided jai had to assist bani the whole day as she kept fallin bec she cudnt stand firmly enuf jai had to be there to catch her and hold her and jai got a chance ( he never had the chance uptil now) to c bani just havin cum out of the shower and lukin absolutely fragile delicate and vulnerable which left him kinda breathless before he regained his composure and helped her with her saree tying ...

then later in the day bani managed to start a convo with him where she told him abt she had once gotten hurt in her college and abt her college days jai also joined in and asked her abt how many guys fell for her and how many did she fall for she was quite embarressed at this ques and jai continued talking abt his college days when bani asked him

bani; did u like ne one

jai :( felt uncomfortable)

bani: sensing it : i m sorry didnt mean to

jai : there was this girl who i completely fell for she showed that she liked , mom and dad tried to warn me against her cos they new things abt her past and present i didnt listen to them and ahead with my realtionship but what they had told me abt her i found that to be true and she not only hurt my feelings and broke my belief but she ruined my relationship with my parents main apne parents se hi nazar nahin mila sakta tha after what had happened ...

there was complete silence bani cud see tears and anger in his eyes as he had recounted that so she quickly changed the topic n said
bani: jai i need to go to the loo
jai: ( gave the look not again) and smiled




by the end of thar day jai was quite tired havin assisted bani whole day but he didnt seem to mind it at all infact enjoyed it...
and nite wondered how he shared his lifes biggest problem with her so easily he was caughtagain in web of analysis did he like her, love her or was this happening cos their was no other option....he cudnt draw ne conclusion so decided it was better to sleep.

thnx everyone for yr encouragement ash9 i tried to be a little elaborate hope u c some improvement many thnx for the suggestion

ok joota chappals brick bats hum tayaar hain sabke liye ........... 😃

hope it wasnt boring............next parts cumin up sunday .. 😉 mistakes ke liye sorryyyyyyy
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
nice update...am liking how they are becoming friends...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
aww. jai assisting her everywhere!!

well atleast he has some sort of feeling that he's falling in love!!

Cant wait till tomorw!

Tanu
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
😃

Gr8... they r coming closer... 👏

Its really GOOOOOD buddy!!! 👏

specially the loo part.... 😆

Cont Soon!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Great part.
loved it.
plz cont. soon. 😉 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
great part
i could see they are getting closer, getting confortable with eachother and soon will fall in love.

cont soon

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
Excellent..........liked reading it.........plz update soon.......... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
hi
i read all the five parts great
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
dat was good... 👏 😊 ...pleeeeeeez rite some more of jb romance 😳

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