FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 46

Originally posted by: indian_godess

Haila! 😳 😳 😳 now i really want this jai! he sounds so damn sexy! forget about Bani, jai! you've got me! 😉 😳 that was a wonderful part SABS!!!! i'm loving the conflicts between them! i just hope that there will be romance between them soon also! Can't wait for the next update!!!!

Goddess

sorry sweets, bahut badi line hai iss jai ke liye ...... will put ur name on the waiting list.

conflicts and romance ....... that is what jai and bani's relationship is all about. just wait and watch.

Originally posted by: fsam

Sabsj great part. Waiting for the storm outside and the one inside the house waiting to erupt.

thanks dear ......... storm has arrived and the fireworks have started.

Originally posted by: jigna_07

sabrina the women's guide was hillarious!!!
i literally have this huge smile on my face!!!
through your writing i am assuming you are a HILLARIOUS person!!!!!!
Cry is my favorite one!!!

man this jai!!!!!! 😳


awesome job 👏
continue soon!

u liked the guide ahhhhh ...... anything looked familiar.

yes dear i am a joker incarnate, love to make people laugh ......... cry is one weapon we women know how to use so damn well, no training required.

yes this jai ...... too good .......... only wish bani realised that

Originally posted by: putturani

Originally posted by: divya_123

oh wow !! how come i missed reading this part 😕

well just read it right now my my these two are something else just too much to handle 😆 😆 😆 as usually ok have to say AWESOME part dear superbly written and the dialogues were fab

continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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thanks divya ........... yes these two are something else only .......... its gonna get more hot to handle from now on, so hang on .......... have already posted updates so enjoy reading

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

yes Walia trademark to hai...we never give up so easily...😊...

I just read the latest part...loved it...

one review.... on its way.... 😳

Poo /QUOTE]

thank u, the way u write reviews, u might as well start a ff too.

Originally posted by: Cordelia

excellent update my dear!!! perfectly set up for the inevitable rekindling of their relationship - no phones, no work, no heating!! 😉 😆

or are you going to take us down a different path... Jai and Bani will spend the snowstorm fighting with each other until they are both eventually eaten by bears!! 😲 😆

update soon hun - you didn't comment for me, but i did for you - i hope you feel guilty cheliji!! 😒 😛

i didn't make u cry ......... u did, i was so upset with peabrain and jw ..... couldn't comment, if i did, it would be too ballistic ........... next part hopefully will have me singing ur praises 😆

Originally posted by: sabsj

i didn't make u cry ......... u did, i was so upset with peabrain and jw ..... couldn't comment, if i did, it would be too ballistic ........... next part hopefully will have me singing ur praises 😆