FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 78

Originally posted by: sabsj

no new journey till the mods settle the ff issue first which is making the forum so cluttered ........ once it is decided where the ff's are gonna be posted, i will think and act accordingly.

what issue are we talking about... what am I missing here....😕

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

what issue are we talking about... what am I missing here....😕

check out this link u will know

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/467413/regarding-fan-fictions

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

awwwwwwwwwww !!! Saby hun !! tht was simplyyy aweosme...fabolous ..marvesllous....and tremendouslyy breath taking storyy nad a perfeccttttt ending !!!

thanks shafaq, am very happy that you liked the ff

just loveddthe storylinee from the start !! simplyyy tooo good !!

thank u once again

lovedd the passion...decriptions of jai 😳 passions..anger tantrums...live ...communication ...thei rreactionss andd ur writing most of all !!!! 😉 😳 😳 awww !! it one of the best i have read in my lifee !! aww i am gunna... get all senti know !! 😭 😭 and also loved the east of the beast !! 😳 😉

Beast of the East turned out to be the saviour after all.

awwww !! the last part was tooo ggooodd !! .... i am sooo glad .... they actuallyy made it up in the ned ..without any ego .. and .... the fighting of ones inner soul !! .. i am soo glad both o them admitted it ! ..and loved it when jai said " my wedding band " 😳 😳

am a succor for happy endings ........ u can either enjoy being loved or then let ur ego destroy it all for u.

hun !! i am not at all offended .... of ur style of writing ..and the scenes you hvae portrayed .! they weree toooo awesomee !! 😳 ahhem ahheem ..i am still with the pm i sent u ! 😉 all innocent ! 😉 😆

yes dear, u r my innocent little naughty baby, and i tried to be as descent as possible only for u

i must say i just lovedd the quotes u have usedd throughtout the entiree fanfic !! simplyy hatss off to u ..for that !! i think they aree simpllyyyy brillaint !! .... ur quotations play a major part in ur fanfic'sand simply go along sooo well ..soo well selected .... that they actuallyy portray the feelingss of the characterss at somee point !!!! just toooooo fab ! .... i dont think my day is ever complete if i dont read ur quotaions !! even of teh parts whihc i didnt read before i use to read.... all the quotes !! .... ur quites have amdee me such a quoteaholic ! 😳

yes dear finding the right quotes is extremely difficult, but then i manage to do it, just hope i can continue to do so.

but i simplyy love the talent you have.... 👏 and reallyy apprecite it ..that u takee ur verryyy precious time... to writee this for us .... and some eople like ME ..can never do justicee to ur riting ..simply becasuee we can never find .... words whihc would justfy ur writing ..... and give the complimnts it deserves !!! 😳 😳 😉

no dear, u do more than enough justice to my writing, by reading the updates so religiously and providing me with such heart warming compliments ....... it makes all the hard work worth the while

hun ! i am simplyyy eagerrllyyy waiting ..for ur neww ff..i ave booked the flight before hand !! ... and all packed..to go of to imgination world ! .... 😉 and dont woorryy i am not redinigng to my job....eventhough ... i am changing my destination..... i am stil at my old post ..... so do not forget ! 😉

I I captain .......

o00hh btw hun ! for all the timess i have been in the hosital coz of ur writing ..i am sening the bills ur way ... 😉 😆

bring it on, captain jai will be more than happy to compensate u

los siento ...for all the parts whihc i didn't read on the time ! nad i am sure i will ty me level best to keep up with it ....soo noo apologies nxt time !!

no problem ......... der aaye par durust aaye

Thnksx for everthing hun ..all the pm's and everythingss ..... 🤗 and soorryy for all the harsh comments whihc i have sent ur way ! ..will be waiting ever sooo eagerlyyy ...for ur neww ff....!! and Thnksx for dedicating thosee 2 partss for me 😳 😃 😃

i did not mind anything at all ......... and u deserved the dedications. i will start the new ff once this ff issue is sorted out on the forum.

Thnksx !
Shafaq ! 😛

Adios for now ! 😉

sayonara ......... till we meet again
👏

Originally posted by: hanaane

Haila the end... 😭 😭 😭

all good things have to come to an end na .........

And no reply on my last comments, it looks like someone is not happy about my comments..... 😭 😭 😭

nahin dear, please don't say that, have just been very tied up ever since i got back home, have a baby and cannot neglect her anymore.

Me happy you back home safe sound... 😃 😛

me too .... it feels like heaven

It was indeed the best flight I have ever enjoyed sabsss... 😛 😳 😛

many more to come ......... i hope so

And most of all your writing and explaining in details about their feelings..👏 👏 👏

chalo jahaan bhi hoga destination aapki agli flight hum aphi se tayaar hain...sara hamain phool mat...😭

how can i ever forget u .......... ho hi nahin sakta

Tha last part was simply outstanding.... I loved it saby... 👏

am glad, was not sure if i had handled it well, but i guess i did afterall

The magic spider woman... 😃

yes spider woman, ready to spin another magical web

As for the humour of the day, and the Newton commiting suicide I cant stop laughing.... Poor Newton... What he must have felt seeign all those scenes.... 😆

bechara newton ........ 😆 long live rajnikanth

Always luv..

hanaane...

Originally posted by: Vedo

totally awesome end Sabs! 😃
👏
I just love the way you write...its fantabulous! 😃
that's the most enjoyable flight I've ever been on and I can't wait till monday! Did I ever tell you that my travelling is one of my hobbies? 😊

thanks vedo ............. thank u so much, u have been a fantabulous reader too.

hopefully u will enjoy ur next flight too .......... i love travelling too .......... most relaxing thing to do

Originally posted by: purple_penguins

That was the night they promised to be together through everything,
each to care for the other when old and gray
A lovers' pact the most likely to last.

--Krista J. Mikula

That quote just came to my head.... That was a lovely FF.. the last part... I was speechless.. also with my face looking like a TOMATO!!!..hehe..... Merci for the PM... and I am soo sorry that I couldnt post earlier... I'm totally excited for Monday..lol... That is awesome that you're at home with family and friends...

Take care Sabrina **aviva**

that was a lovely quote aviva, thanks so much dear ........ am so happy to learn that u liked the ff............. so u were blusing too ........... sorry if i scandailsed u too much. till our next flight then ....... adieus

Originally posted by: inavars

awww...Sabs that was a PERFECT ending to a PERFECT FF!! 😃

shukriya ji

i'm going to miss it! 😭

don't worry another one will come up ....... with ur kind of jai in it

yaar...Sabsj airlines was beyond satisfactory...it was AMAZING!! and intensely hott 😳 😉 but don't worry...i like it that way 😆

sorry about the hot part, kya karoo, some say make it hot, others say no ....... karoo toh kya karoo 😭

awww...i feel like writing more...but what else can i say that hasn't been said already?! it was an AMAZING FF sabs!! 👏

i understand dear, and know exactly what all u wanna say and i thank u for that

and of course i love the nanda brothers 😉 😆

me too

now start singing 'oops i did it again' and write than new FF soon!! 😉

😆 on monday .........

Originally posted by: stonex

awesome finish
bit sudden but very nice
...................
👏 👏 👏

thanks stonex, i felt the timing was just right ....... did not want to drag it on too much ........ i am a chotti race ka ghoda 😆

Originally posted by: jigna_07

Sabsj!
that was an awesome ending!
sorry it took me a while to read!!!!
but i am glad to know that you will continue soon!
your airline was a very comfortable ride!
ia m going to miss this fanfic
i am going to miss the humor
and i am going to miss you updating

thanks jigna for enjoying ur flight ......... don't worry the humour will continue on the next flight too, just for u ...........

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

Why did you finish it??? I liked it a lot. 😭 😭 😭

Are you writing a different fanfic, now?

-Rimpy

rimpy, i ended it becoz they got back together yaar, aur kitna stretch karti ........ am not ekta mayi u know .......... i found it complete, toh end kar diya, otherwise i would have just messed it up out of greed.

don't worry am starting a new ff soon.