Key To My Life-FF epilogue pg 18 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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update cumin up in abt 2 hrs frm now and ill try n do two parts together if possible thnx for the appreciation guys you make my day!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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chapter 7


at nite jai heard noise comin out of the loo and went to chek and saw bani throwin up he went and stood behind her patting her back after she was done got her back and and suddenly when he was making her ly down his hand brushed her cheek and he realised that she had high fever.... he immediately put his hand on her forehead to rechek and he was rite she was burning...

he got her a few biscuits to eat and said :" ye khao and dawaa lo what happened fever kaise ho gayaa " bani replied " woh i got wet in the rain"

jai was like ok go to sleep and he himself went to sleep later at nite bani found her shivering she didnt want to wake up jai so she decided to snuggle up to him to find comfort what made her do that she never realised but she just did it and in a little while his arm was arnd her and the shiverin stopped n she fell asleep.....

morning jai woke up to c his arm arnd hers and was surprised he quickly moved cheked her forehead for fever it was not there he was relieved and just remembered holy christ pia and rest of the gang arrive today run jai before u r late


so jai drove one car while the driver the other ... and they reached the airport

At the airport jais two massi 's with their families were there and jai's cousins pia and sahil ( real bro and sis) and ranveer and rashi (twins) and pushkar ( rashi ranveers bro) were all very excited to c jai and saahil even asked jai so bhabhi has managed to stick arnd … making jai punch him litely

The ride back home was fun with cousins teasing jai all the time and he gettin back at them

when jai reached home he found out bani had gone to the uni as she had an imp lec to attend and wud be back ne time ....

jai cusins decided lets have a basket ball match till bhabhi cums

Basket ball match in full swing

Teams: jai pia sahil and ranveer rashi pushkar
Jai captain team 1 and ranveer team 2

Ranveers team was doing well and when bani arrived at the scene and the game stopped and pia said i shud leave as i dont want to be under the sun for long sahil said so now what bhabhi u join us bani made sum excuses they didnt work and she was now part of ranveers team while rashi went to jais team bani was quite a revelation to jai and so on a crucial point as bani was moving with the ball jai came frm behind and caught hold of her so she cud nt make the point as bani was lifted by jai she was furious
But jai was happy as he had stopped bani frm scoring jai held bani by her waist and she luked at him their eyes met and the anger vanished ranveer caught the 2 of them and said aloud:
" sahil maine kahaa inke romance mein hum mare jayenge kya bhabhi u fell for his tricks apko apne apko chudhake bhagnaa chahiye thaa … bani went red and ran frm their leaving a laughing jai behind …

Jai laughing was a site his cousins aunts uncles parents had all wished to c in the last 7 yrs but it never happened but today as they saw it they were all happy and sahil spread the word arnd how this feat was achieved everybody was doubly happy

Mehendi ceremony was conducted and during the entire ceremony at times bani remembered her own ceremony …..
jai time an again found himself luking at her as if captivated by her beauty n charm.....for she looked divine in her lite pink lehenga and minimal jewellery .....his heart and mind said different things to him and he was lost in his own complex emotions when his dad came and asked him to meet someone ..

rite thru the mehendi jai observed bani how she was so there for everyone and how she being so very young cud hold conversations with people of all age grps ..

while jai joined his cusins and was chatting to them he saw bani talk and lauf wholeheartedly with sumone he was captivated by her she looked even better when she laufed wholeheartedly but cursed himself did i even give her a reason to smile forget lauf wonder how she has put up with me....as he was wondering abt this he wondered why this bothered him she chose to marry him not his fault

bani: jai (snapped out of his thoughts) his heart skipped a beat everytime she called his name in her sweet way though it had only been 2/3 times uptil now...

jai: haan

bani: wo apne khaana mumma ne kahaa poocho khaana khaa liya

jai: haan what abt u

bani : ya
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jai was still confused abt his own feelings and thought what abt bani does she like me, love me,or was she just putting up with me...

he decided to find out......


ok thats it hope u guys arent bored and sorry for the mistakes...

sorry for the entire crap im dishin out feedback suggestions joota chappal brick bats all welcome..... atleast makes me no sumone is readin it

lots of u expecting loads of romance sorry my story line does not focus on it( the truth im not a romantic person so how will i creat the scenes is the whole problem) 😉
jus kidding shud be windin this ff soon i hope...

next update tom for sure 2 parts
have fun guys ..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bccool



hey they will jai is a bit confused like he doesnt want to fall into love hes scared n confused...

plus just want to let u know yr fanfic silsiley is awesome i just feel like deleting my fanfic after reading yrs its awesome .......

thanks honey...I dint know you read it...could please post a comment there...that way i will make sure i send u a pm the next time i update...

and dont worry about this one...it is really good...if u read my first attempt u would know what i mean...continue this its great...

Rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
that was a wicked update! 👏 👏 👏 poor jai is so cinfused i think him and bani shuld talk..communication is the best solution i tell u it does wonders! pls cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ...nice part...so atleast one of them is attracted...but confused...we should fix that...i think jai's investigation would do that...
Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part.
loved it.
So Jai started to analize his feeling for Bani...interesting.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
hey great part! thanx for updating so early 😊 bani n jai getting close gud sign! anywayz update soon,

Maro 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
loved it....great story.......and I am sure you will be up with the romantic parts soon......the basketball match was wonderful
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
fab update 👏 👏
do cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
that was great! now how will jai find out if she loves him or not? jealousy.. maybe?

cant wait for the 2 parts and if you end this FF be sure to start a new one!

Tanu

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