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rajkona

@rajkona

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Posted: 18 years ago

#211

And once again, you achieve the impossible! You make me break my silence! Fab part. Love his hidden yet open jealousy. And her quiet dignity. Very well captured. Hope next part is on its way.

PS. Still waiting for your response to my PM...
GB

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baran

@baran

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Posted: 18 years ago

#212

armana yarr we was waiting 2 lo0o0ong 4 update ......make fast next time 👏

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pooja1_76

@pooja1_76

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Posted: 18 years ago

#213

Armana,

What was that.................. 👏
amezing dear..........
no words to describe..................

I love jai he is in the situation where ladoo khaye to phachtaye na khaye to phachataye.........

and based on that i usally conclude that agar phachatana hi he to kyna khake phachataye.

Waiting for the next part..............
please continue soon...............

pooja 👏

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#214

Armana,

Excellent like always....and no words to describe...
Jai is jealous!!!! that's a good sign, isn't it? 😉

Please don't keep us waiting for long

Good job! Keep it up
👏

Kh

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nikita28

@nikita28

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Posted: 18 years ago

#215

Hi Armana,

Superb 😛Great ff.

Please continue soon, I wait for an update everyday.

Thank you 😛

Nikita

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#216

Jai jealous?!

Gosh hun, I love you!!🤗

Thought the idiot would never react!

The kiss, and then the question at the end were fantastic!😳

Poor Mohan, will need to find someone else to hook up with!😆

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Nina

@shahni4

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#217

Armana
Just read part V-B was waiting for it for a long time !!!

Simply awesome the way you bring out Jai's jealousy!!

He is so apprehensive of having a relationship with Bani!!!

Loved he wya Bani humg up on him!!!

Please Please continue soon!!!!

Nina

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#218

Armana
fabalous part.loved it.jai and bani are just prefect for each other, cause they both pretend to angry at the person they love.hope I am making some sense.beautifully written.looking forward to the next part. 😊

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#219

Armana,

As usual a great part, really like the flow, the emotions, the romance, first kiss!! Very sweet yet romantic!!

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india06

@india06

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Posted: 18 years ago

#220

The kiss was coming,sweet! Poor B,what a rejection.The man really cares,in a rather complex way !!

And was that JW marking his territory!!???

It was good, this sec.Enjoyed it. Thanx.

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