FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 77

Originally posted by: lonely14

Sabyyyyyyyy,

Here is your detailed comment.

merci beaucoup

First of all, I am glad your dhakkan regained her brain cells, and went back to my baby.

couldn't let u and baby down

My baby is cho chweet, this time sweeter than my cookies😳

too sweet to be forgotten

Haila the warning was essential. heheh, but yaar it didn't affect me, made me want to read more.😆

sweety u read the edited version ........ unedited padti na toh ........

lol okay the part was intense/romantic/passionate, and yet it made me laugh too(don't ask).

i think i know why

I loved the nanda brothers, well i just have one bro/cousin who take cares of me like that, but it's still sooo sweet having 4 bros looking after you.

keeps all the goondas at aby

I loved the way you ended it Saby, after all it's my baby's ending right???

Your writing style is just amazing, the way you incorporate the emotions, and just the feel of the atmosphere it's just too good Saby!!!!

thanks dear, i try my best just so that gulabo and pinky are not let down

haha the humor of the day had me in fits of laughter😆, yep rajnikanth had his own style, lol😆 bechara newton couldn't keep up with him.😆

ahhhhh rajnikanth, my fav were his glasses and his cigarette stunts

Saby, i betta be the first one to board the flight, and i should have a special place, you know with me n gulabo you get free entertainment comedy + Sarcasm. 😆

of course, goes without saying ,,,,,, the closest to captain jai

I loved this butterfly farm too saby, from blind love to at first glance all of them were wonderful. I am glad i read them all, and i can't wait to read more.

ur wish is my command, just let them sort out the ff issue on the forum first

So the first thing monday morning all i want to do is board the next flight on sabs airways.

slight change in plan given that ff's are messing the forum, let's see what the solution is then i'll post

Perfect characters, perfect place, perfect emotions, perfect writing, and my perfect butterfly farm writer.

Thanks for another beautiful butterfly farm.

perfect ff for a perfect buddy ....... the pleasure was all mine

Shina AKA Pinky😳

Originally posted by: divya_123

haila u ended it 😕
fabulous ending dear really liked the last part
it was just awesome finally they are both together for ever 😳

will wait for ur next fanfic 😉
but as ever will miss ur fairytale FF that was the best one and this one is my second fav 😳

yes dear the time seemed right .......... am glad u liked it.

i may never be able to recreate another fairytale, but i will try not to disappoint u too much either.

Originally posted by: ovaltine

I enjoyed reading your ff tremendously esp all the making up for loss time 😳 . Loved your quotations about marriage, your humour an added bonus.
Looking forward to the next sabsj airways take off with Your pilot and stewardess 😆 .
Good job sab
Best wishes

thanks ovaltine ........... i am glad it came across like i intended it to. next flight will take off depending on what decision the mods come to re ff's.

Originally posted by: Cordelia

no reply on my last comment...? looks like someones not too happy with me! 😭

nahin guruji have just been extremely tied up ........ yeh ho hi nahin sakta that i can't be happy with u

being a faithful guruji, i will continue and comment again anyway....

u r such a sweetheart, thanks for understanding

👏

thats for the update...


🤗

thats for you...


the perfect ending to the perfect fanfic - you had everything - love, hate, romance, passion, anger, tears and tantrums, drama and BHALOOS!!!! etc etc - as usual you prove what a talented writer you are!! this is one of your best, and that too written while in hospital - the ff you are starting on monday, when you are back home in full form, promises to be another masterpiece as we have come to expect from you... 😃

thanks dear, u r too kind with ur compliments .......... after all cheli kiski hoon ............ like guru, like cheli

ab yeh monday kab aayega.... 😆

Originally posted by: shish

Mubarak ho.....Mubarak ho....👏 👏 👏

thanks shish

Originally posted by: nibbles

Haila Sabs.........loved the ending!!

And I've booked my ticket for Monday in advance!!😉

Walia eaten by baloos..............wouldn't mind that.............as long as it's in the show and not your FF!!😛

thanks nibbles ......... believe me right now the jw in the show deserves to be ............... 😡 i hate the guy

Originally posted by: ash9

thanx for this fanfic
amazing ending 👏

thank u

Originally posted by: sabsj

Poo this is for you ............. thanks for everything sweety. You are the bestest friend I will ever ever have .......... 🤗🤗🤗don't say thanks coz we're freinds.... and U mean so much to me....🤗

Guys, I am at home finally, thank you all for your prayers, blessings, best wishes, love and support during the worst phase of my life ...... I would not have been able to do it without all of you. God Bless you all.

Yiiipppeeee....u're home... so party time.... bolo kab aaon main for the party😉

review coming up in some time.....😊

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

It ended....but what a beautiful ending.... 😭 (tears for the end...but happy tears....for the happy ending...)
They patched up everything...and so well...
well Saby this description of JW keeps all going... the one we see onscreen is compensated for here....

Bani ko akal aa gayi...and I'm glad that aa gayi....afterall JW ka pyaar aur meri phatkaar ka asar hai 😉
It was a great story ....handeled with perfection... 👏


So I hear Sabsj Airlines is starting a new journey on monday... well as a lifetime member...I'm already on board..... 😳

Poo

no new journey till the mods settle the ff issue first which is making the forum so cluttered ........ once it is decided where the ff's are gonna be posted, i will think and act accordingly.