FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 21

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Armana I cant prasie enough and So I have stopped comemnting.

Does this make sense?
Dear Sangs, it makes a lot of sense. Thank you for the compliment.

Whn r u updating next? I hope NOW.
the answer is NOW!😊

BTW, I have a confession to make -I am IN LOVE with this JW. May I make him mine and the relation can be for keeps for time to come? Since you are the creator, your blessing is important. 😳 😳 😳
Chalo, for a pal like you i give my blessing.....but what about the satmpede that is already enroute?😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Hkaurk22

Armana, that was awesome! You have done a marvelous job! Please do continue soon! I look forward to it!



Thanks H,
didn't know you followed TFS.
i'm updating in just a few mins.
hope you like it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
In one word, its AMAZING. 👍🏼

Thanks a lot dear for this wonderful part. 👏👏👏



Maybe this is what Jai should udnerstand, that THE Jai Walia who is used to glamourous females from his society and circle for whom any girl would make herslef available, has finally found an emotional harbouring in Bani. Its not the physical attraction, its somehting more than that. Its a feeling of being completely lost in someone who doesnt desire him simply cos he's Jai Walia, the businessman tycoon. Thats why his pull towards Bani is so great and all encompassing. Though he knows very well that probably his cynical and embittered life would have no place for Bani. SIGH! How wrong he is.

He's so MY kinda Man, so everybody back off. I will only share him with Bani in this FF. After that, its bye bye for you all. 😆😆😆

Coming to Bani, she must be at the worst stage now. The emotional and physical attraction that she feels for Jai is a revealtion for her. But Jai's off and on attitude must be surely bugging her. Poor dear! She must be thinking that for Jai Walia its a matter of few days, or few stolen moments, which will be thrown away to lie unceremoniously in the road after some time. And that she will bear that pain of separation and longing.

Its as if these two are made for each other, by the way they clicked togetehr, even if they are more on the sparring sides. 😳

Loved the emotional, all-encompassing kiss. It really brings out the dilemma for both the characters. Jai's instant refusal and Bani's isntant acceptance of the situation.

An advice to them both


Thanks a lot dear. 🤗

How about updating tomorrow? 🤣
Edited by sangitadas - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey armaana

It was an amazing part....i hav no words to tell how much i like this FF.
Well i like this JW and rano and as uasual amma confuses me.
little request keep off all mohna's,roshni and pia's away from J-B plzzzzzzz
So when are u gonna update the next part 😉


who am i??? thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey armaana

It was an amazing part....i hav no words to tell how much i like this FF.
Well i like this JW and rano and as uasual amma confuses me.
little request keep off all mohna's,roshni and pia's away from J-B plzzzzzzz
So when are u gonna update the next part 😉


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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow! Excellent part! Nice job with Jai's jealousy and protection of Bani.. Continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part armana so jai does have feelings for her but does not want to acknowledge it well aage aage dekhe hota hai kya cont soon pls dont keep us waiting for long
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Posted: 18 years ago
Poor Jai, can't stay away from Bani, can't imagine himself in a serious realtionship with anyone either...trying so hard to be a gentleman..

Tarun and Rano are so nice and concerned about her - love them!

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Fab part.
loved it.
Mohan is so after Bani 😆 ....Jai is jealouse or is it something else. 😉
Bani becahre stuck btw two. 😆
plz cont. soon.

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