Its wonderful to read your ff, you just have a flair for writing and little nuances e.g.
I am a vegetarian."
"Of course you are," he said tonelessly and putting the plate back on the table, stood up and turned to go back in. Two steps away he stopped and turned, looking at Bani who had turned slightly in her seat and so was looking at him.
"Anything except the saag," she informed him.
"it would have to be the saag," he murmured before walking away
Its so romantic, I just love reading.
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