FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 79

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: indian_godess

Oh My God! This is the end of your FF??? 😭 Sabs, i had a heart attack by reading the topic title "The End" i was like "WHAT?!!!!"

i covered almost everything yaar, first meeting, dating, marrying, divorce, getting back together only thing left was parenthood and old age and death ............ which i was not keen to write about, issi liye end kar diya when i was happy with them getting back together for good

but it was a beautiful ending!!! 👏 i just loved reading your FF Sabs, everything about it was just great! 😃 I'm so glad that Jai and Bani are back together and finally realized that they are made for eachother and that nothing can tear them apart! 😃 i absolutely love the ending!!! 😆 and how Prachi's four cousins came to the rescue! 😉 😆 Prachi was probably very concerned!

thanks dear ....... i tried to keep it simple and less complicated.

this FF was great! and i hope you'll be starting a new one soon!!!!! 😉 you're a fantastic writer Sabs!

yes have one in the pipeline already, will probably start on monday.

love
Goddess

p.s. loved the Humor for the day! always made me laugh my @$$ off!!! 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

It ended....but what a beautiful ending.... 😭 (tears for the end...but happy tears....for the happy ending...)
They patched up everything...and so well...

thanks poo, i knew u would understand, and u know me right, i hate rona dhona ....... always and forever and together is my motto

well Saby this description of JW keeps all going... the one we see onscreen is compensated for here....

u bet, i have disowned the on screen guy after friday ..... he is a first class creep and a dhabba on husbandhood

Bani ko akal aa gayi...and I'm glad that aa gayi....afterall JW ka pyaar aur meri phatkaar ka asar hai 😉

well it was high time

It was a great story ....handeled with perfection... 👏

thanks dear


So I hear Sabsj Airlines is starting a new journey on monday... well as a lifetime member...I'm already on board..... 😳

yes monday ........ lets just hope u like the new destination


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Posted: 18 years ago
can I have a hint of where we're heading on monday.... 😉
sabsj thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

can I have a hint of where we're heading on monday.... 😉

will pm u

Edited by sabsj - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

I am happy you back home now.... and my poor niece or nephew must bee missing you soo much I hope every thiing is ok now sabyyyy...😃

I know we have a flight to attend on monday my spider woman... but me want to know where to if posible... plz plz plzzzzzzzzzz......😛 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: hanaane

I am happy you back home now.... and my poor niece or nephew must bee missing you soo much I hope every thiing is ok now sabyyyy...😃

I know we have a flight to attend on monday my spider woman... but me want to know where to if posible... plz plz plzzzzzzzzzz......😛 😆

Chapter 1 of your new itinerary is already posted, go ahead and indulge in the luxuries 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sabs...a fitting end to a wonderful story !!! I really liked the way those two talked and solved thier issues. Good one !

Swathi

I see that u have already started the next 1. Should now go and take the next flight now. Guess am already late !!! :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
THIS IS A MESSAGE FROM RITIKAS ...... POOR THING HAS BEEN TRYING TO POST IT HERE, BUT IT DOES NOT SEEM TO BE HAPPENING........

hey sabs

I really had a great time reading this story!..and the ending was just perfect!....just wat the doc ordered for all the romantics on the forum!....the "beast from the east"(must say this was very cute) was surely a blessing in disguise!....wat i liked best about this story was the fact that it was written in a very simple uncomplicated way...yet managed to convey their emotions so well!...it was a story about love and its rediscovery from the beginning to the end....purely J-B...no unnecessary characters...no bizarre twists in the plot!(God knws we have had enuf of that from the serial!)....was a real pleasure!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Sabsj,
A very late reply, I know but still........

👏

WOW!!!! What to say !!!!!!!!!
I loved every moment of it. Every scene was so well etched, I could actually feel them happening in front of me. I have no words to describe how well this was written.
My favourite part was Jai coming all the way to the cabin on a stormy day, to get the wedding ring which he had left there. It was very very sweet.
Second thing I loved about it was, their sitting down and trying to solve the mess of their marraige.
It is very easy to run from a problem but takes a lot to sit down and look for faults that you might have made and admit them and clear them. That is what actually makes a marraige successfull.
I could go on and on and on.....describing every scene and how beautifully it was portrayed, but I do not have so many words, so all I can say is every scene and every detail was very well done. 👏
Very very very well Written Sabs. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow! Just finnished reading every update. It was truely wonderfull. 😊

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