FF: The Foreign Self. part I to V-C - Page 17

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coolwoman thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Armana, I have been meaning to write something about your FF. but did not get time.

Its wonderful to read your ff, you just have a flair for writing and little nuances e.g.

I am a vegetarian."

"Of course you are," he said tonelessly and putting the plate back on the table, stood up and turned to go back in. Two steps away he stopped and turned, looking at Bani who had turned slightly in her seat and so was looking at him.

"Anything except the saag," she informed him.

"it would have to be the saag," he murmured before walking away

Its so romantic, I just love reading.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Armana...
Too Good!!!
So romantic... I doubt whether Jai realises how deep in he is... :-D
and Bani ... good thing that you did there dear... stay away from Mohan!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Amazing Armana! Your flair for words is superb...

Am loving the story too. Bet the mystery -when you let it out - will be mindblowing. And its wonderful to feel the chemistry between the 2 so vividly!

Waiting for your next 'un

Love Piccola
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Posted: 18 years ago
Armana,
Amazing..beautifully penned..hope to read and feel more soon... thanks...👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow, that was a quick update!!! 👏

Arre yeh Jai kitna to-die-for hai....got so intimate mehendi ke bahane...lovely to see him getting so uncontrollably drawn to her..

👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
As usual, a great update,

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Posted: 18 years ago
Lovely section.But the favorite part was JW feeding B, cozy scene,both oblivious to the rest of the world,in their coccoon, as if it was the most natural thing for them to be doing. Thanks.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Gosh Armana, last two updates were absaloutely amazing!!👏

I honestly can't believe Jai!!😕.....he feels such an emotional pull towards Bani but isn't ready to show it - totally...

I loved the jacket scene and then the way he fed her, very sweet!!😳

So does this mean Tarun and Rano aren't exactly happy about JB being together?!😕

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Posted: 18 years ago

and you call MY updates short?!! 😛 😆

as usual, you rocked Ms Dickens!! 👏 👏 👏

so simple, yet sooooooo romantic!!! Jai is being such a duffer, why can't he just do what he was thinking?!! i'm sure no-one would mind picking the spoon up later!!! 😆

please update soon, and strategically arrange to remove the possible kabab-me-haddi named Mohan. 😛 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Armana
This part was just so classically you....masterfully written with understated elegance and charm 👏
And you are right your Bani is the Bani we all fell in love with...and Jai seems to be too, no matter how unwillingly 😉 Gosh, what it is about weddings...such a great backdrop for what is building up to be a superlative love story 😳 😉 😉
cheers
Sims
PS - Love the way you post all updates on the same page...gives the story great contunuity and makes it so easy to locate, so thanks for that!
PPS - Can we please have a longer part the next time?! 😉

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