FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 18

Armana, no words can describe how beautifully you wirte or be good enough to praise your wonderful and heart touching story.👏

Loved the way her eyes are searching for him through out the part but donot notice him keeping his eyes on her and her everymove. Love thesubtle jealousy he feels towards one of his own friends sticking around Bani.😆

Loved the way he follows her at last as his resove not to be anywhere near her breaks at last ans how he gets covers her with his coat making sure no to smudge her mehndi and also get the vegetarian food for her and feeds her. Awww.... that was so romantic and so sweet.😳 They really are menat for each other and cant wait for it to happen soon.😛😃

Till your next upate.

Love

Krishna

Armana
that was so wonderful.really romantic.the jacket and the food, really sweet.beautifully written.you really have magic in your fingers.just fabalous.cant wait for the next update.will be looking forward to it. 😊

Hey Armana,

Seriously yaar just love the way you write and especially the part where his eyes follow each and every moment of hers...Just reminded me of Mr. Darcy from Pride and Prejudice...seriously it was just sooo romantic and you have fabulously managed to create romance and passion from something so mundane as eating food... 👏 seriously can't wait to read the next chapter now...

Garf

hello armana,
u really spin magic with ur words,i thought i was actually in that party with jai's eyes following bani, bani looking for jai and me watching these two,and so we do see a jealous jai walia ,and a caring one too 😳 😳 ,hope rano and tarun do the needful

keep up the good work dear 😊 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Sugar&Spice

Hey Armana ..........
Wonderful start to a fan fic -- but that's usual for your FFs....!!
Looking forward to the next.

Hi Sugar&Spice,
Glad you liked the beginning. I hope by now you've caught up with all the five parts. Hope you liked those too!
Armana

Originally posted by: sweetu144

Armana,
The fourth update was amazing. It was intense like fire burning passion. The desciption was so visualizing.
You didn't need to add anything over the "edge", the description itself sent shivers. I loved the eyes.
Beautiful...
As i have always told you, i can never not read you work, as to miss it would be like to not eat food.
You are a talented creative writer and i owe you a heartiful thanks as without your words of awareness I........Thank you.

Keep writing ms.dicknes...pls do.
Amazing, beautiful.
I am truly out of words... 👏
Love you
S.

Dear Suddha,
Good to finally see you here! Welcome😃
Glad you enjoyed the fourth part. Btw, V-A is up so let's see what you make of that!😉
It's always a pleasure to read your heartfelt posts so keep them going!
As for the Dickens thingie: et tu?
As for thanks, hun, i am the one who should thank you for taking the time to read and post a comment!
I really appreciate that!
I think it's only when you start writing an ff that you realise how much you need feedback! So thank you for being one of the ppl who always takes the time to provide it!
Love
Armana

Originally posted by: amiee

i hope jai falls in love with her soon i can already see the sparks flying

Dear Aimee,
Good things come to those who wait....😉😛
Thank you.
A

Originally posted by: inavars

oh wow armana....i imgained the whole dinner scene to be so romantic 😳 😳 we can never figure out jai, huh? surprise after surprise! 😳

continue soon!!

Glad you liked the dinner ......Yep, JW is a real surprise and that's why we call him the king, isn't it?
Thank you
A

Originally posted by: rivya

okay...why can't I be Bani for just a few minutes?...when I was reading this update...i could actually picture them both sitting in the garden...eating in silence...Jai quitely raising the food...and she quitely eating it...OMG...you describe things so beautifully...
👏
It was amazing...truly...continue soon..

Dear Rivya,
As for your exchanging places with Bai i guess i'd have to say, we both need to get in line! I like visualising when i write, am glad you like the way i write.😃
Thank you😃
A

Armana,

It is such a pleasure to read your FF.
I read it many times again and again.. and like it more and more...