Key To My Life-FF epilogue pg 18 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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bani writting notes for anything related to jai or if she wanna tell him sumthing.. that was cute..

now lets see wat will she do this time as jai's mum told her to talk with jai about her study

continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Its Great

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Please cont soon
thanks
sunju
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
how cute!! bani leaving him little notes!!
hope now jai feels a little guilty!! waiting for his reaction to bani's wishes to study further.

continue soon

Tanu
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part

I just hope Jai doesn't say no to her studing further.

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i hope jai says yes for her studying further anyways he does'nt care what she does in her life and does not want to interfere with his so he is probably gonna say yes
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 2

Bani was left wondering ask jai now that's sumthin she didn't have courage for after the first nite conversation she had never ever had the courage of sayin ne thin to him out of the fear that it may upset him nd she may get hurt so only conveyed the very necessary thru a note here or there…

Later that nite when jay was workin on his laptop in his room bani came in changed and was luking on a oppurtunity to start a conversation but didn't get ne as jai was engrossed in his work after much waiting bani decided to speak

Bani: I want to study further

No response frm jai as if he never heard ne thing

Bani continued

Bani: I want go in for an mba mumma and dad are ok with my decision and told me to ask yr view on it …

Jai: (vcurtly) I think I told u its yr life do what u want to do

Bani (interrupting him almost uncharacteristicly) : I am sorry I asked I forgot my mistake don't be upset …..

At this jai looked up at her he for the first time in 2 months he felt guilty of havin been rude to her but nevertheless he in his true style didn't apologise and thought well who asked her to get married to me.

Bani turned away n went to sleep… and jai was left working
So within 2 months bani is thru a good college and has started her mba ..

Life is going on no conversation still though jai has given her own chauffer driven car and she enjoyin life at home with jais parents and at uni she is smiling all the time to keep everyone arnd her happy but inside time n again she thinks abt her relation with jai and whether its gonna change ever or not…but she never lets this cum to her face ….

Jai meanwhile into his work, does keep observing bani chori chori while she is arnd whether its her struggling with her assignments , cooking whatever…she does manage to catch his attention without even tryin to do so

Its banis sem exam time and her first exam is the next day..
Jai comes home and see's bani studying for her International business exam ,
The family has dinner and bani is very tensed the smile has vanished and jai notices that .


sorry guys vborin i no but u no what i am maha depressed with yesterdays ind vs srilanka match and specially feel for rahul dravid.... but i am gonna be posting two more parts abhi itself so 3 in all for the weekend n then whether i shud continue that ull tell me
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Posted: 18 years ago
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chapter 3

Next day bani goes for exam and jai is in office but he is a bit restless n he doesn't no why is it so…

Banis exam doesn't go well she cums back sad n depressed and tells jais mom

Bani: it was bad I have let myself down first exam hi itna bura and goes to her room cryin ..( guys she is 21 and a little over sensitive types ya )

Jai cums back in the evening his mum tells him that bani had a bad day and was all depressed but has gotten a bit over it as she has her finance exam tom

Jai enters the rum to c bani in conversation with a friend

Bani: I don't get this concept its killin ma first exam neway is ruined and now this …
Bani: holy Christ even u don't know man I am screwed..

She kept the fone and put her head on the table she didn't realize jai was arnd n watchin her

Bani feels a little tap on her shoulder she luks up and its jai

Jai: kya hua

Bani: kuch nahin wo…

Jai : don't hide ne thing bani pls tell me , agar tum bataogi to himain tumhari help karsakta hoon na , trust me and tell me (jai said all this lukin bani straight into her teary eyes and what made him say all this was unknown to him all at that mattered to him was that bani shudnt be like what she is now)

Jai had finished that tears were rolling down banis eyes and she was sobbing like ne thing while she told jai abt her miserable exam and how she cud not understand a few concepts now in finance which cud screw her further and that suddenly her mind was not cooperating with her…

Jai : go wash yr face and cum and then tell me what u don't understand

Bani jus looked at him thru the tears and did as she was told Jai was feeling miserable frm inside to c her like this.

Bani came back frm the loo

Jai : r u ok now shall we start


Bani: ya sorry

Jai cudnt help but smile it was in the last 7 yrs that he had actually smiled and he realized that

Jai : ok tell me whats that u don't understand ..

Bani told him the things and jai started explainin those to her
All the while jai explained bani didn't luk at him she was so thankful to him but cudnt say it and was also surprised at his soft behaviour but didn't pay much attention to it as she was tensed abt her exam )

Jai : got it

Bani :ya

Jai's mom came calling for dinner …
Later…

Jai got up and decided todo his work he didn't feel gud with bani bein sad he was so use to that pretty smile that this sad face bothered him and he cudnt concentrate so went back to his rum only to find bani all screwed up and talking to herself that she was still not clear on a particular concept jai had explained he walked in and she just started luking at her book jai goes up to her

Jai: how is it goin

Bani :ok

Jai: if u r still not clear on sumthin ask me and then go to sleep u need yr sleep before an exam and don't worry u will do well …

Bani sort of not scared to ask him ne thing ne more cleared her doubt

Jai during the nite cheked whether she was sleeping or not and jus to c her sleep peacefully game him internal satisfaction…..and he slept peacefully

sorry for mistakes n boredom but me not a very romantic person thats why but u can always guide me

joota chappal brick bats im ready for them....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great parts please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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chapter 4


Next morning
Banis got ready to leave for her uni jai saw her skip her breakfast and as bani was abt to step out she heard jai

Jai: bani, wait I am gonna drop u to the uni ( exam se pehle another shock)

Bani: nahin ill go

Jai: yr driver isn't here

Bani : ok

Jai: cum lets go

Jais mom: beta breakfast

Jai : ill cum back after dropping bani and have it shes getting late

Jais mom: ok kuch saat le jao bani neb hi kuch nahin khayaa

On the way jai asked bani why she hadn't eaten nethin bani said she didn't feel like

As bani was getting out of the car ..

Jai: good luck

Bani: thnks

Jai: and u no what u shud always have that pretty smile of yrs on yr face as this sad face doesn't suit u one bit

Bani was left stumped and all she cud manage was a smile which certainly unknowingly made jais day

While bani wrote her exam jai waited outside her uni vtensed and restless and
was caught in his web of emotions and drew the conclusion that since bani is there with him its affecting him like it wud ne body normal..

Just as his thought process broke he saw bani comin out she saw him and gave a huge smile jai smiled back (ratio once in seven years now 2 in roughly 2 days)

Bani: aap yahaan driver ko bhej ..

Jai : woh I had work this side and mom told me to pick u up so I did (jhooth jhooth)

Bani: ok sorry meri wajah se…

Jai :its ok

On the way
Bani told jai how her exam went of vwell and thanked him jai was vreleived
Jai: where do u wanna eat

Bani: ji

Jai : breakfast nahin kiya tumne don't u wanna eat

So jai n bani stop for a quick lunch where jai on cing bani happy is all happy ( ya its normal)

They reach home and jai's mom has a piece of news for them


Jai 's cousin pia is getting married and the whole family will be gathering next week for the wedding at their house ( jai's house)

Bani is like wow: perfect exams ke baad shaadi to have fun brilliant news mumma

Jai: as usual ya thats gud

The whole exam week passed with jai being absolutely there for bani and making excuses abt why he was dropping her and then picking her up … while the truth was he wud jus be there outside her uni waitin for her exam to get over….

Ok banis exam were over she thought jai had helped her in return of her helping him out with hmoon prblm jai also thought the same

Jai is inside the loo getting ready

Fone rings

Bani piks it

The guy on the fone is frm jais office and informs bani that jai hasn't been in the office for long during the last week

Bani : accha

Guy: oh ma'am how were yr exams I just remembered jai sir told he cudnt be there cause yr exams were on….

Bani was shocked she heard jai cumin out and decided to hand over the fone to him

Bani : apka fone

Jai : thnks

That whole day bani was lost in her own thoughts but was very happy and that happiness showed on her face she found out from jai's mom that he never ever came back for breakfast her exam day and he on purpose told the driver to take an off.


Jai that day missed bani arnd him or the other way round and decided to go home early..

Jais parents were away that evening bani was busy cooking and cleaning one of the top shelves in the kitchen with the help of the servant….

Jut then doorbell rang the servant went to chek it was jai and jai sent to take out his stuff frm the car as he walked by the kitchen he saw bani lokin fab in a floral printed straight western outfit hair open little earrings in her ears jai was transfixed little that he realize that the fone was ringing and bani in her attempt to get it lost her balance and fell frm the stool/table she was standin on next moment jai had to dash and grab hold of her

mistakes pls ignore and forgive..
thats it then me waitin for the comments ...... suggestions brickbats whatever ... evrything helps u c
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will update soon tom i guess maybe tonite u neva no 😆 😆 😆

have fun guys
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great parts read all 4. so something is gonna happen b/w them soon.
please continue soon

swati

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