FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 59

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

this part is PERFECT.... 👏
i don't think i should review it... its too good to be messed around with....
I love you for this part...🤗

Poo

thanks poo, this part was very close to my heart, bahut pyaar se likha tha maine ....... love u too

Originally posted by: Cordelia

Poo just said it all.. it was the most perfect part I could ever have imagined. 👏

Before you even started you had me in tears cheliji... you are the sweetest friend I could ever have, and I'm not going to try and respond in poetry because we all know how THAT would work out!!! So all I will say is... 🤗

without saying a word, u can light up the dark ........... u say it best, when u say nothing at all .......... main sab kuch samajh gayi guruji.

Now for Part 16! EXCELLENT!!!!!! Communication, finally!!! and how mature and sensible of Jai to pull back from the obvious temptation in front of him, and instead say they are going to TALK!! LOVE this JW huni, I adore him!!!

thanks gurumaya, sab aap hi ki kripa hain ........ i adore this guy too, chalo iss ko dhoondne nikal padte hain

Ab jaldi se update kardo... I can't wait for the inevitable jhagda-manaana to begin!! 😉

aapka humkum sar aankhon par mai baap

And Mr "Beast from the East" - I love you too!!! 😆

me three, me four

Originally posted by: purple_penguins

like poo and cordz said.. it was perfect 👏 👏 ... Finally, Jai, Finally... what a sweetheart... I dont get it... if she had his love, trust, support and all why did she leave him....what is wrong with this gal?? I truly hope your feeling better... and ooo... happy belated anniversary..... 😉

**aviva**

hey aviva ........ thanks dear, today seems to be a perfect day for me.

yes he is a sweetheart isn't he ........ well this is bani we are talking about, one of the most complicated women to have been born on this earth.

am feeling great dear, 1 more day and i am on my way home ....... and thanks for the ann wishes too.

Originally posted by: swathi

hey sabs,

what can I say, the successive chapter turns out to be even more better than the earlier one. I have always like people communicating and this has to be one of best hubby dialogues ever. The guy sounded so sincere. A very heart warming dialogue. Now looking forward to Bani's reaction to Jai's sincerity.

Swathi

swathi dear ......... see u liked the previous chapter so much, i did not want to let u down, so i tried real hard and am glad u liked the end result.

yes this part was very close to my heart ....... don't worry bani's turn is coming up next.

Originally posted by: hanaane

Nope Sabj this is a joy tiers 😭

chalo i'll join u too 😭😭😭

It was too perfect sabj...... 👏 👏 👏

perfect thy other name is sabsj 😆

You really, really took me back somewhere.... 🤗 🤗🤗

i think i know where 😉

Now I am missing something..... 😭 😭 😭 😭

no dear u are not, it's intermission time, just go get some popcorn and a cola for urself.

I thought it will be a better chapter but honestly it turned out to be a remarkably one... and I am very whelmed with the communication between them... it's something really important.... 😭 😭 😛 😳

told u, it would be great after the break

You left me out no words to say... 😛 😳 😃 😳 😳

it's ok, i understand sign language too

You know what I am very good at baking if you would have leaved here I would have made for you my special home made Cookies... I feel like baking now, you made me do something... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

awwwwwwwww, i love cookies 😭 😭 eat some for me too

Immensely good..... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Dil khush kar diya tune aaj... 😃

aur sadaa hi karti rahungi

always luv..

hanaane...

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

Saby hun !! that was a remarkbly Excellent part !!! .... simplyyy perfecctt ! ... 👏 👏 👏

thanks sweety

i am ssooo gladd that they actuallyy communicatedd !! ..that what i alwayss say ...and i siad in Cordy's ff.. as well !! cozz if they communicate ..it gives them a chancee..to iron out their probelms..and misundertsandingsss !!

touche to that

awwwww !! Bani ..howw cud u even think abt divorcing such a caringgg husbandd like Jai !! awwww !! 😭 😭 andd soo protectivee ..andd noww i clealryy undertsandd .... who's ur inpiration !! 😉 😉 loollzz !! hopee u didnt mind me sayin taht ! 😉 😳

yes u guessed right ......... 100 points to u for that ..... he's the meaning in my life, he's my inspiration, he brings meaning to my life ....

well i am sooo glad ..atleastt .... Jai took a step...towardd correctin their mistakee ..andd i am ssooo gladd u didnt portrayy ... a egoistic charcter !! ....usuallyy people decied to do that to men ! 😉 😉 ....somee greatt dialoguess !!!! well all ! 👏

no ego, shego in my ff ........ waste of time and tears

i cant wait ...till all is soted..andd we get to readd.somee nicee ahheem ahheemm .....partss !! a nicee dinner and datee ! .andd Jai ..beingg extraa protectivee !! ...awwwww !! i am in INAGINATION WORLD !perhapss u should join me here ! loooolz ! 😉😳

sabar karo bache ........ sabar ka phal meetha hota hain

hunii !! that was a greatt updatee !!!
i hopee u got my pm..an actuallyy understood..what i was tryingg to implyy earlier....!!! 😃 😕

not to worry, i got ur pm, understood it and thank u so much for that

will be waiting for u updatee ..eagerllyyy !! ...pleasee updatee ASAP ...!!

I I captain ...... one update coming up

Thnksxxx !!
Shafaq ! 😛
👏

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

wow what a morning treat.... 😳
So bani ko finally thodi thodi akal aa rahi hai...good for her 😉

👏
🤗

Poo

haanji, morning special aap ke liye ........ and bani ko akal aa gayi hain, especially after all the gaalis u gave her in ur review 😆

Originally posted by: ovaltine

Nice part sabsj. I like your one-line quotes.
"More marriages might survive if the partners realized that sometimes the better comes after the worse."
My favourite. Sadly most give up and never wait.
Perhaps something we will see for JB in your ff and in the reel one as well.
👏

thanks ovaltine ........ i am a quoty person ........ wish ekta mayi got inspired by our ff's 😭

Originally posted by: jigna_07

😆
oh dude you crack me up with the humor!!!!!!!1
and i also thought it was funny you used Prachi!!!
that update was awesome!!!!!!!!!
jailoves compliments!
i love compliments!!
sooo many similarities!
bani dont ignore Jai!
continue soon!!!!

tu yahan humor padne aati hain ya mera updates ......... 😆