FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 58

Originally posted by: Vedo

of course every chapter is gonna be awesome when you write it so wonderfulyy na! 😃 btw how are you feeling now? 😊

awwwwww, u r cho chweet, thank u dear ........ that was a real nice compliment to receive.

am feeling much much better now........ am gonna be going home on sat ........ yippppppeeeeeeeeee 😃

Originally posted by: divya_123

Brilliant thats the only word i could say today simple superb part dear 👏
wow this is going to be fun i must say abhi ek din purra bhi nahi huwa and all these lets see what happens next since she herself said it she still is his wife 😃

well continue soon 😃

divya rani, thank u dear, yes this is gonna be fun ............ stay tuned. i continued just like i promised last night, u yet have to read.

Originally posted by: sabsj

No need to thank me dear you have earned it all by yourself... 😃

Sabj...... You made me do baking till late last night.... and all the members of my family thought that I was a thieve and they nearly beat me up.....they thought I was sleeping and I was actually lost into my own wold... yaar when I am doing baking I usually forget everything don't know why... I think I will have to do something about that otherwise I might end up beaten as a thieve... Good Lord everything is soo hilarouse now days... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

You know what if you had leaved here I would have made for you my special home made Cookies... I only do that for the one's I most love yaar, tune dil mera jeet liya .....🤗 🤗 🤗

It was indeed immensely good..... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Dil khush kar diya tune phir se... 😳 😛 😳

Spiderwoman.... update soon.... 😉 😆

always luv..

hanaane

It was too perfect sabj......👏 👏 👏

The time has again come to a live where the best of the past can once again be leaved forward....Yeh pyar ka mausam hai ise gavana nahi jaiye... 😳 😛 😳

You left me out no words to say... 😛

My spider woman..... nice name sabj...I hope you don't mind me calling you that... do you...?.... 😳 😆 😆 😆

always luv..

hanaane...

Originally posted by: divya_123

me first ... me first.. 😆ok ok i know i m being kiddy but for the first time i m the first one to comment n any fanfic yaar 😳oh well back to the fanfic wow dear once again brilliant part👏👏 yup they really need to talk and i too mean by only TALK 😉 really liked their talk about their life.. their relation.. their marriage.. their love for each other..😃😳 awesome part dear continue soon. one more thing if planning to continue tomorrow morning do it only after brushing ur teeth and make sure u have ur breakfast😳😆

yes u first ........ thanks divya once again, u are spoiling me with your compliments ........ don't worry they are gonna talk a lot, trust me on that .......... and yes i did post the update only after brushing and eating just like divya madam had ordered me to ........ ab khush ......... 😃

Originally posted by: sabsj

yes u first ........ thanks divya once again, u are spoiling me with your compliments ........ don't worry they are gonna talk a lot, trust me on that .......... and yes i did post the update only after brushing and eating just like divya madam had ordered me to ........ ab khush ......... 😃

yah very much khush😳i m happy u followed the orders given to u by divya😃

wow just read the other part must say allot is gonna happen 😉

things are heating up so let it be 😉

aheem one more thing i was wondering if u could post the part soon amm if planning to do at lunch time plzz have ur lunch then do it 😃

if plannign to do at dinner time then plzz do u have ur dinner then do it😃

but if u planning to do it tomorrow well then i guess ill have to pm u something i do have plenty of belans would like to have some😆

damn good part dear conitnue soon

👏

Originally posted by: nibbles

Wow Sabs.........communication is just what they need!!👏👏👏

Loved part 15 and 16!!😉

thanks nibbles

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

HAHAHAHAHHA!! I loved the humor of the day, especially the one with the English Girl. 😆

Now for your fanfic, one word wow. I loved the way the talked and opened up. I loved the way they were over run by passion but overcame. I loved your fanfic, your characters, your writing style. It was all wonderful.

Are you an English major? Your fanfic was great, your poem was beautiful and your homur was actually funny. All around you are a great writer.

-Rimpy

hey rimpy, yes laloo and the english girl was really good ........ thanks for liking the ff too ........ no dear am not a english major, pyschology major though ........ if that helps ........... thanks for thinking i could be a great writer too, am really honoured.

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

awsome part... its one of my favourites.... sorry itne saare gusse wale smilies daal diye par....bani 😡...great job👏

and this is for u too...🤗lemme know what u think😉

Poo

😆Bani I HATE YOU...I JUST HATE YOU😭 ........ poo u r just tooooooooooo much my dear, i laughed so much while reading ur review, seriously gusse main tum bahut pyaari lagti ho ..... i know i know u hate bani ...... daro nahin, jai usse thikane le ayega ...... let u know what i think of ur review ....... i think it is fantabulous ...... makes me wanna keep writing and writing only to get reviewed by u ....... u are one funny girl .......... i don't know why u won't start a ff of ur own.

Originally posted by: lonely14

hahahahhaah, sabs the humor of the day was hilarious!!!! Loved the english girl one. 😆

aap aaye, bahaar aayi, yuhi hanste raho, main hasante rahungi

Coming to my baby, omg if he gets any sweeter, i am gonna die.

na na, u can't die, what will happen to baby then, u can't leave him bani ke bharose

Sabs please tell me what goes on that woman's mind? I am telling you give her a brain transplant, and may be just may be, she will be fine(hoping against hopes).

arre her screws are dheela and they don't make brains for dhakkans like her ......... she is a lost cause, all we can do is pray for a miracle

What made her leave him? I mean she had his love, his support, what the hell did she want? It is evident how much he loves her and cares about her. ughhhhhh that woman.

poocho na yaar kya hua .......... bani paagal ho gayi hain

He is right, he runs a goddamn business, and if he could find time for her, why couldn't she?

but it is always about HER, never HIM

I hope they really talk it out, my baby can't shouldn't be hurting anymore, especially because of her. ugh.

consider it done sweety

My baby, i feel so bad/sad for him, bechara is trying everything, the least she could do is talk to him.

she better, uske baap ko bhi baat karni hogi 😡

Sabs this woman is getting on my nerves, please do something about her, before i lose it completely. heheh😆

ok sweety hang in there, am almost thru with her

I actually pictured the entire update happening in front of my eyes.

haila ....... so did i, only difference must be, i pictured a real ferocious bhaloo too, who took bani far far away from ur baby

I don't know what you made my baby wear, but well as usual i was imagining him in all black(looking all hot, dont' worry whenever i imagine him, he has a body close to my jaan sallu's). His facial expressions, body language, i could imagine it all.

it was black all the way ......... and sallu .......... hai main mar jaava .... kyunki itna pyaar tumko karte hain hum, kya janoge, sallu tumhari kasam 😛

Sabs wonderfully written 👏👏👏

Can't wait for more.

thanks dear, this means a lot to me.

Shina😳