FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 19

Originally posted by: coolwoman

Armana, I have been meaning to write something about your FF. but did not get time.

Its wonderful to read your ff, you just have a flair for writing and little nuances e.g.

I am a vegetarian."

"Of course you are," he said tonelessly and putting the plate back on the table, stood up and turned to go back in. Two steps away he stopped and turned, looking at Bani who had turned slightly in her seat and so was looking at him.

"Anything except the saag," she informed him.

"it would have to be the saag," he murmured before walking away

Its so romantic, I just love reading.

D.

Originally posted by: abhita

Armana...
Too Good!!!
Thank you!😃
So romantic... I doubt whether Jai realises how deep in he is... :-D
Of course he doesn't, duffer that he is!
and Bani ... good thing that you did there dear... stay away from Mohan!
When it comes to matters of the heart, Bani has always been smarter!

Originally posted by: piccola

Amazing Armana! Your flair for words is superb...

Thanks P. Like your id, btw. cani ask what it means?

Am loving the story too. Bet the mystery -when you let it out - will be mindblowing.
I hope you think so! now i suddenly feel a little nervous about it!
And its wonderful to feel the chemistry between the 2 so vividly!
Thank you😃

Waiting for your next 'un
Okie!😃

Love Piccola

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Armana,
Amazing..beautifully penned..hope to read and feel more soon... thanks...👏 👏 👏

Khushboo

Originally posted by: btkr

Wow, that was a quick update!!! 👏

Don't worry, I'm making up for that with the next update!😛

Arre yeh Jai kitna to-die-for hai....got so intimate mehendi ke bahane...lovely to see him getting so uncontrollably drawn to her..
But JW at his romantic, authoritative best has always been 'to die for,' atleast until Mayi decided to cut him into little peices.....
But no mayi in my ff!😆
Thank you, glad you like it!😃

👏 👏 👏

bt

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

As usual, a great update,

👏

Originally posted by: india06

Lovely section.But the favorite part was JW feeding B, cozy scene,both oblivious to the rest of the world,in their coccoon, as if it was the most natural thing for them to be doing. Thanks.

Originally posted by: fsam

Armana you are a master with words. This part was awesome. The subtlty with which you portrayed JW's jealousy, to Bani being catered to by another man was amazing. Bringing out the love and care he feels for the person he most wants to ignore. Wonder why?

Unknowingly Rano and Tarun have become Mr. and Mrs. cupid.

Waiting for the next part.