FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 7

Originally posted by: hanaane

Its amazing subj....too good mind blowing yaar.....Excellent job..... 👏

Haila I'm getting used to your ff now... please continue soon.. 😳

thank u thank u, u are always so kind with your comments. welcome aboard and enjoy ur flight, we will reach our next destination tomorrow.

hey have i been allowed frequent flyer membership too cheliji...?! 🤓 😉

Originally posted by: sabsj

hai hai main mar jaava, meri toh jaan hi nikal di tumhare comments ne ............. i need daily inspiration u see, otherwise i suffer from writers block 😆

ur baby is too chaloo, likes to get all touchy feely, wants to ensure bani knows what she is missing 😆 chalo for a moment, let's pretend it was u instead of bani ........

i saw the dhak dhak song on zee music this morning, while writing, i don't know, i just could not resist adding it 😆 i was laughing trying to picture jb on the dhak dhak song, it was so damn hilarious.

now i have to figure out how baby gets icequeen to meltdown quickly 😆 wish me luck and pray that i remain inspired

lol i am glad my comments did what they were supposed too.

yaar daily kya har ghanta(when i am home and on the computer), i can inspire you. hehhe 😆

hehhehe yep my baby is chalo, what he was just making sure she has nice skin you know 😳 lol okay let's pretend it was me. why just for a minute?

i know after reading that song, i was picturing jb doing it, man i couldn't stop laughing. hehe 😆

yaar my baby is smart, he will melt the icequeen.

lol i am sure you will always be inspired!!!!! 😳

just to be on the safe side, here is your does of hugs for today. lol.

🤗

Can't wait for the next part.

Shina

Originally posted by: sabsj

Chapter 2

Reaching into the back pocket of her jeans, Bani pulled out a hastily written list and scanned it. She needed to talk to Raashi first, and make sure everything they had ordered had arrived. With what they'd paid, there certainly should be no problems. Still why take chances.

"You dropped this" said the same husky voice again😳😳😳is awaaz ke to sab dewaane hain😳.

Bani turned and stared into those intense brown eyes. He held up a slim gold chain, and her sapphire pendant winked in the light.wow...sapphire pendant... 😳... main aa rahi hoon too claim the pendant and the guy holding it😉

"I found it on the steps," Jai said. "Want it back?"yes my love I do want it back...

"Please." She held out her hand, expecting him to drop it into her palm.

"Turn around, and I'll fasten it on you," he said (studman doesn't waste any time now does he).haila...ye to bada hi fast hai...😆

"I don't think so" said Bani, actually please do, I would loooooooveeeeee that .... Bani thinking to herself.bahi...kya baat hai...dil mai kuch...zubaan par kuch...😉

But he had already stepped behind her. "Lift your hair," he said, reaching around her, and to her amazement, she did. She could feel his hot breath on her bare shoulder as he leaned down. He fastened the chain against her neck, his fingers brushing lightly against her sensitive skin. Startled, she sprang away, then stood looking at him, fingering the pendant.thats the effect he has...😳

"The sparkle in the sapphire matches your eyes," Jai said.

We all know he's talking to me and only me here....😳😳😳Sabrina....my eyes are brown...kaunsa gem hota hai brown...😆I know I know i've lost it... but kya karoon...😳

She turned and tried to walk away, but he met her stride as she headed toward the back of the store.

"You're welcome," he said. "Glad to help" he chuckled under his breath.

"Well, really," said Bani. "That's a sorry pick up line mister."😆

"Did you think I was trying to pick you up?" Jai asked. The amused grin was back. "I wasn't, sorry to disappoint you though."😆😆this guy is too much...

"Hmmm" was all Bani could manage.tounge tied....😉

"Would you like me to pick you up?" Jai asked enthusiastically with a smirk on his face.Oh my God

"No" she said and turned the corner. Bani stopped for a few seconds, watching him from the corner of her eye. She picked up a jar of spaghetti sauce and pretended to examine the label.iske saamne itna handsome banda khada hai...and she's reading a jar

"Wow, where did you learn how to read a jar upside down, could you teach me too" teased Jai.😆

Bani fumed on realising her folly. She kept the jar back and gave Jai a nice hard stare from head to toe and suddenly she did not mind his attitude anymore.

"Appraisal number 2 ........ god it's hot in here, isn't it Bani, do you feel the heat too" said Jai.

"What aaa........ppraisal number 2, what are you talking about" enquired Bani, but she knew what he was referring to.I know too....😉

"I thought you were planning to pick me up, outside the store," he said. "Not that I would have minded. I quiet enjoyed the appraisal you were carrying out on me" continued Jai.😆.....tumne aaj kya khaya tha maate... I think this conversation is too good...

Bani continued walking, but her pulse quickened at the suggestion. She cast him a sidelong glance, just to see if he was teasing her. Their eyes met and she felt herself blush. Dhak Dhak karne laga, oh mera jiya jalne laga .........kya baat hai...Sabrina ka jiya dhak dhak karne laga... from dhadak dhadak to dhak dhak....

"Why don't I make things simple for you, and ask for your number?" Jai said. "I plan to be in town for a few days, anyway. We can start with dinner unless you have something else in mind."

"Absolutely not" retaliated Bani.

"You mean yes actually, but choose to say no. Ok I get it, I know that is the in-thing now. I'm good at breaking codes. So, Ms. Absolutely not, where would you not like to go" asked Jai trying hard to control his laughter.

"Sometimes you put walls up not to keep people out, but to see who cares enough to break them down."

This is great... this one line speaks volumes.....👏

Sorry for the delay in the review...but I wasn't really in a mood for it in the afternoon...but now I'm 😊...so the review pesh hai... ab aap mujhe batao how u liked it....

Poo

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Sorry for the delay in the review...but I wasn't really in a mood for it in the afternoon...but now I'm 😊...so the review pesh hai... ab aap mujhe batao how u liked it....

Poo

cho chweet, u actually did a line by line review 👏 🤗 i was only kidding my dear, u did not have to, sach me, i was just teasing u. but thanks anyway, it was really funny, actually u tend to see the whole chapter in a diff light with all these added comments. and u can be really funny do u know that 😆thanks dear, u r a real sweetheart 😭 sorry for unnecessarily troubling u.

troubling me 😡 😭
it was my pleasure doing it... 😊
I do it only when I feel upto it...so 🤗
I'm glad you liked it.... 😳

Poo

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

troubling me 😡 😭
it was my pleasure doing it... 😊
I do it only when I feel upto it...so 🤗
I'm glad you liked it.... 😳

Poo

loved it .......... thank u so much.

Originally posted by: divya_123

haila next part till tomorrow cant wait this long😕

oh well u can call me divya no need to add that _123😳

sorry yaar to keep u waiting this long. bheja kaam karna chahiye na, can't just write anything and post it ....... sabar ka phal meetha hota hain. just a few hours more ........

😲 a few hours more...oh my.
Time pass kesai karoon?? 😆 😆
Chalo...i hope you gave your fingers the rest....garam pani se kutch farak parah....it should do...that's what i do, when it happens to me 😆 😆 .
Am waiting impatiently 😉 ...magar its ok take your time... 😛 will be patient...
Luv ya
Sweetu 😳

wowzer! you know all about my directness but what abut this jai! straight to it isn't he. pheli mulakaat and he is already helping bani were her necklace, agli mulaakat me pata nahin kya hoga. actualy jo hoga manzoore sabs hoga right!!

only two apraisals bani if i were you i woud probably be staring constantly i actually feel proud of bani she actually got herself together enough to be able to answer jai. i would have probably lost all higher functions infront of such a studmuffin!! 😆

plz continue soon

Luv Taz