FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 20

Originally posted by: nibbles

Gosh Armana, last two updates were absaloutely amazing!!👏
Thanks sweetie!

I honestly can't believe Jai!!😕.....he feels such an emotional pull towards Bani but isn't ready to show it - totally...
Yes well, let's see how the mighty fall!

I loved the jacket scene and then the way he fed her, very sweet!!😳
I loved writing it!

So does this mean Tarun and Rano aren't exactly happy about JB being together?!😕
Well Tarun is JW's friend so he has to be a bit of a duffer! And as for Rano.....
Wait, it shall be worth it. At least i hope so!

Originally posted by: Cordelia

and you call MY updates short?!! 😛 😆
I see your point! quite the kettle calling the pot black😆😆😆

as usual, you rocked Ms Dickens!! 👏 👏 👏
as usual, you are too kind Ms. Brown!😳

so simple, yet sooooooo romantic!!! Jai is being such a duffer, why can't he just do what he was thinking?!! i'm sure no-one would mind picking the spoon up later!!! 😆
I love that line, yep, no one would mind! But JW is always a bit of a duffer!

please update soon, and strategically arrange to remove the possible kabab-me-haddi named Mohan. 😛 😆
Yes Maam! As for Mohan, sometimes the 'haddis' have a part to play!😉

Originally posted by: simz99

Hey Armana
This part was just so classically you....masterfully written with understated elegance and charm 👏
Thank you Sim!😳😊
And you are right your Bani is the Bani we all fell in love with...and Jai seems to be too, Am so glad to hear that you think so!😃
no matter how unwillingly 😉 Duffers rule!!!😉
Gosh, what it is about weddings...such a great backdrop for what is building up to be a superlative love story 😳 😉 😉
Exactly! there is something about weddings!
cheers
Sims
PS - Love the way you post all updates on the same page...gives the story great contunuity and makes it so easy to locate, so thanks for that!
And for this suggestion the thanks should go to Rekha. It's her idea.
PPS - Can we please have a longer part the next time?! 😉
Sorry, couldn't do it this time round. Had too many weddings to attend! Will definitely do it for the next part!

Originally posted by: kubare

Armana, no words can describe how beautifully you wirte or be good enough to praise your wonderful and heart touching story.👏
Dear K, Thank you for that!

Loved the way her eyes are searching for him through out the part but donot notice him keeping his eyes on her and her everymove. Love thesubtle jealousy he feels towards one of his own friends sticking around Bani.😆
Yep!😃And still he doesn't realise!

Loved the way he follows her at last as his resove not to be anywhere near her breaks at last ans how he gets covers her with his coat making sure no to smudge her mehndi and also get the vegetarian food for her and feeds her. Awww.... that was so romantic and so sweet.😳 They really are menat for each other and cant wait for it to happen soon.😛😃
All in good time dear, all in good time because good things come to those who wait!
Love
Armana

Till your next upate.

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Armana
that was so wonderful.really romantic.the jacket and the food, really sweet.beautifully written.you really have magic in your fingers.just fabalous.cant wait for the next update.will be looking forward to it. 😊

Originally posted by: Garf

Hey Armana,

Seriously yaar just love the way you write and especially the part where his eyes follow each and every moment of hers...Just reminded me of Mr. Darcy from Pride and Prejudice...seriously it was just sooo romantic and you have fabulously managed to create romance and passion from something so mundane as eating food... 👏 seriously can't wait to read the next chapter now...

Garf

Originally posted by: sun29

hello armana,
u really spin magic with ur words,i thought i was actually in that party with jai's eyes following bani, bani looking for jai and me watching these two,and so we do see a jealous jai walia ,and a caring one too 😳 😳 ,hope rano and tarun do the needful

keep up the good work dear 😊 👍🏼

Originally posted by: nema123

Armana,

It is such a pleasure to read your FF.
I read it many times again and again.. and like it more and more...

Originally posted by: cheeze

Aaaawww armana, if there was a word better than PERFECT I would have used it here, awesome sweety, great FF 👏 .
I am loving this Jai and Bani and Rano and Tarun. The jacket scene and the feeding scene had me reading it over and over again 😉 😳 ............
I am simply loving it, please continue as soon as you can.