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Posted: 18 years ago

Shafaq ! 😛 This is for u dear, in honour of your return ..... and for you too Cords, especially since you are gonna ensure that I return home soon instead of going back to the ICU 😆

People if any of you find this update too explicit or indecent, please do not continue reading it ....... and my apologies in advance for having crossed the so called line. anyway will not be updating anymore, so rest assured that no boundaries will be crossed hereafter.

Chapter 14

Jai followed Bani into the kitchen, trying not to watch the sway of her hips as she walked in front of him. The hot, familiar sight of her in a pair of jeans and pullover sweater had him cursing under his breath and summoning up a quick remedy for the situation he found himself in. The thought of being stranded for any amount of time with Bani wasn't good.

Jai stopped walking when Bani flung open the refrigerator. His six-pack of beer was still there, but little else. But then he wasn't studying the contents of the refrigerator as much as he was studying her. She was bent over, looking inside, but all he could think of was another time he had walked into this kitchen and found her in that same position, and wearing nothing more than his T-shirt that had barely covered her bottom. It hadn't taken much for him to go into a crazed fit of lust and make love to her right then and there.

"Thank goodness there are some eggs in here," said Bani, intruding on his heated thoughts down memory lane. "About half a dozen. And there's a loaf of bread that looks edible. There's some kind of meat in the freezer, but I'm not sure what it is, though. Looks like chicken."

She turned around and her pouty mouth tempted him to kiss it, devour it, and make her moan. He watched her sigh deeply and then she gave him a not-so-hopeful gaze and said, "Our rations don't look good, Jai. What are we going to do?"

Bani's breath caught when the corners of Jai's mouth tilted in an irresistible smile. She'd seen the look before. She knew that smile and she also recognized that bu*** pressing against his zipper. She frowned. "Don't even think about it, Jai" warned Bani.

Jai leaned back against the kitchen counter. Hell, he wanted to do more than think about it, he wanted to do it. But, of course, he would pretend he hadn't a clue as to what she was talking about.

"What are you talking about?" asked Jai innocently,

Bani's frown deepened. "Don't act all innocent with me. I know what you were thinking" she said.

A smile tugged deeper at Jai's lips knowing she probably did. There were some things a man couldn't hide and a h**d-on was one of them. He decided not to waste his time and hers pretending the chemistry between them was dead when they both knew it was still very much alive.

"Don't ask me to apologize. It's not my fault you have so much sex appeal and my desire for you is automatic, even when we're headed for divorce court" said Jai huskily.

"Because the distance between us is so great, my arms cannot reach you …. but because my love for you is just as great, my heart still does"

Jai saying the word "divorce" was a stark reminder that their life together, as they once knew it, would be over in twelve days.

"Let's get back to important matters, Jai, like our survival. On a positive note, we might be able to make do if we cut back on meals; which may be hard for you with your ferocious appetite" suggested Bani.

A wicked-sounding chuckle poured from his throat. "Which one?" he asked with a do die for smile playing on his lips.

Bani swallowed as her pulse pounded in response to Jai's question. She was quickly reminded, although she wished there was some way she could forget, that her husband…or soon-to-be-ex…did have two appetites. One was of a gastric nature and the other purely sexual. Thoughts of the purely s**ual one had intense heat radiating all through her. Jai had devoured every inch of her body in ways she could never ever forget, but didn't want to think about. Especially not now.

She placed her hands on her hips knowing he was baiting her; really doing a hell of a lot more than that. He was stirring up feelings inside of her that were making it hard for her to think straight.

"Get serious, Jai" said Bani agitatedly.

"I am." He then came to stand in front of her. "Did you bring anything with you?"

She lifted a brow. "Anything like what?"

"Stuff to snack on. You're good for that. How you do it without gaining a pound is beyond me."

She shrugged, refusing to tell him that she used to work it off with all those in-bed, out-of-bed exercises they used to do. If he hadn't noticed, then she wouldn't tell him that in six months without him in her bed she had gained five pounds.

"I might have a candy bar or two in the car" said Bani.

He smiled. "That's all?"

She rolled her eyes upward. "Okay, okay, I might have a couple of bags of chips, too." She decided not to mention the three boxes of Girl Scouts cookies that had been purchased that morning from a little girl standing outside the airport.

"I hadn't planned to spend the night here, Jai. I had merely thought I could quickly pack things, rest a bit and leave, so I did not bother to go shopping" said Bani with a crestfallen face.

He nodded. "Okay, I'll get the snacks from your car while I'm outside checking on some wood we'll need for the fire. The power is still on, but I can't see that lasting too much longer. I wish I would have gotten that generator fixed."

Her eyes widened in alarm. "You didn't?"

"No. So you might want to go around and gather up all the candles you can. And there should be a box of matches in one of these drawers."

"I … I captain" said Bani with a smirk on her face.

Jai grinned at her and turned to leave. He then turned back to look at her. She was nibbling on her bottom lip as he assumed she would be.

"And stop worrying. We're going to make it" said Jai, trying to pacify her.

When he walked out the room, Bani leaned back against the closed refrigerator thinking those were the exact words he'd said to her three years ago when he had asked her to marry him. Now she was worried because they didn't have a proven track record.

"Whenever you're in conflict with someone, there is one factor that can make the difference between damaging your relationship and deepening it. That factor is attitude."

Humour for the day

Untold secret of married life

A couple was celebrating their golden wedding anniversary. Their domestic tranquility had long been the talk of the town. "What a peaceful & loving couple!" A local newspaper reporter was inquiring as to the secret of their long and happy marriage.

"Well, it dates back to our honeymoon," explained the man. "We visited the Grand Canyon and took a trip down to the bottom on the canyon by horse. We hadn't gone too far when my wife's horse stumbled. My wife quietly said, 'That's once'."

"We proceeded a little further and the horse stumbled again. Once more my wife quietly said, 'That's twice.' "We hadn't gone a half-mile when the horse stumbled the third time. My wife quietly removed a revolver from her purse and shot the horse dead.

"I started an angry protest over her treatment to the horse, while I was shouting she looked at me, and quietly said, 'That's once'.

And we lived happily ever after."

Edited by sabsj - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
chapters 12 & 13 were awesome!
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I just lovee their fights!! 😆 😆
"Beast from the East" is my new best friend!🤗 He arrived just in time! 😉 Now friend don't leave until they forget all about the divorce and kiss n make up! 😳 😳 😃
aww they don't need words even now! how cuteee! 😳 😳
plzzz continue soon Sabs 😊

wow that was fast! thank you! 😊 gonna go read chapter 14 now! 😃
Edited by Vedo - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol.............i have a feeling something is going to happen.....


lol love the humor of the day..... 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sabs hailaaaaa!!!! 😳
this part has me blushing like crazy!! 😳 😃
Bani I have no idea how you can resist this man! 😕
the humor of the day has me lmao!! 😆 😆 😆
now picture that...me blushing like crazy and lmao!...my family thinks I've lost it!! 😆 😆
plzz do continue! 😊
Edited by Vedo - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

This is for you Poo ...... for your much awaited, awesome and hilarious reviews, which makes the updating even more fun. 😛

Chapter 13

Moving toward the kitchen to see if there was anything of hers in there, Bani happened to glance out of the window.

"Oh my God" she said, rushing over to the window. It was snowing already. No, it wasn't just snowing, there was a full-scale blizzard going on outside. What happened to the seventy-two hours warning? she wondered.

She heard Jai when he came out of the bedroom. He looked beyond her and out the window, uttering one hell of a curse word before quickly walking to the door, slinging it open and stepping outside.

In just that short period of time, everything was beginning to turn white. The last time they'd had a sudden snowstorm such as this had been a two years ago. It had been so bad the media had nicknamed it the "Beast from the East." 😆😆😆 Beast from the East??? Catchy! 😉

It seemed the beast was back and it had turned downright spiteful. Not only was it acting ugly outside, it had placed Bani in one hell of a predicament. She was stranded in a cabin in the Smoky Mountains with her soon-to-be-ex. Things couldn't get any more bizarre than that. bizaare? u find that bizaare? i call that luck!! 😃😳

Moments later when Jai stepped back into the cabin, slamming the door behind him, Bani could tell he was so mad he could barely breathe.

"What's wrong, Jai? You're being forced to cancel a date tonight?" she asked snidely. A part of her was still upset at the thought that he might have brought someone here a couple of weekends ago when they weren't officially divorced yet. The mere fact they had been separated for six months didn't count. She hadn't gone out with anyone. Indulging in a relationship with another man hadn't even crossed her mind.

Jai took a step toward Bani and she refused to back up. She was determined to maintain her ground and her composure, although the intense look in his eyes was causing crazy things to happen to her body, like it normally did whenever they were alone for any period of time. There may have been a number of things wrong with their marriage, but lack of sexual chemistry had never been one of them. & nbsp; & nbsp; 😳😳😳

"Do you know what this means?" he asked, his voice shaking in anger.

She tilted her head to one side. "Other than I'm being forced to remain here with you for a couple of hours, no, I don't know what it means" retorted Bani. hahah, i think that it's gonna be more than a couple of hours Hun, maybe a couple of days! 😉

She saw his hands ball into fists at his side and knew he was probably fighting the urge to strangle her. "We're not talking about hours, Bani. Try days. Haven't you been listening to the weather reports?" 😃😃😃

She glared at him. "Haven't you? I'm not here by myself."

"Yes, but I thought I could come up here and in thirty minutes max get what I came for and leave before the bad weather kicked in." well that's what you thought Jai Walia, apprently that's not what happened. 😆

Bani regretted that she hadn't been listening to the weather reports, at least not in detail. She'd known that a snowstorm was headed toward the mountains within seventy-two hours, which was why she'd thought like Jai that she had time to rush and get in, relax a bit and then head out before the nasty weather hit. Anything other than that, she was clueless. And what was he saying about them being up here for days instead of hours?

"Yes, I did listen to the weather reports, but evidently I missed something" said Bani.

Jai shook his head. "Evidently you missed a lot if you think this storm is going to blow over in a couple of hours. According to forecasters, what you see isn't the worst of it, and because of that unusual cold front hovering about in the east, it may last for days." ....and days and days! 😉😳😆

"To be happy with a man you must understand him a lot and love him a little.

To be happy with a woman you must love her a lot and not try to understand her at all."

Bani swallowed deeply. The thought of spending days alone in a cabin with Jai didn't sit well with her. "How many days are we talking about?" she asked, her voice clearly trembling.

"Try three or four" replied Jai with an intense look. haila! four days?! bani u lucky gal! 😳

Bani didn't want to try any at all, and as she continued to gaze into his eyes she saw a look of worry replace the anger in their dark depths. Then she knew what had him upset. They were always good in communicating with each other through their eyes …….. words were secondary.

"Do we have enough food and supplies up here to hold us for three or four days?" Bani asked, as she began to nervously gnaw on her lower lip. The magnitude of the situation they were in was slowly dawning on her, and when he didn't answer immediately she knew they were in trouble ………………… Big Big trouble.

Jai saw the panic that suddenly lined Bani's face. He wished he could say he didn't give a damn, but there was no way that he could. This woman would always matter to him whether she was married to him or not. From the moment he had seen her at the store that day and their gazes had connected, he had known then, as miraculous at it had seemed, and without a word spoken between them, that he was meant to love her. And for a while he had convinced her of that, but not anymore. Evidently, at some point during their marriage she began believing otherwise. ...why bani why?! 😭

"Jai?" called out Bani.

He rubbed his hand down his face, trying to get his thoughts together. Given the situation they were in, he knew honesty was foremost. But then he'd always been honest with her, however, he doubted she could say the same for herself.

"To answer your question, Bani, I'm not sure. Usually I keep the place well stocked of everything, but like I said earlier, I was here a couple of weekends ago, and I used a lot of the supplies then."

He refused to tell her that in a way it had been her fault. Receiving those divorce papers had driven him here, to wallow in self-pity, vent out his anger and drink his pain away with a bottle of Johnny Walker Black. ...hahha jai is such a devdas wannabe! 😆😆😆

"I guess we need to go check things out," he said, trying not to get as worried as she was beginning to look.

He followed her into the kitchen, trying not to watch the sway of her hips as she walked in front of him. The hot, familiar sight of her in a pair of jeans and pullover sweater had him cursing under his breath and summoning up a quick remedy for the situation he found himself in. The thought of being stranded for any amount of time with Bani wasn't good. 😳😳😳... have a good feeling about this!!!

"Women marry men hoping they will change. Men marry women hoping they will not. So each is inevitably disappointed."

Humour for the day

Good, bad and worse

Good: Your hubby and you agree, no more kids
Bad: You can't find your birth control pills
Worse: Your daughter borrowed them &n bsp; 😆😆😆 in most cases, that's true!!!!

Good: Your son studies a lot in his room
Bad: You find several po*n movies hidden there
Worse: You're in them &n bsp; 🤢😆

Good: Your husband understands fashion
Bad: He's a cross dresser
Worse: He looks better than you 😆😆😆 oh man, i would get a heart attack!

Good: Your son's finally maturing
Bad: He's involved with the woman next door
Worse: So are you

Good: You give the birds and bees talk to your daughter
Bad: She keeps interrupting
Worse: With corrections

Good: Your wife's not talking to you
Bad: She wants a divorce
Worse: She's a lawyer 😆

Good: The postman's early
Bad: He's wearing fatigues and carrying an AK47
Worse: You gave him nothing for Christmas

Hey Sabs!!! That was a Wonderful Part!!!! I offically love the "Beast from the East"!!! 😆😆😆 Perfect timing!😉 so eager to read the next part so please update it VERY soon!!!! 😃 Loved the humor for the day!!! 😆😆

love

Goddess

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Posted: 18 years ago
o00hh Sabyy hun ! i tell u one of thesee dayss..i wud be fainting..on my laptop....after i havee read ur updatee ! loolzz !! and uknoww my situation now !! i am like in the edgee of my chair... and... literlalyy leftt gaping ! Gosh !! howw do u manage to do taht hun !!!! 😉
wooww !! i just love when jai said to Bani..that they will be all ritee -- soo protective...love it when he syas taht to bani !!! awwww 😳 😳 😳 i hopee they dont get divorced inb the end !! hun !! 😭 😭 😭 no sad endingss !! i dont want to get emotional ! 😭 😉
awwww o00hh my !! jai and his tactis ! Gosh !! 2meaningss for everythingg ! ahheemm ahheemm !! i prefer teh decnt ones ! looolzz !! 😆
Thnksxxxx ssoo mcuh hun !!! 🤗 for dedicating this part for me !! i feel honoured !!! awww ! getting senti now ! 😭 😃 😃
hun !! i oldd u ..i am here !1 and teh updatess have to be ASAP ...loollzz !! agvee u my professional job post ..in my last comment !! hopee that helpss ! 😃
Breath takinglyy tremendous hun !!!
simplyy wooww !!!
Thnksx hun !
reallyy apprecite it !! updatee sooonn ...will be waiting eagerlyyy...too se what happens next !! .. and howw they manage to survive..in the cold...i hopee they havee a few balnkets ! 😆
Thnksx hun ! HUN !! i surelly gto what u r tryingg to implement here !! and oncee again hun !!! i just lovee ur quotess !!! thtss onee thing i literallyy die to read in ur ff !!! cant xpress it all ! 😃
Shafaq !! 😛
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Edited by $h@aq... - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ooooooooh part 14 was Awesome!!!! i hope there'll be romance between J&B soon!!!! but i'm loving the conflicts that they have with eachother! 😉 either way, i enjoy it! 😃

Goddess
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Posted: 18 years ago
haila cheliji, what a HOT part!! you have most of the forum highly jealous of Bani in your ff!!! 😳 😆

thanks so much for updating so quickly - i am slow and silly therefore it takes me that little bit longer!! 😳 😕 😉

I hope the "Beast from the East" sticks around long enough to patch Jai and Bani up nicely!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
very good
continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: divya_123

👏 wow good really good hehe i m happy now jai and bani gonna have to spent some days together 😳 hope in between all this they both gain their brains back and re think about their divorce decision especially bani madam you as u was the one sended them to jai 😕 wow once again fabulous part dear
amm do have a chance to read other part today itself iffffff
😕 ohh i would be more then happy yaar 😳 continue soon will wait for the next part 😳 😃 👏

hey divya, am glad that you are liking the fact that jb are gonna be stranded and forced to spend time together ........ am sure some good will come of it ........ bani needs to get her priorities right ......... let's see if she manages that.

i already updated dear, do take a look

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