FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 60

Originally posted by: inavars

Sabs..how do you do it?! those last two parts were AMAZING!!! they were perfect!!! every line..every word!! 😃

i'm glad they're communicating...and admitting their love for each other 😉 i like the 4 brothers...love their names 😆 😆

and of course the humor 😆 😆 👏

everything i do, i do it for u .............. i love the 4 bros too and their names are amongst my favs .......... and yes yes the humour ..... complete package delivered to ur doorstep by sabsj the great .... on time ....... all the time 😆

Originally posted by: Garf

Hi Sabs,

It was definitely a perfect morning treat...just like Poo said...I reached office and the first thing I did was log into forum and read your latest chapter...I loved chapter 16, the communication between the both and the way Jai speaks to her and tells her how important she is to him...and rather than giving into temptation, decides to talk things first...chapter 16 was beautifully written...

thanks dear .......

I like the way the story flows and in chapter 17 how bani is slowly coming to her senses and realizing because of silly superficial reasons she was ready to let go of the most precious thing of her life...just can't wait to read the next chapter now... 👏 👏 👏

she better have come to her senses, this is my jai walia we are talking about ........ i hope the next chapter lives upto ur expectations

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

Yaar, its not fair. I always post after everything needed to be said about your fanfic has been said and in many different ways. I wish one of these days I can be first to comment and tell you that chapter 17 was brilliant and that the humor of the day had me rolling on the floor. Till, I get to do that I well keep just repeating people on how great your fanfic is.

-Rimpy

sorry rimpy ......... main kya karoon ....... thanks dear, whether u say it first of fifth or last ........ ur words will always mean the same to me ... i hope u r first next time though ......... guys are u listening

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

ok so am reading you ff now cuz i was TOLD to do it...apparently its good??? dunno yet am only on part 1! 😳 better be good OK!

baap re munna bhai on my thread ........ am scared as hell now ...... should i pack up and go ........ 😭

Originally posted by: lonely14

Amazing update saby!!!!!

thanks dear

I see bani is getting her senses back. So did she get a brain transplant or did her tube light lit finally?

the bhaloo gave her an ultimatum, either jai or me

so she left to prove to his parents something? ugh woman.

dhakkan, deserves a whack on her head

I am glad she realized her fault.

u bet, after all it's ur baby we are talking about

After all, who can stay away from my baby for long right?

absolutely right

Loved the humor of the day.

glad to make u smile.

Can't wait for the next part sabyyy,

me too 😆 do u wanna help me write it

Shina😳

Originally posted by: lonely14

u sent munnabhai after me to shut me down, so that u did not have to read and comment 😆

Originally posted by: nibbles

Awesome Sabs👏👏👏........Hope they use this time effectively!!😉

thank nibbles ........ don't worry they will ......... main hoo na

Originally posted by: Cordelia

awwwwwww how cute!!!! Jai came back for the wedding ring?!!! 😳 But as if he was going to admit that!!! 😆

BANI WAKE UP!! GET COMMUNICATING MY DEAR!! 😉 😆

excellent update as usual sabs, need i repeat myself?? every time you come out with a pice of superlative writing and leave us wanting more!!! please update soon!! 🤗

waking her up guruji, fear not ......... ek dum zor ka dhakka lagne waala hain

thanks for the compliments guruji ....... what would i do without u

Originally posted by: hanaane

No need to thank me dear you have earned it all by yourself... 😃

so sweet of u to say that

Sabj...... You made me do baking till late last night.... and all the members of my family thought that I was a thieve and they nearly beat me up.....they thought I was sleeping and I was actually lost into my own wold... yaar when I am doing baking I usually forget everything don't know why... I think I will have to do something about that otherwise I might end up beaten as a thieve... Good Lord everything is soo hilarouse now days... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

haila, what have i done ............ but i didn't get any cookies and i absolutely love them

You know what if you had leaved here I would have made for you my special home made Cookies... I only do that for the one's I most love yaar, tune dil mera jeet liya .....🤗 🤗 🤗

now u r making me feel really bad ....... waaaaaahhhhhhhh, i want cookies ......... i want cookies ........ waaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

It was indeed immensely good..... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Dil khush kar diya tune phir se... 😳 😛 😳

Dil cheeze kya hain, aap meri jaan lijiye, bus ek baar mujhe aapke yummy cookies deejiye 😆

Spiderwoman.... update soon.... 😉 😆

yes sir ....... spider's web is almost ready

always luv..

hanaane

Originally posted by: hanaane

It was too perfect sabj......👏 👏 👏

told u perfect was my other name

The time has again come to a live where the best of the past can once again be leaved forward....Yeh pyar ka mausam hai ise gavana nahi jaiye... 😳 😛 😳

nahin gavayenge

You left me out no words to say... 😛

i understand ur silence too

My spider woman..... nice name sabj...I hope you don't mind me calling you that... do you...?.... 😳 😆 😆 😆

not at all, makes me feel powerful

always luv..

hanaane...