FF-secrets of the heart-update pg33 - Page 5

HEYAS!! i noe guys have been looking forward to this one, so HERE IT IS! hope u lyk it 😳 ! thnx so much jaz si, mamta and guli!!! u guys ROCK!!!

part 3

The ajnabi grasped onto Jai as if it were for her life. She felt his strong muscular arms around her and felt so much safer-- yet more scared at the same time. What was happening to her? It was as if she never wanted to let go….

sard sard saansen aaj tujhe kuchh keh rahi
suno zara suno zara zara
dheeme dheeme dheere dheere dhadkanen badh rahi ab kare toh kya ab kare toh kya
dabe dabe ruke ruke kadamon se aa raha koi nasha koi nasha koi nasha
daba daba thama thama seene mein hai pal raha ek dard sa dard sa jaane yeh hamein kya hone laga
hone laga
jaane yeh hamein kya hone laga kya

Jai, though not wanting to let go of the intensity of the moment, hesitantly pulled out a lighter from his back pocket(so my babii smokes once in a while) seeing how his ajnabi was terrified. He held her petitie frame close and felt her racing heartbeat against his own. He felt her soul mold into his.

gunguna rahi khaamoshiyan yahi
waqt yeh dhale na
muskurake waqt yeh keh raha
khud ko bhula de
dhuaan dhuaan huan sama suni suni lag rahi
kyun yeh fiza
kyun yeh fiza
jaane yeh hamein kya hone laga
kya pata

With a slight brush of his fingers, fire arose from the lighter. The stranger, sensing the heat, slowly backed away from Jai. She opened her eyes slowly and gracefully as jai brought the fire closer to them. She stared at him and his soft brown eyes. She saw the passion in them, she saw the pain in them, she saw the fire flickering in the depths of his pupils. jai stared at her beautiful and natural face. He felt his heart skip a beat as he flickering light fell on her radiant features ever so delicately.

pal do pal ko hi
aayi hai roshani phir wahi andhera
pal do pal toh saath zindagi
jee le zara
dara dara yeh mann mera kal phir ho na ho
kise pata kise pata
zara zara thama thama seene mein hai pal raha
ek dard sa
ek dard sa

Jai began stroking her cheek gently. She closed her eyes feeling his soft skin brushing against hers, it was pure torture. Jai watched her with intent eyes. His fingers traced down to her soft pink lips. Her breaths were slow and sensual. She whispered his name from her silent lips.

jaane yeh hamein kya hone laga
jaane yeh hamein kya hone laga
ab kare toh kya
sard sard saansen aaj tujhe kuchh keh rahi
suno zara suno zara zara
dheeme dheeme dheere dheere dhadkanen badh rahi
ab kare toh kya
ab kare toh kya

A tear trickled down her left cheek. She was crying softly, in her heart, in her mind. Knowing, just knowing that this could never be.
Jai couldn't supress his desires anymore. He brought his lips to her cheek and kissed her tear away. He trailed soft kisses down her cheeks and towards her neck as she wimpered. Jai suddenly backed away. His ajnabi's eyes opened. Filled with passion, she looked at him questioningly. Why was he torturing her like this? Jai let the fire go out. Darkness.

Jai brought his face closer to hers, closing his eyes. His lips moved closer and closer as he felt his ajanbi's long, heavy breaths, filled with desire. She closed her eyes once again, letting herself surrender to him. To her heart. Closer… and closer….

Mommy Walia: JAIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!

They jolted apart and opened their eyes. The electricity had come back on and the room was fully lit. MW was approaching the room from the stairs. Jai glanced at his beautiful stranger one more time. With a regretful smile, he stood up and walked away. Her eyes welled up with tears once more.

Halia that was so 😳
why did mommy walia interupt
then what happened? 😕 you can't stop here
please write soon 😛

oh man!!!!!! 😳
please continue soon!! 😃

awww...hun don't chop chop 😉 😆


that was an AMAZING part...now where did this mommy walia come from like jigyaasa...go on mommy, go find some clothes to mend or something...leave our love birds alone 😆

haila!!! 😳 😳 😳 sooo cute!!! 😉 yaar, why did MW pop up?! ruined such a beautiful moment! god, mothers! always intruding on something!!! 😆 i loved this part hun! please continue soon!!! 👏

Love,
Godess

Hey, how did I overlook this ff?
I just read all the parts and it was awsome. I really lovead it.
Continue soon!

Yuks

asha dost...khub bhalo... 😉 😉
i hope u update soon...loved it...
lekin yeh kya...momma walia...uff...
looks like JB keep getting interrupted in ff...just like mine...they have been interupted many times... 😆 😆
its fun to tease your readers...but dont worry they always get what they want...

Originally posted by: jnawaz

asha dost...khub bhalo... 😉 😉
i hope u update soon...loved it...
lekin yeh kya...momma walia...uff...
looks like JB keep getting interrupted in ff...just like mine...they have been interupted many times... 😆 😆
its fun to tease your readers...but dont worry they always get what they want...

shukriya jaan! ok, lemme tell u da truth-- i suck at bangla😳.
i luv teasing the readers... i planned this interuption way b4 i even started this FF! 😆 u noe how ANNOYING it when JB keep getting interupted in ur FF? it drives me CRAZY! especially with rano's phone abt masi when they were abt to kiss!!! but i lyk how bani helped him thru tough times😳.

all u luvly jaanz🤗
but guys... dun hate me 4 the next part😕 its gonna be crappy, boring and SAD. S-A-D 😭

awwwww sooo cute, looks like gr8 effort was put in...i hope u keep us updated frequently.....yeh MOMMY...har mommy ruin eveyrthing! 😆 😆 😆

YOu write really well yaar

You last few lines just took my breadth away 😊

Really there was no need of MOM walia to interupt such a innocent 😳 moment